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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Twenty Five

    Story written on January 4, 2007 by citygirl75.
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    “It’s really cold.” said Angelica as she ran her hand across the top of the water.

    “It’s a big ocean, there’s a lot of water to get warm.” replied Tina, not being really sure of what to say.

    “Mom said you needed some time away, and that when you came back you would be much better.” said Angelica, her question tearing at Tina’s heart.

    “That’s the plan, to get so much better that I can be the mother that you deserve.”

    “I don’t understand why you had to go away for so long?”

    “You are so your mother’s daughter.” said Tina, shaking her head.

    “What do you mean?”

    “Your mother has a tendency to get straight to the point and I can tell that you have that trait as well.”

    “Mom says it’s better to be honest.”

    “It is Angel, so much better. It’s hard for me to tell you why I had to be away for so long, and I hope that one day I will understand so that I can tell you but for now, please believe me when I say that I hated every moment that I was away from you.”

    “Mom told me that we didn’t have to see each to know that we still loved each other.”

    “That’s right. Every day, when I thought of you, I remembered how much I loved you, and how I wanted to make my way back to you, so that I could take care of you.”

    “Do you still love me now?”

    “More than ever.” replied Tina, feeling the tears starting to fall again at her daughter’s inquiry.

    “Good, because I love you.”

    “You have no idea how much it means to me to hear you say that.”

    Tina took Angelica in her arms again. The knowledge that she was going to be able to do this again and again made her heart swell with love.

    “I’m feeling a little left out.” said a voice that came up from behind them.

    Angelica moved from Tina to Bette so that she could give her other mother a hug. Tina was amazed by how much they looked like each other. They really were mother and daughter. She shook her head, thinking back to the crazy notion that she ever thought that she could ever split them up. She could see now how inseparable they were. She watched as Angelica let go of Bette so that she could go back to concentrating on the waves that were coming in.

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    1. Perfect, absolutly perfect. Tina admitting she still has issues to deal with, Bette letting her know that no matter what she’s there. Angelica well she’s a bit of both of them, and apparantly the best part. Hopefully they take it nice and slow and work on becoming the family they should be.

    2. Thanks for posting again so soon. What a wonderful surprise! The expressions you convey in your writing just makes every post a pleasure to read. Thanks so much for writing! (PPS)

    3. Yippee! Tina found her brain! And it’s not completely pickled! The goddess of romance smiles upon us all. And given that, I have to refute Madcapper (sorry, Madcapper) but this sea of love shall cure the girl child. And someday, no doubt, if she is her mothers’ daughter, she’ll get wet. But that’s another story.

    6. Bette is so loveable and sweet in this story, Having Angie all this time has done her a world of good. Maybe between, Angie Helena and Bette they can get the loveable caring Tina back. Angie and Bette needs her. thanks

    13. Beautiful, Tina reuniting with friends and family. I’m so glad she seems to be getting better after all this pain! Love your writing, thank you.

    16. Wow, your Bette is incredible… so calm, warm, forgiving, and loving. No wonder Tina is second-guessing her choices… Bette must have been quite the mother to Angel for her not to carry any blame towards Tina. Angel does take after Bette in that way… Thank you, citygirl… for your beautiful writing.

    17. Sounds like a start to a new beginning (as some form of a family). Now Tina just has to stick with staying sober even if she falls off the wagon a time or two.

    21. Nicely written, very poignant reunion . She’s got a support system all around her, now Tina needs to be able to be strong enough to stay on the wagon. Thanks for posting another chapter so soon.

    25. Holy cow, that was awesome! This story has come full circle and keeps getting better.I don’t think I have come as close to shedding tears as I have on this reunion. Bette is amazing. I don’t think I could be half as understanding as she is! Thank you for this story!PPS

    26. Once again it’s so good I can’t wait for me. I have a feeling Angelica’s need for therapy will come later, those pesky teen years. It’s good to see Tina taking responsibility.

    27. Happy New to C-gal75, I do apologize for lurking lately but now that the festive season is over I am catching up with all these wondrous stories. This is a brilliant example of how connect Bette and Tina are; even when they are apart there is a longing between them. They may choose to ignore it but it will eat away at them until they re-unite. You have really captured the sense that Tina is now ready to take on her demons and defeat them from herself. Then she can look towards bonding with her daughter and re-igniting the flame of her life with Bette. What makes this tale stand out is the level of depth you have givem the past; all those mistakes and missed opportunities have brought them all to this time. I want to see it work. Thank you so much for these magical words. Your Loyal Fan.

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