LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 11, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    The Burden of Control – Chapter 14

    Story written on January 31, 2006 by tibette99.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    37 votes, average: 3.68 out of 537 votes, average: 3.68 out of 537 votes, average: 3.68 out of 537 votes, average: 3.68 out of 537 votes, average: 3.68 out of 5 (37 votes, average: 3.68 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): N/A
    Number of Comments: 14
    Words: 9376
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=59350
    Author Notes:

    Echo Park…revelations and questions.
    Nothing is what it seems…

    Tina (quietly): I felt it too.

    Bette: But as far as
    I knew you were involved with an important client of mineand very much
    straight.

    Tina: I never thought of myself as anything other than
    straight because I never felt attracted to womenuntil now.

    Bette: Until now?

    Tina: (smiles and takes Bette’s hand) Very much ‘until
    now’. I cared for Eric deeply. We were
    together for a long time and I loved him. (pauses) But I wasn’t ‘in love’ with
    him. I didn’t know how much longer we
    were going to be together, but I knew deep down that he wasn’t ‘the one’. But he offered me love, friendship and
    security and I found it hard to let go of that.

    Bette: Then why did you?

    Tina: Because not too
    long ago he took me to an art show and I met this wonderful gallery owner who
    opened my eyes to more than just art.
    When I went home that nightI couldn’t stop thinking about you. I was confusedand absolutely terrified about
    the feelings you invoked in me. And when
    you called me the next day about my earring, I knew I had to see for myself

    Bette: See what?

    Tina: To see if these feeling were real.

    Bette: So you came to my office.

    Tina takes Bette’s
    other hand in hers

    Tina: And you kissed me.

    Bette: (smiles) I did.

    Tina: And I knew.

    Bette: (softly) Knew what?

    Tina: That everything felt(smiles) right.

    Bette looks down at
    their joined hands

    Tina: Can I ask you another question?

    Bette: (smiles)Of course.

    Tina: Will you kiss me again?

    Bette: Here and now (she
    looks around. There are a few people walking along the trail around the lake)
    (gently)     Are you sure? I don’t want you to feel uncomforta.

    Bette’s protest is cutoff
    as Tina leans forward and kisses her. It’s a gentle kiss, their lips barely
    touching, but the emotion behind it nearly drives Bette to her knees. They
    slowly, reluctantly break apart, maintaining eye contact as Tina brings her
    hand up and tucks a strand of loose hair behind Bette’s ear.

    Page 9 of 11« First‹ Previous7891011Next ›Last »
    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    2. missed your writing glad you’ve written another chapter–have to agree on season 3-i watch then get very mad at the writers and ic for what they are doing to b & t and the rest of the gang if it wasn’t for fan fic keeping to the real chatacters from s1 i’d be very depressed–i hope no one else breaks them up or kills them off write soon

    3. missed your writing glad you’ve written another chapter–have to agree on season 3-i watch then get very mad at the writers and ic for what they are doing to b & t and the rest of the gang if it wasn’t for fan fic keeping to the real chatacters from s1 i’d be very depressed–i hope no one else breaks them up or kills them off write soon

    4. tibette—glad to see you back. I have missed this story. Don’t let S3 get you too down. I am supporting the show and I think I am actually coming to terms with B & T. I still have hope that they will find each other again…and I always have authors like you…who will make us happy in the end. please post soon.

    6. You’ve returned! Thanks for continuing the story, even if you were nudged into doing so. This chapter was definitely worth it. I do hope we won’t have to wait another couple of months before the next post. :-)

    7. Don’t get discouraged by season 3 at this point there is nothing we can do to change it but you have a story you want to write continue on in the direction you intended and give us readers something to look forward too!!!!

    11. yay im glad you are back!. Nice chapter..maybe Tina’s dream was a way to get her attention to Bette…she soo needs T right now. I hope she tells T about her illness because although the girls will be there for her..who she really wants by her side is Tina ;) Post soon!.

    12. So glad you posted really missed this story. Tina’s dream was so loving and full of promise, and to “wake up” realizing it was only a dream…UGHH. Tina needs to talk to Bette. She needs to tell her about the baby. Don’t get discouraged about S3, who knows where all this drama is going to lead. Please update soon and thanks for the story.

    Leave a Reply