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The Journey 49
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Janice: “Still traveling, buying work, drawing.”
Bette: Dinner arrives. “How is the fish, the risotto is divine.”
Janice: “The fish is excellent. Bette, are you happy?” and I give Bette my full attention putting my fork down.
Bette: I take my time answering, unsure of how to phrase it. “I thought I was.”
Janice: “You thought you were happy? What does that mean?”
Bette: “Things were going really well.”
Janice: “And?”
Bette: I stop short of telling Janice about the internet because I feel like the biggest fool in the world. “Tina is not sure if this is what she wants, to be with me.”
Janice: “Whoa. I’m not sure I understand..” and I wait for Bette to fill in the blanks.
Bette: Damn her, why is she so easy to talk to. I make a decision. “I’m not doing this Janice.”
Janice: “Doing what?” I ask genuinely confused.
Bette: “Leaning on you again when things are at their worst.”
Janice: “I see.”
Bette: “I tell you all my worldly concerns and I know nothing about you.”
Janice: “You know plenty about me.” And I play on words, knowing fore well Bette knows little about me.
Bette: “That is not what I meant.” Referring to the naked drawing of Janice I did.
Janice: “Perhaps you do not like what you see.”
Bette: “You know that is not true.” And the bill arrives saving me from further discussion. I pick the bill up. “My turn.”
Janice: “As you wish.” Knowing that the bill is already taken care of.
Bette: “I’ll be back in a minute.” And I head up to the pay the bill, only to be told it has been taken care of. I sit down and place the neat black folder on the table and I see the smirk on Janice’s face. “Fuck you Janice.” I say seriously.
Janice: “Come on Bette, you would not have believed me if I told you, all I did was let you find out for yourself. Why can’t I take a friend out to dinner?”
Bette: I study Janice. I am not sure I understand her. I ease up a bit. I give in and smile.
Janice: “Come on, let’s go down to the beach and walk and have ice cream.”
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wow, it’s getting more and more intense…i was wondering too, is bette willing to fight for tina? or will she just let tina to make all the decisions? how did they get to this point from being in love and commited? *sigh*, i need some happy B&T
Kit should have went over to Bette, it is not her personality to have just let Bette “cheat”. If she didn’t do that then stay out of the way. Bette isn’t he guilty party here. Bette doesn’t need to fight for Tina, Tina needs to decide what she wants. Bette wants her family, but she deserves to protect her heart too. If Tina doesn’t want Bette then Bette loses her and the children. For crying out loud, Bette was ready to buy wedding rings!
Bette doesn’t need more pressure from kit or anyone else, she only need to relax. Unbeknown, I’m holding my breath when I read your story, you’re incredible, thank you ;-)
Ouch..Kit was right. The intensity building between them both is so palpable. They need to sit the heck down and talk, like they did at the Inn. Maybe they need to visit there again. They both are running away when it get difficult…jeez, didn’t they learn anything from before?
Oh great. The baby isn’t even hardly dry yet and Bette is out on a date. They should have both choked on their dinners and died on the spot, victims of god’s wrath. …I jest…Somebody has to stand still and stop reacting – there are two (count them, two) children to consider now. All of you – grow up! Thank you for making your Kit the voice of reason, as the SHO Kit has gone crazy.
pretty please post soon…thank you for this chapter.
I meant for the adults to grow up. The kids have a couple decades before they can be held accountable. Thanks!
Gee Whiz! Bette didn’t do anything wrong. OK, so there’s sexual attraction between she and Janice, but apparently that’s not all, and they have never acted on it. I don’t blame Bette for wanting to get away from all the turmoil for an evening. Kit may be her big sister, but that doesn’t give her the right to tell her how to live her life.
Bette supported Tina through the delivery and plainly w/o hesitation told Tina what she wanted. Tina doesn’t seem to want Bette. Bette found solace in Jannice, the same friend who sent her back to Tina. But now Tina is rejecting Bette. Remember just 2 days ago Bette was buying wedding rings so I think we know what she wants. The time with Janice is a reminder that her life and world doesn’t actually have to end if Tina rejects her and they aren’t the family.
wow unbeknown just caught up reading your story. Love it. I hope they can work it out. NO matter what else happens I think love is worth fighting for.
Unbeknown,Kudos to Kit for stating it as it is. Bette had better get her shit in order and start fighting for what she wants; Tina. These gals belong together and no one else can come close in completely them. Bette, please heed your sister and go get what you want. All of this uncertainty in unsettling but I know that you will reunion these two halves. Puh-leaze make it so. Wonderful writing and torturous twist make this a must read. Thank you for all your time and effort. Your Loyal Fan.
Now that the ptoverbial shoe is on the other foot, Bette isn’t as forgiving. Maybe if she’d stop to think that if Tina had treated her the same way she wouldn’t have even gotten those precious months to try to renew their trust.Open your eyes Bette.
I second what techgal said. I love your story and I’m anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Can’t wait to see how the situation turns out. Also I wondering did Tina hear their convo, since they were standing outside the door. Good Job.
This is getting more crazy!