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    The L Edition-Emotion Causes Commotion

    Story written on November 23, 2008 by caramel4vanilla.
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    Bette experiences something she has needed for a long time while so does Helena.BeLena FF

    The L Edition: Emotion Causes Commotion

     

    I know you might be all as surprised as I was that Helena got in touch with me that very same day, that she left the note. I was happy, you know the way you were when you was a kid and you finally got your own way. It was bittersweet victory in my behalf. Well at least it was to me.

     

    I was starting to think Helena was playing me hot and cold, in the back of my mind this exact thought had been swirling through my mind since I met this beauty.

     

    But i’m guessing last night Helena just couldn’t resist the Porter charm no longer. We finally had a break through. I’ve got to admit this morning it felt like something out of a dream but the note was my reality or rather my sanctuary.

     

    What did she mean by I reminded her of the sunrise? How is that even possible, I mean the sunrise is such a beautiful thing to admire, so how could I compare to such a rare sight of tranquillity.

     

    So anyways she called inviting me out for dinner, this would be my insight to know a little bit more about this incredible woman. It was all on her turf, so I could just relax and try to not worry so much. But i’m a worrier I think you all know that about me. So I started wondering where in L.A would be Helena’s kind of place to eat out, my guesses were to be honest I couldn’t come up with anything. The impression I got from this woman was that she was a woman of exquisite taste not that I minded at all, infact it made me find her that much more attractive to me. If that was even possible.

     

    I know Dana, Alice and Shane had been kind of bummed out because lately I had been so busy trying to become Helena’s girlfriend, meant that I didn’t have a lot of free time to hang out together. I and Alice on weekends would normal catch up on the events from in the week, but this Sunday was different. I can’t really explain what I was going through, but I found that I wanted to be alone. No interruptions, no distractions from my own thoughts to just feel at peace with myself or what ever it meant.

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    1. Nicely written, Caramel! (: I was so happy to log in to see four pages worth of this story! Big grin. Ok, now it’s my turn to get busy. I need to churn out two stories today. Oh and HAPPY BIRTHDAY! ((: I hope you have a fab one with your girl. xoxo

    2. Happy Birthday Caramel !!! I loved this chapter and it’s too funny you have Helena the one not being abe to cook. Can’t wait to find out how their date evolves :)

    3. Happy Birthday.my young friend. Was so happy to see 4 pages. and you did such a wonderful job. I could have done without the chicken and ate the veggie. So Bette can cook and Helena can’t that is so funny. Love that having Bette in her home made all the lonelyness go away. Must be terriable to be so lonely. thaks so much for post. you are weaving a beautiful tale.

    5. HAPPY BIRTHDAY Caramel… hmmmmmm… like completely WOW… you have such a gift at holding onto the details within each second that these characters experience… the colors… the smells… the slightest reactions are all painted masterfully within your creative soul… I love how you play off their shyness with one another… like two people who are finding love for the first time… its a magical thing and you have painted it so perfectly… you are completely amazing my friend… just brilliant… hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and Extremely Proud Cuz to the lovely Eunichick)

    6. Happy Birthday Caramel!! And I wish you many more. I like where you are taking this story and can’t wait to read your next post for it. Enjoy your b-day kiddo and be safe.

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