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The Journey 44
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Stranger: hey there again
Bette: hey
Stranger: you’ve started staying up late quite a lot lately
Bette: have I?
Stranger: Yep, do miss me?
Bette: (And I start to think this is getting strange). Who are you?
Stranger: Come on, you know who I am
Bette: Right, sure
Stranger: do you want to do it again?
Bette: I’m not sure
Stranger: Come on, last time was fun
Bette: OK
Stranger: you start
Bette: No, you start
Stranger: you are in a strange mood tonight
Bette: yes, I am not myself
Stranger: Long day?
Bette: Longer by minute
Stranger: what will your partner say if they find out?
Bette: did I tell you about my partner?
Stranger: yes
Bette: they will be very surprised
Stranger: I’ll start then
Bette: OK, you start
Stranger: are you naked?
Bette: Almost (I lie)
Stranger: I am naked sitting on the chair and my cock is rock hard and big
Bette: your cock?
Stranger: Yes my cock, I am stroking it and it is soooo hard
I hear the car pull in the drive. My head is spinning. I know it will take Tina less than a minute to get in the door. I turn the computer off at the button, I do not bother with the usual shut down. I turn the light off and rush into the bathroom and turn the shower on before I am undressed. I lock the door. I do not know what else to do. I try to get some control. I can hear Tina calling out for me.
Tina: “Hey Bette, are you up?” the lights are on so I figure she is up. No answer. I look around the living room and in our bedroom. Then I hear the shower running. Is Bette taking a shower this late, fuck don’t tell me she is trying for sex again. I head to the bathroom. I go to open the door, only to find it is locked.
Tina: “Bette, are you alright?”
Bette: I try to control my breathing, deep breaths, contain my anger I tell myself over and over again. “How did it go with
Tina: “Oh, you know, not much good. I don’t know what to do with her, she is not managing at all.”
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Oh damn, I guess I’m glutton for punishment. Hope you post more soon.
please don’t go where s3 is going, show is enough…i love the way you write, but can’t take more heartbreaks…it’s your story though, sorry
Great chapter. I hope you let them stay together. Post soon.
I hope you do not let S3 influences too much. Ups and downs but no break up. I waiited sooooo long for this story to continue but not in the lines of S3. Glad you are back!
I have been waiting for your update to this story and the moment I started reading I felt sadness wash over me. I don’t understand how Tina can be so nice with Bette while cheating on her all in the same breath. I so consider internet sex just as bad as actualy having an affair if not worse. Bette needs to confront Tina and I hope Tina has some sort of explanation. Please have them work it out. Althoug it’s painful to read I still enjoy your writting pleas post soon.
Siince the story is taking a new direction and there is some concern I thought I post briefly to clarify a few things. One I will not be following S3 storylines necessarily all the way or to the letter. For Brokke – I think you’ll find all was not as well as Bette thought. Tina might see things a bit differently. I agree internet sex is no different. If it is something you wouldn’t do with your partner there, don’t be doin’ it at all.
OMG you can’t leave us there…pls post soon
Well, it had been so long I had to click “previous” to see where the story had been, but things have changed so much I’m not sure I should have bothered. Poor Bette, contemplating wedding bands one second, being confronted by Tina’s cyber cock the next. Saw your comment. See you next time.
Hey Bette, cell phones cost money! Save it for the divorce lawyer! BTW – can someone tell my why the hottest woman in Weho is getting punk’d by ….nevermind…Thanks!
Don’t let S3 get to you too much….
Damn this is sad and drama coming!
I’m with BTF…enough with S3 cannot take anymore.
This is sooo good to have you back, thank you for the post. I give you my personal maestro award, I love your story ! biz ;-)
Hmmmm…Bette’s words of “I’m awake” are rather telling. Glad that you won’t be following S3 but I can only imagine what’s been going on in Tina’s head. How can Bette misread Tina for the past 6 months…she’s changed, surely she would’ve realised that something was off.
well hoeny, ive been gone as long as you. and wow im glad to see that youve posted. fuck is all i have to say also. wonderfully done but ETF is wrong with tina. thanks.
why do you have to incorporate season 3? Your story was doing fine without all that shit…Ok one more story I won’t be reading I guess.
Looks like we are infor abad ride. Bette cant afford to moveexcept to the uest room. Maybe Tina cyper sex friend will asked what she stopped in the middle of sex and she will know that Bette was the one. thanks
I’m going to trust you but I’m hating this s/l on the show so I hope you give us a great twist. I know you can write it well just don’t torture us too much we fans are already been mistreated by IC.
Tina: “fuck don’t tell me she is trying for sex again…Hoping to avoid sex I go to bed so I might be asleep when Bette arrives.” guess that says a lot