Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
The Crown Rests 5
“No, I’m fine really; I’ll think I’ll go in for a dip. Cool off you know.” With that Bette turned and due to her moist discomfort walked awkwardly towards the pool not seeing the flip flops Shane had left at the edge of the pool and so this was how Bette tripped and fell into the water with a tremendous splash.
Tina was left alone on the deck with her thoughts; Bette was behaving very strangely around her all of a sudden it was like she didn’t want to be near Tina. But she was definitely staring at my *****. Which is good, right? She called out too late to alert Bette to the flip-flops. The loud splash brought Tina running to the edge of the pool when after about 30 seconds Bette didn’t surface Tina’s mirth turned to worry. She couldn’t see clearly in to the pool because of the glare caused by the late evening sun.
“Shane, Shane can you see her?”
Shane who had witnessed the belly flop ‘dive’ was at the shallow end of the pool holding her sides, which were aching with laughter shook her head no.
Just when Tina thought she better jump in and rescue Bette she felt two strong hands grasp her ankles and pull her in to the pool in much the same style that Bette had entered the water. Bette was leaning back treading water waiting for Tina to surface. When Tina emerged Bette said in a very stern voice, “So you think it’s amusing to laugh at my misfortune do you Tina?”
Tina shook her head like a shaggy dog, “I suppose Bette that as your junior I’m obliged to follow where you lead even if it does mean making a fool of myself!”
By this time all three of them were sitting on the steps at the shallow end laughing uncontrollably. Bette’s mobile started ringing “Oh my Porter you have met your match!” Shane then turned to Tina and said quietly “You are going to be so good for her.” And with that Shane made her way to the pool house to shower off and get dressed.
Tina stretched out on the lounger beside the pool basking in the last of the evening sun.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



(38 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
LOve this story please continue to post often!!
Great story, love the way it is going, please post a new chapter soon.
I concur with the previous two posters—make it soon!
Yes Tina don’t let it end. stay.Love this British version of our girls.
Alright that’s all Bette and Tina want to do all day is a kiss. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Wow, will they? I guess no. It may be too fast to the English? hoho
Hey I think I found another TiBette story to follow. Looks like it is just starting to get really good. pls post soon.
it was great…nice move in the end bette, i hope tina can stay longer LOL
nice really nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice move Porter. Can’t wait for the next post.
essex..how could you just leave us hanging like that. UGH! I sure hope you post soon.
Yes finally, I was begining to think that Bette would let the opportunity pass her. Great story. thanks
Ooooh dont let us hang like that – loved this chapter and the “It’s always so satisfying when things taste as good as they look” comment. I dont think Tina is thinking food :o))
wow – *waves at J, fergz and b&tf* what motely assortment.essex – sorry imissed you yesterday, was very busy. glad i found you. this was just fun, loved the details, the banter. lol@bette not being able to walk. very good. thanks.
That was great! I kept waiting for it to happen. I actually gasped out loud when it did.
Yeah Baby! I really like this story & I understand most of the Barrister stuff from watching English mysteries on TV. Thanks for taking the time.
yeah!!!keep the story rolling please