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    The Journey 53

    Tina: I don’t know what to make of Bette’s comments. I just watch her, which is often the best way to get information form Bette.

    Bette: “I was too proud to say it before. I didn’t think you would really leave.”

    Tina: “Now?”

    Bette: “There is nothing left to loose Tina, we have hit rock bottom. It’s up or out. I will go with you and the kids, for a week. My only condition is we come home with something solid, a decision. I’m not putting us through again Tee for months on end.”

    Tina: I know Bette is making a genuine offer. I silently put my suitcase down. “Deal” I say as Bette pick sup my suitcase and opens the front door.

    Bette: “I’ll go to Kit’s and collect Jennifer and Laurel.”

    Tina: “I’ll get some things together here.”

    Bette: With that I make my way to Kit’s. I knock on the door and an disapproving Kit opens it. I wave one hand at her as if to dismiss her, or at least what she is about to say. “Where are the girls?”

    Kit: “And hello to you too baby sis. Laurel is watching a DVD and Jennifer is sleeping, why?”

    Bette: “Tina and I want to go away for a few days and take them with us.”

    Kit: “Finally” and I raise my arms “Some common sense, cause what was going on this morning will not solve anything.”

    Bette: “It’s not what is looked like Kit” I say walking towards the room where the DVD player is. I make my way out.

    Kit: “There is only so many things that this morning could have been Bette. What were you girls doing anyway, laying into each other like that?”

    Bette: “It won’t happen again Kit” I saying frowning and with distain.

    Kit: “It better not. You know better Bette” I say kindly, trying to appeal to her sense of decency.

    Bette: “We both know better.” I say as Laurel comes rushing out, I bend down to pick her up. “Good DVD bub?” and she nods.

    Kit: I make my way to collect Jennifer. I bring her out, sound asleep and hand her to Bette, you looks radiant with the kids. “Bette” I say seriously. “do all you can to save your family.”

    Bette: I look at Kit and promise her with my eyes that I will do exactly that. I gently nod as I look at the two girls.

    Kit: I reach over the girls to give Bette a hug. “It can be good again, just be honest and patient.” And I squeeze her. “Come on, I’ll help you get the girls in the car seats.

    Laurel: “Aren’t we staying at Aunty Kit’s Bette?”

    Bette: “We are going to go to the beach for a week, what about that, you me, mummy and your baby sister, even choco.” And Laurel just smiles and giggles.

    Kit: “She is so like you Bette” I whisper in Bette’s ear “remember that.”

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    Comments

    1. This is better than Tina clocking Bette (well, I confess, I rather enjoyed tha on a certain level), but that woman changes direction more often than the wind. Interested to see what transpires at the beach.

    2. Love the story and the drama you bring…I hope that they can work it out in the end and come back even stronger then befor. Also a question, how come Laurel calls Bette by her first name and not moma? Just wanted to know. Thanks a bunch and post soon.

    3. I sure hope that their time spent at the beach is done wisely. I hope that they are able to come to somewhat of a compromise and stay together. I just hate seeing these two leave everything that they have strived for over the years behind.

    4. It’s my first time commenting on one of your stories. I’ve recently had the pleasure of reading up on all your chapters. Please have them work through it. They have a family now and they have to try real hard to make it work. Thanks for the update.

    5. this is a chapter full of hope i like it! i know Bette will be doing all even the imposible for her family and Tina loves her 3 girls. they can find the way to put together all again. Excellente post thanks. i can`t wait for her time in the beach

    6. cool. my boss is late and i get to be on the computer. thank you ubk. people talking, i love talking, can learn so much. thanks for the great ride.

    7. just caught up on your story. awesome writing and love the story. good to see even when there is trouble communication can solve the issue either way it goes. looking forward to the next chapter.

    8. i love you story i cant wait until the next chapter you are a awesome writer and you should be awarded for your talent. you should find a publisher. plz continue to write great and thanx for sharing this wonderful chapter

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