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The Burden of Control – Chapter 10
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Bette: I’ll try.
Dr. Harris: Are we doing ok?
Bette: We? Well I’m just
sitting here. I hope YOU’RE doing ok
Dr Harris: (laughs) Yes,
Bette. Everything is going the way it should. Don’t worry, I’ve done many of
these procedures and haven’t lost a patient doing one yet.
Dr. Harris picked up the
hollowed needle and gently inserted it into Bette’s back, directing it to
pierce the posterior Illium, the back of the flared end of her hip bone. The needle is somewhat wider than the one
used for the aspiration and she is forced to exert a bit more pressure. Bette inhaled sharply as she experienced a
brief, but intense pain shooting from her back down her legs.
Dr. Harris: Pain?
Bette: Yes. Isis it supposed
to hurt?
Dr. Harris: Everyone is
different. Some feel more pain than others. There’s really no way to anesthetize
inside the bone, so it’s really a matter of pain tolerance. (pauses) Ok, the
needle is in position. I’m going to collect the sample now. It shouldn’t take
more than a minute.
Dr. Harris carefully
maneuvers the needle, conscious of the discomfort that the action is causing
her patient. Satisfied that she has obtained a large enough sample for
analysis, Dr. Harris slowly withdraws the needle and places pressure over the
ejection site. After the bleeding slows,
she carefully bandages the area and lifts the waistband of Bette’s underwear
back into position. Giving Bette a brief squeeze on the arm to let her know
that the procedure was complete, she walks around the table.
Dr. Harris: Ok, Bette. I was
able to successfully aspirate and biopsy the marrow from your hip. I’ll need
you to lay here for the next ten minutes as standard procedure. (pauses) You
might feel some pain or discomfort in and around the area for the next few
days. This is perfectly normal and you can take Advil or Motrin as needed. If you
experience any swelling after the next 48 hours, give my office a call. While
allergic reactions are rare, they do occur and I’d like to see you as soon as
possible if you feel that you’re having one.
The area is likely to bruise, so don’t be too alarmed tomorrow if you
wake up and a good portion of your back is black and blue. They tend to last a
while as well. (pauses) Do you have any questions for me?
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WTF!!! Ok maybe you don’t understand the rules of fan fic.
Rule #1 you don’t leave us with a cliffy when you go on vacation!!
Rule #2 writers don’t go on vacations
Your lucky I don’t know where your going. LMAO
Bette can’t have cancer. She has had enough trouble in her life. the last year. Just putting up with Helena is like living in hell. We know that something is wrong with Bette, but make it simple to cure.. One of the best on the site right now.
LMAO @ CR00..
Ok You have to really write again before i tell CR00 where you’re going.. and as i told you I HATE CLIF HANGERS..
But really loved how you wrote the whole hug thing.. at least you gave me a reason not to not like Tina..
PLZ PLZ PLZ keep Bette away from Cancer.. the woman suffered enough..
Oh no you DIDN’T just leave us hangin’ like that!!! Please come back soon and make me feel better quick! I feel like throwing up all over Helena right now.
TBC ? Most definitely!! And please post asap, you can´t leave us hanging in suspense – aching to find out what´s wrong with Bette. No matter what it´s my hope that the gang and Tina will get her through it. Because withour our friends and family we´re are nothing. We need their love, affection and support to manage the turmoil we meet in our lives today. So please let Tina drop Helacious and help Bette through.
I’ve been lurking here for a very long time. I hope all is well with you and hope you get back to this story soon! These cliff hangers are killers.
You are so bad at leaving us on this cliff hanger, please post the new chapter soon, so Bette has cancer, I wonder whether she will tell Tina or even see her again, as Bette will not want to be a burden to Tina. Please post your new chapter soon.
WHOA! It’s herts to read this WHOA! Hey you make Me cry sniff sniff if Bette has a cancer that’s not really good Please make it better Please Thanks Please continue I Love the way you write it’s Great.
so Bette has cancer?..ggezz i cant take this to painfull..see two people that meant to be together like this and now Bette is sick and alone..and worse with Helena as a shadow..plase please make her good.. i am sad :o(
I’m really enjoying this story. Can’t wait for your next post.
OMG!!!! You can’t just leave us hanging!!!! Great chapter, please end our misery and post soon.
Bette better not have Cancer! With all that she and Tina have been through; I mean DAMN! Isnt HellNO Cancer enough?
tibette my computer just crash on me,so i didnt get the chance to comment on your last chapter. i am so happy that you’re not writing bette they way i.c.wrote her. she took almost all of the thing i like most about her away. her strengh,her playful side and turn her into something pitiful.i hope you dont do this our bette in your story. i like another writer on this board [LASTKID] you and she both have the same writing style. tibette dont worry about people not reading this story because its one of the best written story on this board. they have a neww way of keeping count of the readers now. if i was to read this chapter 2 or even 6 times, it would still only count as 1 time. it seem if you go over at least 200 her story has been read by plenty of people. if bette do or dont have cancer, just please let her talk to tina about it. ooo i forgot to say ‘great chapter.
SHIT, YOU ARE SO BAD …PLEASE POST SOMETIME THIS WEEKEND…GREAT JOB..
I just finished all the chapters and I get this cliffhanger. UGH..please post soon
WHOA!!!!!!!!WHOA!!!!!!!!! fell of my chair post today I need the test results!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know what you mean about going back to stories I do that all the time. What a place to leave it – I guess Bette has cancer then – question is how bad. Great story. More please and quick!
K
Well damn, great chapter, can’t wait for the next one.
Its my first comment here but please start writing again i cant wait what happend to Bette.Iam from Germany and these Site is the only Dope for a Bette and Tina Adicct.
This is sad and Bette have a cancer!