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The Journey 51
Bette: It’s late afternoon and warm. The girls and I had a nap as well. I napped on thr top of the cover in the spare room, wondering what is left of a relationship that was once so promising. It wasn’t all bad was it? Jennifer sleeps just meters from me in her basket. Laurel and I splash around in the pool. She slaps both hands down and the water splashes up. I don’t mind in the least. I gently do the same back to her with one hand while I support her with the other. She giggles as the water splashes onto her. I watch her and ponder how lucky we are to have to beautiful healthy daughters.
Bette: I am startled by the sudden statement and the seriousness in her voice. In all honesty have no idea how to reply. I see the sadness in
Bette: I see the innocence and hopefulness in her eyes. “I don’t know sweetie.” For the first time I realize this must be very confusing for
Bette: I watch as
Bette: “How long have you been there?” I say as I slip on some clothes not making eye contact.
Tina: “A few minutes.” I say honestly.
Bette: I towel
Tina: “Looked liked a tough conversation out there. No match for the two year old huh?” I try to lighten the mood.
Bette: “It’s looking that way. We need to tell her something Tina.”
Tina: “What do you suggest?” I ask impartially.
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(45 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
Yeah, why can’t Tina find out what she really think and want before ask Bette?
Tina, Tina, Tina! The character is absolutely draining me. However, I’m enjoying your story above and beyond the caca on Sundays. Thanks for posting. Looking forward to more.
i don’t know what they want anymore myself…so sad because i still don’t understand how did they get here :(
good chapter…tough but good..pls continue
Tina played with fire and now it hurts.
Wow, what’s Tina’s plan…does she want Bette back..if so, she should keep knocking on that door, she owes Bette many apologies, but Bette need to listen without being a big, fat, runaway baby!
Wonderful my dearest unbeknown, simply wonderful. Thank you.
I don`t know why Tina ask Bette when she si the only one who does not what she wants, but please make this two work out this together and find happinnes don`t make crazy like Ilene! nice post i will waitin for the next
thank you so much..I just want them happy. Post soon please
Unbeknown,The torture continues as these gals seem out of time with each other. Please let Bette take the time to see what she really want and then to have the courage to go after it at any cost. Tina does seem to be offering an olive branch. Now Bette reach out and grab it. Only be talking things through can you hope to salvage your relationship. Thank you for all your time and effort. Your Loyal Fan.
I just don’t know about Tina right now and what the hell is she want, and this is make them more pain. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I am curious: did Bette and Tina conceive the second child together, or is Jennifer the result of one of Tina’s flings? Enquiring minds want to know. It could be a real deal-breaker.
More more more…I really like this story…IC, please, read it too !!!!