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The Burden of Control – Chapter 9
Tina: I was afraid to. I didn’t really know how you
felt about out relationship and I didn’t know what you’d say to me.
Bette: HonestlyI would have probably told you to
stay.
Tina: Youyou would?
Bette: The morning after we met, when you came to my
office to pick up your earring and we kissedI knew. I knew that what we had
was different than anything I ever had with anyone else. I didn’t realize it
just thenbut I fell for you that day. I was in love with you. I would have
told you that by the end of that first week, but I was afraid of how you’d
react.
Tina looks up into Bette’s eyes and sees the genuine
honesty in her words. The love that they had went beyond anything imaginable.
Tina sighs. Had. Things were
different now. Somewhere along the way, their relationship broke down. Bette
violated Tina’s love and trust by having an affair. Just the thought what Bette did brought
feelings of anger and disappointment to the forefront. Bette notices the change
in Tina’s expression.
Bette: (confused) Whatwhat’s wrong?
Tina: (quietly) Did you love her?
Bette: (shocked) Love? (quickly) No, God no Tina. How
could
Tina: (angry) Did you tell her that you loved her?
Bette: Never, I swear on my life Tina. I never told
her because I never felt that way towards her. Never.
Tina: Then why?
Bette: (looking around) Tina maybe we should go and
Tina: (interrupts) No, you said that I could ask you
anything. I’m asking you why you would throw away all the years we had together
for a fling.
Bette: Tina
Tina: Didn’t I please you anymore?
Bette: (surprised) Of course you did. It had nothing
to do with that.
Tina: Didn’t it? I mean why else would you look
outside your marriage for *****. It was
me, wasn’t it?
Bette: Not everything is about you, Tina.
Tina: (angry) What’s THAT supposed to mean?
Bette: It meanslook I didn’t intend for it to come
out the way it sounded. I’m just saying that I was the only one at fault. It
was ME. I did this.
Tina: But why?
Bette: I wish I knew. I don’t know. Youyou were away
with the girls and I was working with her
Tina: So whatit was a matter of convenience then that
I was away.
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(43 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
Dame girl that’s not right to end it like that,post real soon. I hate Helena and how can Tina feel safe with her? Great chapter.
Your killing me!!!! Don’t delay the truth any longer on both their parts the hurt will only contintue
“Hello Darling”… Uh oh… better break out the Xanax.
OMG! F*** It’s Helena I just guess WHOA! this is getting interesting WHOA! Hey thanks for posted again I’m been waiting for your Beautiful Amazing Story LOL! I Love it Please continue post soon.
No, no, no you didn’t!!!!!!!!!
NO YOU DIDN’T TAKE ME TO THE EDGE OF MY SEAT AND JUST LEAVE ME THERE!
I want the rest of this chapter, and I want it RIGHT NOW, without Helena F***ing Peabody appearing in it!
I MEAN IT!
I just started reading this story. Very good! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. With any luck, HellNo wont spend much time in it. That woman is a walking nightmare!
Please don’t let Hellacious take part in this nice conversation.
The hesitation, the heart-tugging emotions: Great chapter.
oh please give me a break..seriously i dont know how much my heart can take..and about Helena no comment cuz she dosent able ot love anyone and Tina will sacrifice her happiness for her? what Bette did was very serious but if love still remain Tina should try to forgive… ok great chapter dont take so long to post your killing me!!!!
Hmm. Very interesting. Like how Bette put work aside for Tina, finally. Hopefully Tina will tell Helena to buzz off cos she’s talking to Bette. Let Tina be the one to tell her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
UUUUUURRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH
Helena NOT NOW, COME BACK LATER.. you’re such a tease, =( me no like you alot at the moment,, i hate cliff hangers..
but gotta admitt, i loved this chapter.. =D
tibette…why??? Okay, post soon can’t wait. If only Helena could just go away.
What the fuck why Helena always in the most importing time of Bette and Tina!