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The Journey 61
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Bette: “Jesus, stop, OK?” And there are times where I like the new more assertive Tina just a little less, and now is one of those times.
Tina: “That’s the truth though isn’t it, that is what you really want to know isn’t it?”
Bette: Suddenly I feel silly and small and insecure. “Yes, OK, yes, it is what I want to know.” I try to re- establish some control over the conversation but Tina has me penned in.
Tina: I do not answer and the silence grows thicker, nothing I say will appease Bette, she must draw this conclusion on her own.
Bette: I try to stare Tina down, to no avail. Finally I relent. I look away and back and take her hand in mine. “I’m sorry, I know I should not need to ask you that.”
Tina: I hold Bette’s stare “You should be sorry and you should not need to ask me that.” I re-iterate. With that I turn over and turn my back on Bette.
Bette: I snuggle up behind Tina. “I’m sorry Tee.” And I try mistakenly to initiate sex to show her I am sorry. She determinedly pushes my hand away.
Tina: Frustrated I try to sleep. I pray Bette will draw this conclusion herself.
Morning comes…..
Bette: I wake and I alone in the bed, sudden panic sets in until I hear Tina playing with Laurel and talking Jen. I roll over ad it’s later than I thought. Hastily I get up and pull on some clothes.
Tina: “Hey, sleepy head.”
Bette: “Hey” and I can tell Tina is still just a little pissed at me.
Tina: “We thought we might go for a drive today.”
Bette: “OK” I say a little confused. “Tee, I thought there was something else we needed to do.” I say referring to having a talk with Laurel.
Tina: I know exactly what Bette means. “I’m not sure the timing is that good.” I say rather cryptically but knowing Bette will get it.
Bette: “Right.OK, girls, a drive it, is, where shall we go?”
Tina: “Actually I thought I might go on my own with the girls.”
Bette: “What ?” I am stunned.
Tina: “You have some things you need to think about and resolve Bette, perhaps some time on your own is a good idea.”
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Another wonderful chapter ,hope its not the end
you stopped writing for months and when you finally decide to post again, it reminds me very clearly why I was wandering here in the very first place, looking for every new chapter of your first story, you are a STAR, a 100% prodigious big star writer. One more thing, thru your stories, you considerably helped me to improve my english, maybe one day, I’ll give you a call, just to say “thank you” unbeknown (first I need to learn how to say unbeknown). Merci :-)
Love this story and your beautiful writing.
Woohoo! I love it. I am with Bailey I hope your not posting frequently to wrap this story up… I hope they still plane on talking to Laurel. It’s sad that she has had to deal with this and even witness some of the fights her parents have had. Hopefuly Tina and Bette will learn to argue when the kids are not around or at least keep theire voices down when doing so. Thanks a bunch.
I like this Tina also. She is strong and yet gentle also. She is passionate and loving towards Bette. Both have made major mistakes and both need to show each other without question how much they do love one another.
Thank goodness that ended well…I was sweating for a minute. This has always been a favorite story of mine…please keep posting.
wow im so happy to see your story continue… i loved these chapters you have a passion for writing and im really honored to be allowed to read you work its amazing as always thanks again
Wow this is amazing and glad thing work out. OK post soon please, thanks!
I am giddy. Two great chapters in one night. I hope your frequent posting is due to your passion for writing and not an attempt to wrap up this story quickly. Your story makes me smile. Thank you.
WOW!!!! Two chapters in one night. Thank you I glad that Tina and Bette are making there life together. PPS
at last, Bette and Tina really sorting out what’s really important as opposed to what’s pure distraction…please continue
What would the show be like if these two women talked the way you have them talking? I would be really happy.
I think it’s quite normal for Bette to have that insecurity. Tina conceived Jen when Bette’s away. She had no intention to include Bette in the family picture. Didn’t Tina hold back in some sense? Why can’t she just answer Bette’s question and talk to her directly?
oh good, i can understand bette insecurities though, but it’s great that they worked it out
What a journey it’s been unbeknown. Great chapter.I’m glad Bette’s asking these questions.If these are the questions she needs to ask to get over her insecurities, then fine by me. I know Tina’s annoyed,but she understands(or she should). Post soon.
wonderful! and you didn’t make us wait! i like so much that they can move in this, i hope they can come to LA soon
Thanks unbeknown. I really need to go back aways and read some of the older chapters because i’m getting fuzzy around the edges on the exact plot of your storyline…. but for now i’m happy
So wonderful. Bette is a dolt sometimes.
I was so happy to see another chapter. Bette, deep down she’s just a big baby like the rest of us. Nice to see them actually talking, and boy is she lucky Tina understands her so well.