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The girl next door……chapter 41
Bette: (smiling and mouthing a kiss to Tina)hey baby, you feeling a wee bit lonely?
Tina: ( still pouting)..a wee bit
Bette whispered something into the wee ones ears..all of a sudden they pounced on Tina and began tickling her
Tina: (squealing) stop stop, im too ticklyplease stop (tears were falling down her face and she was beginning to get exhausted from laughing and screaming)
Tina: PLEASE.PLEASE..
Bette: oh ok.stop girls we dont want your mum to be so worn out that she cant go on the big upside down rides.do we( Bette winked at the wee ones)
The wee ones: ( winking back, although Lucy did it with both eyes). No your right Bette, come on mum, lets go..
Bette and the girls got up and moved away from Tina. Bette began to dress and the wee ones reached for their sun glasses and hats
Tina: ( feeling a big bit worried)..eh hello you 3..im not going on any upside down things.remember..big feartie..not going on anything ok
Bette: (now dressed and wearing her sun glasses, reaching for the girls hands)whatwhat did you say baby..come on..up and round we go..
Tina: BETTE!!!!!!!!!!!! Im not going on anything..sweetheart
Tina was left talking to herself and Bette and the wee ones left the room. Tina got up and chased after them ..as she got outside she found the 3 of them looking at a map.she could hear Bette talking.
Bette..(still pretending with the girls)nowlets see..where are all the big upside down.shake your dinner out of your rides..oh yip there they are.(turning to look at Tina).come on you..lets get busy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bette walked on and Tina came running up behind them. By now Tina was more than worried and gently moved Emma away from Bettes hand and gently held onto Bette herself, taking Emma in her other hand.
Bette was smiling to herself and tried hard not to show it. She could sense that Tina was worried, but she also liked the fact that Tina wanted to be close to her.They walked for a few mins only to stop suddenly.
Bette: Right my family of Bravehearts..this is the one!
The wee ones looked up and saw the biggest ride ever.They shouted whoooooppppppeeeeee and ran into the queue..Tina on the other hand let her jaw drop as she watched Bette join her daughters. She stood and stared at the ride, then walked over to Bette.
TBC
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(54 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
Glad you are back. I love this story. I hope you continue to write it.
Good to see you back I love this story please keep going..
och aye that was braw, nice chapter.
hey glad u came back….i love ur story and its about time u posted!!!! :)
i have loved this story from the beginning and have been anticipating your return…..and it is not naf!!!!
Please continue scotland we are even learning new phrases
i love this story and was so sad when you stopped posting. So exctied your back, thanks for posting!
Great to have you back. We’ve missed this. Please continue.
simply just love your story, it makes me laugh, cry and feel warm inside, so please keep up the good worl since I´ll look forward to many more chapters
Hey I know it’s more than a year since you posted but this is a plea for you to consider starting up again. This story is wonderful and I am sure I am not alone in being disappointed that it seems to have stopped. Your writing is fantastic and I spent the best part of the last 2 days reading it from start to finish. I hope you feel inspired to carry on at some point and that real life isn’t stressing you out and stopping you writing.
Hi, I know its almost a year after the last comment but I hope you will consider continuing and/or finishing it – if you have time and all is well in your life… thanks so much!!!
Hey I came by ur story by chance n it is a powerful n wonderfully written story which I hope u will continue PLEASE:))
I love this fic so much I hope you write more soon! Its so cute and yet so hot and then there is the whole thing with Tina’s family! Wow so much going on I Love It!
This post is long over due… This is agreat story any chance you might be able to continue.THANK YOU!!