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The L Wing chapter 143
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Jodie starts signing – Lucy watches her and interprets
“I was honest with Alice but she is so obsessed with being left behind by Carmen and Shane and Bette and Tina that she sees what she wants to. I did not expect her to propose to me and especially not tonight and in so public a way. You think I enjoyed saying no to her? You would rather I have said yes to her and stood her up later?”
“Talk is cheap. All I know is that YOU seduced one of my best friends and protests about not wanting her to propose sound hollow to me – you knew all along – she has dropped enough hints to Carmen and me – there is no way you didn’t know. And YOU – you exploit who you are and who you your sister is to get the women you want. Be very careful Lucy – almost every President has an embarrassing family member – I used to think it was your mother but you are doing her more damage than she did. Neither of you are welcome in my home – now get out “Shane glares at both of them daring them to argue with her.
Tina is silent – I have expected her to butt in but she stands beside me and doesn’t speak.
Lucy looks briefly at Tina who stares back at her before they both turn and leave.
Shane turns to us.
“I’m sorry Bette – Tina but “
“You don’t have to say sorry – what you said is what I should have said a long time ago to her “
Tina says. Shane and I exchange looks – over the years we have developed an almost telepathic understanding
“OKAY “Shane turns to Carmen “let’s have some celebration music “
The music is cranked up but Tina walks away and pours herself a drink. I look around the room – there are so many people here that I owe so much to – Shane – always sane and level headed – it’s amazing to know that most of her childhood she was shunted from one care home to the next. How do you go from that to Chief of Staff to the President?
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Don’t make us wait too long for the next chappy, it was wonderful and I’m wanting to read the next one ASAP!
tina’s day in officially in the toilet! your posting plan sounds great to me!
I agree with Barrie! And I’m looking forward to more L Wing this week.
Oh My how will Tina feel about this…Bette will need to explain her Emily comment..and then great sex well of course
Come on Tina get pregnNT AND MAKE THE POTUS A HAPPY TROOPER. Like to see how the sisters get along and how adult she can be. Alice is a pain in the butt sometime but everyone loves her thanks
Great chapter and way to go Shane! About time someone put Lucy back in her place! First day as newly re-elected president is hectic again… One quick question: what chemistry are you talking about in your note, Ally? I’m not watching the 4th season, I don’t know anything that’s going on, but if it’s chemistry in a great scene between B&T, it means there’s hope still…
Poor tina, why don’t they add just a bit more pressure on her!!!!
Ouch! poor Tina, I think that Bette has a lotof grovelling to do, Great chapter. Hope you feel better soon and I will rub you with vicks if you sooo wish. PPS
Hey Ally, that’s definitely a deal I can live with :o)) Hope Tina isn’t to mad/hurt about the Emily comment. Please make her pregnant very soon, they want it so badly (so do I)!! And it could be fun with Tina and Carmen on maternity leave together LOL. BTW LMAO at ‘bring a large tub’!!! That’s so funny. Post soon, I’m ready for more…
Ally Ally Ally…first you go and throw Emily into the mix of course once Bette explains thing will be fine…but then lets just rub Tina’s face in teh fact that Latina hottie needed only one chance!! ohhh boy! Poor Tina!! I hope we don’t have another pill bottle incident!!
WOW!! Did not see that comming. Poor Tina, I just hope she can get prego’s real soon. Thanks Ally PPS
Yeah, if Lucy’s all grown up, she has to take her consequences like a woman. This should be a learning experience for her. Tina hopefully will keep a grip and understand what Bette was saying about Emily as she understand what Bette says abour her. But the fact that (the younger) Carmen got pregnant on the first attempt may stick in both Tina and Bette’s craw.
Ally you’re cracking me up with the idea that Carmen and Shane have to hurry up and get married! That’s too funny! But I thought it was kind of strange for Bette to say what she said about Emily…I can see why Emily would cross her mind with something that big happening in her life…but to say it out loud, especially with Shane and Carmen there??? And that last part of her statement is going to haunt Tina… “God I wish she had seen last night.” (Like Tina being there and being proud of her wasn’t enough for Bette.) How could Bette be wishing for anything else right now??? With the exception of maybe wishing that Tina was pregnant, she should be riding on a high like no other right now. I don’t understand it, and I think that Bette’s statement will forever overshadow this day for Tina. I must say I was not surprised with everyone’s reactions to Lucy and Jodie showing up at the party. Lucy may be learning things the hard way, but Jodie should have known that Alice’s long time friends were not going to be all accepting of them. I think Bette and Tina are really happy for Shane and Carmen. As badly as they want to be pregnant, they know it sometimes takes awhile. In the meantime they can share in S&C’s happiness. Thanks so much for posting…I love this story Ally and I hope you feel better real soon.
tinas ship just sunk!now tina is going to be soo?????.i feel drama comin now. it would be really kool if tina/carmen preggers the same time??. p.p.s.
awe crap they have gotta feel like crap 4 sure …….Sharmen’s 1st attempt and BAMM. then to hear Bette’s comment about emily….me thinks some drama is about to unfold!!!!!!! looking forward to tomorrow!!!!!
I’m wondering how Tina will feel after this! First the mention of Emily and then the announcement of Carmen’s pregnancy. Talk about a double whammy!!!
wow, carmen got pregnant from first attempt and tina is still trying, and now bette mentioned emily and lucy is delusional that jodie loves her…too much for tina to deal with, i hope she won’t be too stressed
awww….I’m happy for shane and Carmen but I feel bad for Tina and Bette, they’re not pregnant yet.
ah the drama thickens you sly girl. as for vics on the chest. have been doing that for a week for my woman. very sick girl she has been. i love doing it for her. thanks.
Ally, Another fantastic chapter. It was sweet to see the gals supporting ALice and going for Jodi and Lucy. This is a difficult situation especially given Alice’s proposal but I am sure that the dust will settle then things will get back to a normality for the White House. Bette and Tina are just adorable together and then adding the hotness that Shane and Carmen are was splendid. I do wonder if their immiment arrival will put the pressure back on Tina to get pregnant. Wonderful and awesome writing. The twists and turns of this terrific tale are addictive so can’t wait until your next post. Thank you so much, Your Loyal Fan.
OMG! Poor poor Tina! Please Ally make Tina pregnant :)
It will be fun to have Carmen and Tina pregnant at the same time. Now Tina just has to get pregnant.
Is Valentines’ a good day for a shotgun wedding? ;-)
Hey, Love your story :) You are an amazing writer and I totally admire you work! It will be exciting to see Lucy grow up in such situation and to follow President Porter with Madam through another 4 years. PPS! =)
Now if that isn’t a double whammy for Tina…first Bette mentions Emily and then Carmen says they’re pregnant after only one attempt! Lordy!
Oh poor Tina, drama keep coming!!!!!
Ough Bette mentioning Emily, real awkward. Guess there will be much talking when Shane & Carmes leave. Tina has much on her plate now, her sister, Emily and Carmen being pregnant before her. Up to the next chapter.