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The Island – Love and Loss
“What?”
“Is that your Hollywood survival kit?” Bette smirks.
“Everything here is very important to me.” Tina defends, actually finding it very silly after what they have been thru. But she isn’t about to let on.
“The only reason I’m going to carry that useless shit is because I give a hoot and don’t pollute.” Bette takes Tina’s bag and ties it to the strap of her backpack before heaving it onto her back. “Fuck!” She grumbles again.
“Oh, it can’t be that heavy.” Tina laughs, feeling just a little guilty. But not guilty enough as she turns away quickly when Bette gives her a look that suggests she should be quiet or carry the backpack herself.
The climb up the mountain is difficult. They take a lot of short breaks before finally reaching the top. They both take in a deep breath and smile at each other, knowing that the hard part is over. Bette pulls Tina closer to the ridge, holding her hand. Tina laughs out loud and squeezes Bette’s hand in gratitude. She is in awe again. She can now see the other side of the island and it is just as spectacular, absolutely breathtaking. Bette points to the left and Tina gets her first look at the magnificent resort. She can see the thatched roofs and large swimming pools set just feet away from a white sandy beach and crystal blue lagoon. She lets out a sigh of relief as she imagines herself safe and sound, surrounded by her friends, rejoicing in her survival.
But the feelings of safety and serenity are quickly lost. She feels her heartstrings tug painfully when she looks sideways at her gorgeous guide, smiling at her with her Fedora hat slightly tilted against the sun. She realizes that their time together is almost over. Suddenly she doesn’t want to go back. Returning to her life means leaving Bette Porter and no longer feeling alive. Waves of panic and loss are slowly washing over her. She can’t seem to take another step. She can’t seem to breathe. She reaches for Bette’s other hand and they automatically lace their fingers. Bette gives her a gentle squeeze as if telling her she understands her plight and she feels the exact same way. They gaze into each other’s eyes, stepping closer to convey their true love with a kiss. The island is quiet, only the sounds of the wind and their fast-beating hearts can be heard. Their lips are inches away.
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tibettenation1 says
wtfffff!!!you gotta be kidding me! Here I am laughing hard because Bette and Tina are hilarious together then the unthinkable happens….omg why only 5 pages really your two stories both needs to be longer, please update soon another great chapter!
RobbieRob says
ok, did not see that coming! Trusting you here…please B&T have to make it out safe and together. FIX IT PLEASE!!!!!!!
SassyGran says
RRiiigghhtttt!!! When do we get the next post? I’m left in the air here, can we have longer posts please? I’m just into taking the story further and you leave me hanging over the cliff Bette just fell of!!!
brinny says
Too funny, Tina accusing Bette of poisoning her. Please keep Tina safe from Henry and Eric.
mamadoc91 says
Great banter! Love the chemistry. Intriguing cliff hanger. PPS!
els73 says
Wow, you have to fix this…… love your story… pps
Bibi28 says
Oh no, you forgot to post the rest of the chapter!
I knew something was wrong with that Eric guy. Please update soon, can’t let us hanging for long, like Bette is hopefully hanging on.
lipitora says
oh, no! this is not good! :)
I really like this story, but you can’t leave us hanging so, what a way to finish the chapter so :D
Please posting soon, I can’t wait for the next chapter.
I need to know that Bette and Tina will be safe.
I am always hate Eric and Henry.
wkm says
Love these two together, great chemistry.
topcat says
Right bette is ok right and I new it had something to do with tina now were is the rest of the chapter pps.
scribe says
What a difficult Plot to lead on but I trust that you can fix their situation and make our B&T safe. I love the banters.
Love it. Been reading this story since your very first post and although I don’t comment regularly, rest assured that I am one of those who are regularly waiting for an update from you :)
kingg says
Wtf…..you got to be kidding me!….it was going so good…Bette n Tina, hilarious…and then you go n spoil it all by bringing those creeps in and make it all sad….come, come now…make it good for our gals…they need to stay together, safe and sound…PPS!!!….great story! You’re good…
Dainty says
what in hells name is going on. Eric and henry trying to kill Bette or maybe both of them. This is strange but very interesting. Post asap. Thanks for posting.
mscully says
Loved the survival kit Tina.
They have a fantastic chemistry!
I never liked Henry and Eric.
I hope that Bette is well.
Waiting for new chapter.
radleks says
Great update! Love the humor and now the drama. What is up with Eric? That guy is so creepy. Can’t wait to see how Bette is going to rescue Tina and save the day.
akalittleredtwo says
Wow! I hope we get an update soon! Love it!
ut says
Oh damn please let them be ok