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    The Elevator

    Story written on February 23, 2008 by Jobadge.
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    Explicit Spoilers for Episode 9. Some times when the physical and emotional wound together so tightly that she consumed my every breath.

     

    “You are so bad…” I told her, but I liked her being bad, I liked the fact that she was already undressing me with her eyes.

     

    “So bad that you wanna get out of this…, hot…, sweaty…, elevator in a hurry…”

     

    “You know the power will come on in a minute and if those doors suddenly opened and you were…”

     

    “Fucking you…?”

     

    I gave a slow chuckle, she was straight to the point…, but I had an urge…, she was making it an irresistible urge that made me want to fuck her…, here…, now…

     

    “Come here…” I told her, in a quiet voice, but one I knew would allow her to know that I wouldn’t take no for an answer.

     

    “What if the doors open…?”

     

    “Then I guess they’re in the right building to have that therapy they might need when they see me fucking you…”

     

    I saw the intake of breath she took, I saw the heavy breaths in her chest, I saw the beads of perspiration on her skin.  I watched a droplet travel slowly the length of her neck. I wanted to taste her skin…, the saltiness of her perspiration as it travelled between her breasts.

     

    She slowly moved towards me on her hands and knees, like a prowling animal circling her prey and I knew that there would be no fighting, I just wanted her and I wanted her now.

     

    She straddled my lap, I moved her dress up her legs slightly as she adjusted herself, she knelt up as my hands touched the skin on her thighs.

     

    I knew there was no going back as my eyes feasted on the cleavage in front of me, my hands ran along her skin, the clamminess added to the sensual feel of her skin, I allowed my fingers to travel around the back of her legs, touching the sensitive area at the base of her cheeks, that irresistible crease on her body that drove me to distraction.

     

    Her hands were in my hair as she pulled my head towards her breasts, my nose nestled between the swell of the roundness, I parted my lips and allowed my tongue to trace the valley between.

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    1. Mate, that was …..*** THUD *** You write the NC17’s with such taste and class. There is a line between writing smut and writing the stuff that says it all. I was surprised reading the whole elevator spoilers, as I have a fic I had developed last year and am working through now, that surround them being stuck in an elevator! So much for timing eh? LOL! ANYWAY….before I make this long winded (s-h-h-h-h-hhhh), I think it was once again a brilliant craft. There is such a difference in making love with someone that you love deeply, and having sex. This is written with the depth of that love in mind, and it manifests in the image you painted for us the readers. Oh…and this line “I moved her thong to one side, the skimpy material making me wonder whether it was even worth her putting underwear on at all.” That is SO true, sometimes it isn’t worth it at all. LOL! Thanks Jo, and get some sleep.

    4. Thanks for upping my anticipation of the actual scene on my screen. This was really beautiful. It wasn’t some sex scene. It was really about the connection, the coming home feeling, the way that Tina makes Bette feel something she doesn’t for any other human being.. and that is what made this scene hot. Thanks.

    6. oh Jobadge, that as great! wow, that was hot!! I hope episode 9 is as entertaining. I could see it so clearly in my mind as I read it. As always, you are fantastic!

    9. Sweet Jesus!…That was Goddamn HOT!…The heat wasnt only in the elevator…my poor screen is puffing out smoke here!.lol..Im thinking a Marlboro Moment???.or a cold shower!lol..Brillent as always.

    10. That was an incredible chapter of love, and lust. They can not seem to get enough of each other. I hope that Dan can help them work through what is keeping them apart.

    11. Rusty is definitely NOT a word I would ever tie to anything that you write. You are one of the few writers able to emulate the love between B&T and the chemistry that LH & JB ooze on screen. Nobody does it better Jo!

    16. Wow you have left nothing for us to say, you always rise above anything and everything that we read or feel, my God it should have been (***NC17) it really touched my heart, the love that they share is too powerful to be denied or neglected, thank you for this amazing chapter. You are one of the best.with all my love

    22. Ms Jo, if you thought you were a bit rusty, I don’t think my heart could stand it if you were in top form. Honey, there is nothing rusty about your writing, and it lacks nothing. What a way to wake up on sunday morning with the anticipation of tonght’s episode. Always love to read your stories, no one can write our girls quite like you do. You wirte them with such love, tenderness, passion and respect for each other that is it incomparable, you never leave doubt that that the love they feel for each other isall encompassing and only, only for the other. There is no other love like theirs and everyone can see it and feel and wish for it for themselves. Thank you for being such a wonderful writer and sharing your love for our girls.

    23. Hello Jo, Great to have this new and wonderful addition from you. I truly adore your writing. The heat you generate with your loquacious and effusive words steamed up my screen and left me feeling a little moist myself. Wow wee!! Gal you hit the nail firmly on the head as Bette and Tina consummated their love without the discussion. Now I would love your take on their processing with Dan. These gals do need to talk things out to balance the mind and spirit with the perfection that their physical love brings. More puh-lease. Many, many thanks for making today red-hot. Your Loyal Fan.

    24. SEEE! You kno, that is exactly how I imagined it, when I heard about some elevator scene!, That scene best be HOT!, coz in Elevators, Shii happens! omg, omg, omg, omg, omg, lol

    26. Yep…. Shes done it again… Its jobadgtified… ;) We’ll all be wacthing with this in mind, truely amazing, my friend! As has been said, the depths of the love are indeed palpable through your style, and it nearly made this molly cry… Thanks!hugshake!

    27. too stunned to comment the first time around that i read this….as we get closer to 509, thought i’d build up my anticipation even more by reading this….am now beginning to think that was a very “bad” idea – this was great, i can honestly say you are one of few writers that i will thank for leaving me sexually frustrated!! ;)

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