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The girl next door…chapter 21
Tina text: (smiling), wow, promise to keep your mobile close,
Bette text; I have it under my pillow
Tina text; ( feeling brave)lucky mobile, night x
Bette: (blushing), .lucky me, night x
TBC
The next day Bette got up and went to work early. She was eager to get home to spend some time getting to know Tina. She worked until around 1pm when she noticed a text message. Her eyes lit up with hope.
Tina text: hello Ms Porter. Hope you are still coming tonight. Been to visit a few schools with the girls. Not sure what to do. Can we include it in our chat list for later?
Bette smiled and replied
Bette text: yes we can baby and we can talk about anything you want. See you all at 6
Tina text: great! bye Tx
Bette kept the last text on her phone screen for the rest of the day. She looked at it often and her mind wondered to the beautiful Tina that she was going to get to know. Tina began to prepare dinner. She made soup, Scotch Broth, steak pie with roast potatoes and veg, and ice cream and jelly for pudding. The pudding was more for her daughters but she thought that Bette would enjoy it too.
Emma and Lucy were excited that Bette was coming to visit and around 5.50 pm they sneaked over to Bettes house. After ringing the door bell, Bette answered.
Bette: well hello there you two. Is everything ok?
The girls: yes Bette, we just thought that you might need a hand getting to mums house.
All 3 of them laughed and Bette invited them in.
Bette: well could you, Lucy, carry the flowers and Emma could you carry the box over there. And no peeking in it ok.
The girls: ok!
The 3 of them closed up Bettes house and headed over for dinner. Tina was surprised to see them together and Bette filled her in on their escourt duties. The four sat for dinner and Bette was full up after the soup.
Bette: ( teasing Tina a little), I am not sure If I could eat anything just now. That soup sure is a meal itself.
Tina: oh, eh, sorry. My mum makes it like that so I thought you would like it too
Bette: just teasing Tina. It was brilliant but I am a little full. Could we take 5 before the main course.
Tina: sure.
Emma and Lucy then asked Bette what was in the box
Tina: girls dont be rude!
Bette: ( smiling at Tina), Tina its ok.
Bette got up and collected the box and the flowers. She told Emma and Lucy that the flowers were for their mummy as they were almost as beautiful as she is. Everyone laughed and Tina blushed. She looked at Bette and mouthed the words thank you. Bette, gently bowed her head in approval. Bette then picked up the box. Inside it was an envelope. She handed it to Emma and Lucy and asked Emma to open it.
Emma: (jumping up and down with Lucy), mum, mum its tickets for Disney!! The real park, mum can we go today, can we mum, mum, please.
Tina: (looking at Bette with sad eyes), girls no, Bette you shouldnt have!
Bette: (taking Tinas hand in hers and looking at her and the girls), I thought that we could go for the weekend next weekend. I have booked a hotel in the park. Come on Tina it will be fun.
All eyes on Tina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tina: (tears in her eyes), Bette you should have asked first!
Bette: (not giving up), wouldnt be a surprise then would it?
Emma and Lucy; oh mum, come on. It will be magic. Please, please mum. We have never been before.
Tina: (smiling at everyone), oh ok then.
Tina got up and urged the girls to give Bette a hug. As they did Tina joined them. It was the first group hug, and it felt wonderful for all four of them. As the girls moved back to their seats Tina whispered into Bettes ear
Tina: thanks Bette. But please dont let them, us, down, please!
Bette: (grabbing her and pulling her onto her knee), I wouldnt dare!!
Tina snuggled into Bette and Bette relaxed at the warmth of her body on Tinas. Bette put her arms around Tina and Tina backed into Bette. Tina could feel Bettes body touch her and the feeling ran a path all the way down, deep inside her. Lucy looked at her mum and Bette and smiled. She then asked a question
Lucy: Bette, I thought that you would have a bag for a sleep over. Did you bring your jammies?
Tina almost choked and Bette buried her face into Tinas hair so that no one could see her blush and smile.
Tina: Lucy sweetheart, Bette just lives next door. She doesnt have to sleep over. Right Bette? (Tina looked at Bette for support, with a blushing smile).
Bette: sure, ( she couldnt stop laughing).
Tina nudged her hard in the ribs and Bette screamed out loud. At that point Emma and Lucy joined in the pretend fight session. Lucy began to tickle her mum but moved onto Bette.
Bette: (laughing and screaming so loud), S T O P ! PLEASE, YOURE KILLING ME LUCY. DO YOU HAVE FREDDY K FINGERS OR WHAT? PLEASE SSSSTOP!
Tina: no babe, keep going she needs a good tickle.
The four of them fell to the floor as Emma blew raspberries on her mums tummy. She then went searching for Bette. She lifted up her t-shirt and blew a belter on her tummy.
Bette: ENOUGH, PLEASEGET YOUR MUM
Emma and Lucy; charge, quick get mum.
However by this time Tina had moved and had cushions from the couch to hit anyone who came near. The four of them played for an hour or so. During that time Bette and Tina sneaked wee looks at each other. Smiling, then looking away. Tina loved how Bette was with her children and Bette was amazed at how she was too. She had never spent a lot of time with kids and had certainly never dated anyone with them. However this time the children were part of the family that Bette wanted desperately to also be part of . The rough play eventually ended, they finished off their dinner and the girls were placed in bed. Lucy was in Bettes arms and Emma on Tinas back. The wee ones wanted both of the big ones to tuck them in so they did a relay race between the two rooms. Once they were settled Bette and Tina returned to the kitchen in need of a drink and a rest. They settled down at the kitchen table and had a few moments of reflection. They chatted idly about work. Bette asked Tina questions about her teaching and if she intended getting a job. Tina said that she was not in a rush and wanted to get the girls settled at school first. Tina then got out the school stuff she gathered earlier in the day.
Tina: I think I like this one.
Bette asked her why and Tina gave her reasons.
Tina: Bette?
Bette: yes baby, (Bette sat closer to Tina and Tina moved closer too until her chin rested on Bettes shoulder as they looked at the literature)
Tina; would you come back and visit this school with me, please. Just to get another opinion, please.
Bette: (turning and realizing how close they were. She looked Tina in the eye), of course I will. Tomorrow. I can go into work late. Ill call and leave a message just now. James will get it in the morning.
Bette got up and made the call. Tina just stared at her.
Tina:, thanks Bette. You know you make me feel, very special. (her voice trailed )
Bette: you are special baby. Very special and I intend to make you feel like this everyday for as long as you will let me.
Tina: really, maybe I will let you for a long time, if you are lucky (Tina teased and joked with Bette and Bette loved it)
The two had some more drinks and moved into the living room. Tina had bought a fantastic big circular soft sofa. They both plopped down on it and looked at the cushions on the floor from earlier.
Tina; what a pair they are, the girls I mean!
Bette: yes, yes they are and I have the bruises to prove it.
Tina laughed and moved closer to Bette. Bette opened up her arms and let Tina rest on her chest. Tina was nervous of being so close but as her cheek hit the soft cotton of Bettes t-shirt she became flushed with the feeling of happiness. She could feel the roundness of Bettes breast under her cheek. She gently leaned in and melted into Bettes body. Bette could feel Tina nestle into her breast. She gently pushed herself further into Tina and Tina welcomed the pressure by gently snuggling in deeper. There was absolute silence. Bette smelled Tinas hair and held her tight. Tina gently pushed at Bettes breast with her forehead and circled the curve. Tina turned to look up at Bette, her eyes filled with tears.
Tina; Bette, will you stay with me tonight, just to hold me and maybe talk. I mean if you dont mind.
Bette: my darling I would stay with you for ever if you asked me.
At that Tina stood up and pulled at Bette to stand. They stood and looked into each others eyes. Bette bit her lip and moved in to kiss Tina. She placed her closed mouth on Tinas. Tina pushed her lips into Bettes as she moved along the length of Bettes lower lip. Bette gasped and at that moment Bette felt the wetness of Tinas tongue enter her. Tina slowly searched and explored Bette. Bette kept her mouth still and allowed Tina to do as she wished. Tina pulled back and bit down gently on Bettes upper lip. Enough was enough, the kiss depended as they both began to kiss, suck, lick and push at each other. The speed increased and the act began to include the rest of their bodies. Bette lifted her hands and snaked them through Tinas hair. As she did Tina let out the softest moan that ended with the word B e t t e. Bette felt her panties soak up her wetness. She wanted Tina but had also made her a promise to be patient. She hesitantly pulled back to see tears in Tinas eyes.
Tina: please Bette, love me, please..( Tina leaned back into the kiss)
Bette (gasping for air)Tina honey,(kiss), baby,(kiss), tonight is about, ( gasping loudly in-between licks and kisses), sharing, and .
Tina; ( looking so sincerely into Bettes eyes) Bette, do you want me
Bette; ( feeling the wetness in her core drip out of her) baby you know I do but remember last night(kiss), , come on baby this is, (kiss), killing me, I dont want to loose you again, not tonight..(Bette gasped the word out as she ran her hands along Tinas neck)
Tina: (stepping right back from Bette and also gasping for air), baby, I have never felt like this. You make me so alive and for once I feel like a woman.take me to bed, hold me, talk to me, support me, help me, but baby, (deep, slow passionate kiss), baby, (kiss), make love to me like only you can.. please!!!!
Bette: TBC
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(51 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
Wow. That was hot. Excellent job.
Sweet and hot, hot, hot.
okay if bette wont do what tina is asking i will. great chapter.
Hahaha.. Yay, KKK is gone!
Yep, I’m with the rest of the ppl who have commented… it’s hot in here now…
Canadian slopes… hmm.. we’ve got a famous one up my alley here… there’s several choices: whistler/blackcomb, grouse mountain, and apparently in British Columbia itself we have about 12 locations. Here’s the site: http://www.hellobc.com/ski/ski_index.asp
Wow! my friend pointed me out to this site and your story… loved it! now i’m hooked! need more!!
wow.this is Bette’s chance…good update …thanx 4 not includin them k’s!!!
oh . i LOVE your story . you write so fluidly …the passion, the awakening of both characters . looking forward to the next installment!
Can I be Tina tonight? Please???? LOL…Damn girl, you should kick the arse out of those KKKKK!!! Please continue soon…;-)
You are writing in the zone now. Really enjoying it.
Wow…just wow. i can’t believe you left us like that!! i want more please!!! ooh and congrats for the KKK fight!!
Seemed to have kicked the KKK in the arse for now!
you kicked arse alright! I’m glad i read this before taking a shower for work, because i certainly need a shower now…a very cold one…
This is so good. I am glad you kicked the KKK arse. Dont keep us waiting to long for another one.
wow….i love this story..even with the KKKKK
This is so hot…love Tina’s words to Bette. Scotland you nailed this chapter. Can’t wait for the next.
Wow! Your Bette and Tina are amazing! What will Bette do? Tina seems to be on fire… Great Story!!! Thanks so much for writing!
Damn! Why did I read this at work? Its nice and cold here today…I think I’ll go for a walk now to “cool off”. Scotland that was indeed hot! I also enjoyed Bette’s interaction with the wee ones.
okay…i just read this again…will bette just make love to the woman already…i need another cold shower…