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The Gift
“What makes you think that?” Kit asked fearing the answer but also knowing she needed to hear it”
“The other night she came home all nervous and frazzled”
“So….” Kit said a little relieved thinking Tina was getting a little insecure due to Bette’s obvious distance which had become noticeable to everyone.
Tina looked up angry thinking Kit was assuming this was just part of her fragile imagination. “I know what I saw …” she said clamping down on her anger.
“I know Bette” Kit said “She loves you, she would never do something like this”
“You know her” Tina said furiously trying to keep her voice down “Do you know what she looks like after a good fuck?”
That caught Kit off guard “I…I….” She stuttered really not knowing what to say to that.
“I thought so… “ Tina said almost victorious then she remembered what they were talking about as the pain returned full force. She felt physically ill, her skin ran cold, her stomach flopped, her head hurt. She remembered the good times Bette’s smiling face when Tina knew she was the cause of that smile and the way her brown eyes would sparkle with happiness as Bette would made love to her and softly whisper in her ear after an intense orgasm “I love you, Tee”
Those days were like ancient history to Tina, the part that hurt the most was Bette no longer called her Tee. “I’m no longer her, Tee” She whispered through her tears.
At that moment Kit wished Bette was around so she beat the living daylights out of her for putting Tina through this.
“I know, Kit……… after making love her eyes would sparkle and she’d get this goofy grin on her face” she stopped as she tried to swallow the unbearable lump in her throat “The other night when she came home…… her eyes were sparkling, so…something I had not seen or been the cause of for a very long time. She doesn’t love me anymore”
With that Tina burst into tears Kit got up from seat and did her best to comfort the blonde, Kit also had tears in her eyes. Tina bared her soul right there the pain of losing her baby and her wife in such a short period of time. “I just want them back” she wailed. Kit looked around noticing Tina’s cries were causing a lot of attention, Kit saw the sympathetic eyes cast at Tina some of the customers even had tears in their own eyes.
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(22 votes, average: 4.09 out of 5)
Ouch my heart hurts
Wow that was fucking intense. I pretty much cried.
God, that hurt so much. If this isn’t a one-off, let Maxine send her back, she has learned her lesson.
That was so damn sad!
That was a painful story to read but a darn good one at that.
:((( cant stop crying
Andy thanks for sharing this :o) you wrote it nicely but the story itself is …Ugh… Such a depressing story :-( the affair, the separation for good, and how Bette makes life so meaningless…
excellent made me cry thank you.
Oh damn this is so sad and hurt alot.
The ultimate sacrifice! :0(
OMG,so sad.PPS.
andy84803–Your post is fantastic, with wonderful story telling and great writing. You can tell from the comments that readers were enmeshed in the world you had created, so much so that you have evoked strong emotions. Please please do not be discouraged by the 4-stars. It reflects readers’ response to any story in which either Bette or Tina dies. It has nothing to do with the quality of your wRiting or story telling I am certain that you steeled yourself against that reaction when you posted but I am sure that it still hurts. Please keep writing and sharing with us,