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The L Wing chapter 156
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“Any decisions about names ?”
“We still don’t know about the sex of the baby – the first sonogram was inconclusive – I don’t mind not knowing but Bette is so sure that it’s a girl “
“And you ? “
“At first I thought it was a boy but Bette wants a daughter “
“Is that because of her childhood – sorry – I know she doesn’t talk about it but Shane knows “
“No its okay – Bette could never do anything to please her mom and when she left Melvin and Bette she blamed herself – I know that she has never forgotten how it made her feel – Bette just wants to right the wrongs that she suffered – she will worship any child but a daughter would be so special to her“
“Who is probably going to look like her “
“She is going to be a wonderful mom – as is Shane for probably similar reasons – to right some wrongs “
“Shane is going to be amazing “
“Which is nothing more than you deserve — I can hear Marine One – I missed Bette last night “
“I missed Shane – was she with Bette last night ?”
“I think B had dinner with Alice and they got drunk “
“Come on- lets greet our conquering heroes “
“I do hope that was irony Carmen “
Ten minutes later Bette and Shane have left Marine One and are walking across the lawn from the helipad – Bette is wearing black trousers and a leather jacket – she looks fantastically sexy. Even from the distance where Carmen and I are standing I can see that Shane looks nervous. I glance at Carmen to see if she has seen what I have.
Bette sees me and runs the final few metres to me – I expect her to hug me but she stands in front of us and says
“Shane’s been throwing up all the way here – she is more than anxious about tomorrow – just be gentle on her “
Carmen nods and moves forward to greet her soon to be wife. Bette watches them anxiously as Carmen takes Shane by the hand and kisses her very passionately on the lips – Shane rests her head against Carmen’s shoulder and they embrace. Carmen leads Shane into the house
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U R such a devil…hope shane will return or have Bette find her..that will be horrible….
Great chapter ,hoipe the cute & clever female can talk you into another chapter soon, PPS
So, groveling at your feet won’t work, huh??? Gotta see what happened to Shane and why is Bette having headaches so much aside from the alcohol??? Great update!
oh your just tease. cant wait for more. if it was 5, id be running for shelter myself. thanks.
Noooo. I can hear the sound of a drama queen whistling! Please let Shane be okay. Don’t let her runaway from her wedding. And by the way, I really miss Love and pride. So dare I say, please post soon ?
incredible! i like it so much! i hope that someone already had pushed you into another chapter.
Hey Ally! Loved it as usual…now who can persuade you so we can talk to them?! I want an Ally fix!!
Ran away bride lol, hope Shane just a walk and come back soon, please let her be ok. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Sounds like there IS another chapter coming before next weekend, just not for this story. And there ARE sweet things that diabetics CAN eat. Have fun! But ally, if it’s only 5 degrees in Virginia, I assure that Shane wouldn’t be taking a walk, nor would anyone have taken the time for hugging and kissing out of doors. That’s when you run for shelter. And regardless of the temperature, I hope Shane soon realizes that’s exactly what she should do. I just wish you’d let Bette torture Jodi a bit more.
Thanks for another great chapter. I’m diabetic and I’ve just had to give my eggs to my partner – luckily she’s a chocoholic.
No good all crying for another chapter — only a certain very cute and clever female could possibly persuade me to write another next chapter next week– over to you C Xxx
oh man Shane pulled a season3…crap. okay so “C” Ally’s clever female friend are u willing to do some persuading for us???
Loved it update soon please. And I’m missing love and pride please update soon.
Ally, I loved this line ” you can be mad as hell with each other but if you communicate you can get through most things. We have been through so much since we became a couple – ” It is SOOOO true isn’t it???? Now…about being persuaded to write another one….one can only hope right? ;- )) PPS
did Shane just pulled Chandler? they better find her
Don’t have Shane leave for good. Just a walkabout.PPS.
Happy Easter anyway, I hope someone bought you a nice treat that you can eat to make up for it! I also hope Shane comes back … :)
Girllllllllllllll the other stories can wait! DO NOT be Pulling an ILENE on us, Now, it was bad enough, leaving her, at the last minute, but with a baby involved! oooooo this is getting goood, plz, another chapter of this! PLZ! PLZ! see I dont usually beg on here lol ..
Oh geez, don’t tell me that Shane is going to walk or that someone kiddnapped her. Please write another chapter, please!!!!
Oh gosh! Hey Ally, now would you want Shane to make the same mistakes she did in S3. Hope not … so hopefully Ms McCutcheon will return :) Great chapter btw
okay this is for ally women,start persuding women please…happy easter ladies and their is surgarfree bunnies to enjoy just like sugarfree hotdogs…lol p.p.s.
Hey Ally, Long time no comment but am back now until work takes over again. Now onto this fabulous fan fiction. I am loving every word you write. It is great to see Bette and Tina becoming parents and dealing with all the day-to-day issues that can arise during this magical time. OK it ain’t all moonlight and roses but where there is love and respect, wonderful things will happen. This latest crisis has once again reaffirmed their love and you amazing ability to pull the rig form my feet. You create such a fantastic adventure. I am happy to be along for the ride. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Shane probably went out for a late night burger and fries. Okay maybe not, but a burger and fries would be awesome right now.
LOL, knew you were up to something – I have enjoyed this L-wing week, thanks :o))
Great story! I love it!! And I love this chapter! But please, you can´t let us hang like this for long! Please update soon! ;-)
Hum I have some notes about this chappy – 1) I could really see Bette in leather jacket and black pants… soo hot! LOL 2) 5 degrees and Tina was with a cotton shirt? Id be dead by then! 3) Shane is missing and you intend to write another one next week?? Where’s the pretty clever lady to start some needed persuasion??