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The Island – Chapter 9
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Dana traced Alice’s lips with her tongue and groaned when the other woman opened her mouth to invite it in. As their tongues dueled, Dana rolled them over so she could be on top. Alice got her gloves off and removed Dana’s headguard.
Dana had moved her leg in between Alice’s legs and received a delightful moan for her efforts. Alice spread her legs further.
Harrison saw what was going on through the slight space in between his fingers as his hands covered his eyes.
And then Dana came to her senses. She abruptly stopped kissing Alice and rolled off the other woman to stand up.
“God. I’m sorry, Miss Piezecki. I don’t know what came over me.” Dana held out her hand to help Alice to her feet. It took Alice a minute to understand what was going on as her lust-fogged mind finally cleared. She reached up and allowed Dana to help her to her feet. She was grateful for the support. With her hard workout and then the kissing, Alice wasn’t sure if her legs would support her.
Dana stood waiting for the reprimand she was sure would come. She severely overstepped her bounds. She figured she would be sent off island for this.
She flinched slightly when she felt Alice’s fingers on her chin. Alice raised her head so that their eyes met. Dana saw no anger in them. There was a look in there that Dana could not identify, but, she was very happy that her boss did not seem to be upset.
“There is nothing to be sorry for, Dana. If there is anyone who should apologize, it should be me. I’m sorry I kissed you. I never meant to push you.”
“No!! I mean, no. Don’t feel bad. It was great. It really was… Great.” The women’s eyes met again and they moved in for another kiss when a chime went off.
“Shit!” Alice said as she looked at the clock. “I have a meeting.” Alice quickly looked Dana up-and-down. “You…uh…ready to hit the showers?”
Dana had been around naked women in locker rooms all her life. It was part of being an athlete. She never openly ogled anyone. It was not only to hide her preferences, but, also out of respect for the other women. Being around a naked Alice would be a whole different ball of wax.
“I really need to go myself. I’m going to jog back to the barracks, so, I’ll take a shower there.” Alice was slightly disappointed, but, not surprised.
Dana got her things out of the locker room and prepared to leave. As she turned towards the door, she was stopped by Alice softly calling her name.
“Yes?” Alice was shifting uncomfortably and suddenly appeared very shy. Dana didn’t think she had ever seen anything cuter and felt herself being drawn even more towards this woman.
“I’d really like it… I mean… If it’s OK with you… Would you mind being my regular workout partner?” Alice was shuffling her feet. “I mean, you don’t have to, if you don’t want to…”
Alice was stopped by Dana.
“I would love to.” Dana’s face broke into her goofy grin. “You need a lot of help.” Alice’s smile in response to that could have lit the room. “Very cool. So I’ll see you tomorrow?”
“Sound great. I’ll see you then.” Dana walked backwards most of the way to the door. She couldn’t seem to take her eyes off Alice.
After the door closed, Alice gave a backflip of pure joy then she headed off to the showers and to continue her workday.
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Alice Shuffling! So… fucking cute. I was smiling like cheshire cat all the way. I’m glad how both of them came to their senses. Too huried will be poisonous ;) Awww so they kissed and little bit of spreading legs haha. (Man,I sound like a pervert) Harrison cracked me up too. Very cute, priceless~ Martial Art Alice… Actually ya know what? Leisha said she is very athletic, so I can imagine her sparring with Dana. ‘Twas very hot. Can’t believe Dana pass the shower with her, good self-control, Dana!!! Teehee…. It just made my day. Plz post soon. love it!!
Hello Ma… ok let me start off by saying that was freaking awesome… the way you have each segment leading into something more and more intimate is just so powerful… very slow burn for these woman and that is going to catch up with them… hmmmmm… I’m still wondering what this company is all about… when ever I read about Harrison being overly protective of Alice I think she’s some kind of royalty or something… hmmmmm… maybe I just missed something early on and well I so do love to go back and re-read… hehe… but yeah this was just awesome… the whole training thing is just powerful and the details you put into their emotions as it connects with the environment is awesome… keep kicking super duper @$$. hugs, JC
One more note… hmmmmm… can we have a poker night or something… it might be interesting to see this crew in a different light… and well that competitive streak between Al and Dana and well Gabby and Nadia would be interesting :P… JC
I’m so excited!! They kissed! So, Dana will be Alice’s regular working out partner huh? *nudge, nudge, wink, wink*
AHHH one more thought perhaps on what JC said…poker night = strip poker :D LoL *HUGZ* love it Goose!
Hey :) Reli sorry i didnt comment ur last chapter im burning myself out with work and assignments and i havent even wrote my next chapter yet :S sorry for tht too lol. I loved every second of this chapter it just felt so real. I could imagine the whole thing as part of an episode, it was so Al and Dane lol. Your writing seems to get better with every chapter it reli does :).Oh and no u cant get awy with cliffhangers lol even after writing too great chapters lol. :) xx PPS xx
Wooohooooo the first kiss,I freaking LOVE this story!!! That damn Chimes,and Dana’s will power not to shower with Alice (I think I couldnt pass up that chance in a million years to see Leisha in a shower GOOD LORD) U made my day thanks MG U totally rock!! HDD all the way baby!!! PPS
My conclusion is “a match made in heaven.” I cannot believe that A was just as good a fighter as D. What a great surprise! It was very smart of Stranton to have A learnt self defense. You just never know. MaGoose, you did an excellent job on their sparring. D thought that she would beat A, staring at “the ass”, smelling A’s shirt.. totally love their interactions and of course their first kiss. And Harrison too. With all these great comments above, I am just be repetitive. But I have to agree with ILUVLEISHA and protest about the chime too. Was it really necessary? maybe A really had a tight schedule to run her empire. Looking forward to more of this awesome story. Thank you.
aww, yay! I know I’m late and anything worthwhile has already been said, but I absolutely heart this. This comment is nowhere near constructive. At all. I blame my complete and utter exhaustion, lol. Go you! *hugs for Goose*
Damn and I thought it was hot with just the sparring..(ala Buffy/Faith)hehe Harrison is just like us, your devoted readers but without the fingers blocking :D
Yeah there were a lot of updates for me to get caught up on. Man I need to find an Island like this and figure out how to infiltrate it. This story is amazing. I love your writing. Sorry to hear you like GT. I played at Kansas so I have to be a die hard loyalist…
Comme on, you can’t do this… first the chime goes off (I don’t uderstand how can a meeting be more important than kissing Dana, lol), then Dana refuses shower with Alice…I expect you to fully make up for this, eventually :)Harrison was cool covering his eyes, but I hope they’ll have more privacy next time. This was simply wonderful! PPVS!
Sweet heaven – a great update MaGoose – but you shouldn’t have left it there – more please.
Hahhahaha loved Harrison peeking through his fingers. Great update again MaGoose. Can’t wait to see where the next work-out leads to. PPS ;)
aw…. sweet!! weeeeeeeehhh after a bad day this just lifted me up like that! Thank you. Me loves… and I can handle Gabby.. only for a bit more, I know Fairbanks would be abe to kick her a.s hehe Thanks again. :)
SWEETNESS! OK, now that that’s out of the way…. soooo i read this and then had to run an errand! Look how many are before me, they love you Goose, just like i do. Harrison had me cracking up-looking at the scene through the slits in his fingers! LMFAO good times. Excellent job, cant wait to see them wrestle or spar or whatever in bed ,Lol jk You’re doing a great job! Thanks so much for this much needed update, i didnt think i could stand to be with myself in a room much longer without reading something new from The Island! Outstanding!
…Oh man. This was so awesome! I fucking love this story. You’re doing a fantastic job, girl! I was laughing pretty hard at the part with the mouth guards tho…only Alice and Dana, in the world of fanfic, could pull off a make out session immediately after removing their mouth guards. In real life, that would have most likely been a slobbery disaster. lol. But itnstead, we get adorable, hot hot hot, Danish lovin :-D I can’t wait for the next! PPS!!!
Wow, this was some update! There are many great things to comment on (and have already been commented on). Dana, Alice, and Harrison were too cute for words. My heart goes out to Dana. She seems so insecure… again thinking she was going to get kicked off the island. I think Alice has a lot a walls to break down if she really wants to be with Dana.
Grins**Loves me the idea of martial arts Alice. Harrison funnier then hell with the peaking through his fingers like a little kid.
so cute. i love it.