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The Hunted 2
"Oh, I like all sorts of things" Shane couldn’t resist the opportunity to flirt a little.
Carmen laughed again and tossed her hair.
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It was early evening by the time that Bette and Tina left the office, and Bette had to admit she was impressed by Tina’s work ethic. She was one fo the few people who could possibly give her a run for her money.
"So, anything strike you as suspicious?" Tina asked once they were in the car.
"Not initially. But I’m keeping an openmind, as I hope you will too?" Bette looked at Tina, but got no reaction.
"Of course. Umm Bette…are we being followed?" Tina glanced nervously in the rear view mirror.
Bette looked and groaned "Yes, but don’t worry about those two"
"Some of yours?"
"Unfortunately"
Bette pulled out her cell and dialed Dana’s number.
"Bette, we’re right behind you, what are you calling for?" Dana asked.
"That’s exactly why I’m calling. Just because Tina knows she’s being protected doesn’t mean that everyone else needs to. A bit more subtle in future perhaps guys?"
"Sorry Bette, Alice just reckoned…"
"I might have guessed. Just…well, remember that it’s Alice when you listen to her ideas"
Dana laughed "Sure thing"
"Right. I hope to not see you for a while"
"Ok, sorry again"
"Bye"
"Bye"
Bette rolled her eyes as she hung up the phone "I swear to God…"
"Hey, if we all got to work with perfect people, life would be a little boring, don’t you think?" Tina reasoned.
"I don’t know about that" Bette held eye contact with Tina a little longer than was appropriate, and Tina looked away hurriedly.
"Right" Tina pulled up outside her house "I guess it’s time for you to meet Eric" she said, indicating the car that was parked infront of hers.
"Wonderful" Bette smiled falsely, mentally kicking herself for her earlier indiscretion.
They entered the house, and were greeted by a tall, dark haired man dressed in a suit.
"Hey babe" he gave Tina a peck on the cheek "Who’s this?"
"Honey, I’d like you to meet my friend Bette. She’s just gone through a bit of a messy break up, and is going to be staying with me for a while"
"Ok. Did you not think to tell me about this before?" he smiled weakly.
"I’m sorry. The break up was kind of unplanned" Bette said with a hint of sarcasm in her voice. Trying to act downbeat was proving all to easy when in the presence of Tina’s boyfriend.
"Also, Bette doesn’t want anyone to know she’s here. Just in case her ex….her ex tries to find her" Tina’s hesitancy didnt go unnoticed by Bette.
"Of course, I understand" Eric nodded his head "sorry, Tina seems to have forgotten to introduce me. I’m her boyfriend, Eric" he held out his hand to Bette, which she took begrudgingly. "I do hope we won’t be competing too much for Tina’s time"
Bette smiled at him "So do I"
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(32 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
That was awesome, love it!
Its great to see you writing another story again, love the way the chapters are unfolding looking forward to more chapters please post again soon.
Great your are back. I’m allready hooked to this Story – Love Bette in Action. Please post very soon and more!
“…this is all entirely fictional, I hope that thats ok with you guys…” Absolutely ok. As for me, I’m really intrigued by the idea of a West Hollywood thats overrun with secret agents. ;-) Thank you for writing it!
Love it…love how every l word character ever created is added in….pps
Hey, I wasn’t around when you were last writing, which is a shame since I’m really liking this :) I like how you included Marcus too! Allenwood, I presume? Nice touch. I loved Tina hesitating when mentioning Bette’s ex-partner.. Haha :) Post soon, ADx
This story is going to be great. Please post often!
nice to see you back with a new story
OK I already don’t like Eric. He is a little dismissive about someone who is supposed to be a very good friend of Tina’s and also going through a bad breakup. Could he have any less sympathy? I hope he has his own place so he’s not always up in Tina’s face while Bette is trying to protect her. That will make her job ten times harder trying to stick like glue to Tina with the boyfriend complaining about the tagalong friend. PPS
This story looks like it might be good.