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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Two

    Story written on November 2, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    This wasn’t where she belonged.

    On the drive back to the gallery Tina started to think about the consequences of her actions. She was still in a relationship with Eric and yet she had purposely left something behind so that Bette would call her, plus the small fact that Bette was a woman. Was she really ready for that? Did she really know what she wanted? There was only one way to find out.

    As Tina pulled up in front of the gallery she took a deep breath in. Most of the lights had been turned off but she could still discern movement from within the building. Tina moved closer to the front door just as Bette appeared from the distance. Again there was that small intake of breath and the speeding up of her heart rate. She had never felt like that in anyone presence before. It was too much to take in.

    “I’m glad you came back.” said Bette as she opened the door.

    “So am I.” replied Tina, stating the truth.

    Tina watched as Bette motioned that she should follow her back to her office. Tina studied the way that Bette’s hips moved as she walked. How there was something graceful, almost sensual about the way that she moved. Then Tina’s eyes were attracted to something else. The way that Bette’s clothes fitted her. The way that they revealed her curves and as Tina’s eyes moved down she caught herself staring at Bette’s ass. She silently laughed at herself. Never did she imagine that she would ever find herself staring at another woman’s ass and here she was blatantly doing it, not even trying to hide it.

    Tina kept looking as Bette rounded her desk to retrieve an envelope from her desk draw. She noticed Bette’s long fingers as she deftly opened the envelope. She now had Tina’s earring in the palm of her hand.

    “I could have sworn I saw you put this back on.” smiled Bette.

    Before Tina could answer she felt Bette hold onto her hand and move dangerously close to her. So close she could smell Bette’s perfume. Then she felt her. Bette’s lips were on hers, so soft and yet a hint of insistence that made Tina go slightly weak at the knees. When Bette pulled back she smiled at Tina, noticing the blush that had graced Tina’s face. Tina took the earring in her hand but couldn’t think of anything to say. Maybe it was right that she didn’t say anything, nothing seemed good enough to articulate the conundrum of emotions that she was feeling.

    “Thank you for finding my earring.” said Tina, finally finding her voice.

    “Thank you for coming here so soon.”

    “I should go, it’s getting late. Maybe we’ll talk tomorrow?”

    “I would like that very much.” said Bette hoping that she hadn’t scared Tina away.

    As Tina walked back to her car she knew that she had just gone through something that was going to change her life forever. Now all she had to do was figure out how all the pieces were going to fit together.

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    1. I think every other interpretation I’ve read of their beginning had me hating Eric. Honestly, for once it’s kinda nice to just seem him as a nice guy who gets kinda screwed over. So realistic. Need I mention, great as always?

    2. How can you not love the story of the first meeting. Is Tina telling someone the story, or are just visiting the events that brought her to where she is now?

    4. I absolutely agree with azmama’s comment. Just when i think that all the B & T beginning stories have been done, along comes this story. Wonderfully written ! PPS.

    6. Gotta agree with the others this is one of the best beginnings I’ve read. Can’t wait to read about the journey to the melancholy of Chapter 1. Thanks!

    7. I loved this chapter of how B&T met. What bothers me though is Tina now realizing that she has lost the most important thing in her life and she has hit rock bottom (coming from reading the first chapter)? And is there any chance of Bette and Tina talking out all of their problems and starting over?

    13. Wow, the best earring scene I’ve ever read! You had me liking Eric for a split second! Glad that didn’t last! So are we going to recall everything up to the point of Tina in the bar?? Hope so. Great story mate!

    14. CG…This is so good. The talent and imagination that one can find in this group of fanfic writers never ceases to amaze me. When I think how can another B & T beginning be novel, along comes your story. How delicious!

    16. ok, continue from there…forget the whole bar, tears etc…keep writing from there, pls…Your writing just sucks me in, grabs me and won’t let go…

    17. Nice!I had a momentary brain fart when I thought the bartender was Eric, but then I realized “wait the bartender was a woman”!lol You write so well and Jobadge is right one of the best earring scene! Thanks and Post soon!

    18. Amazing CG. Now I’m really,really,intruiged with this story. I really need to know how Tina got in that state she was in last chapter. Please post as soon as possible.

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