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The L Wing – Chapter 180
I grab another fruit juice and move to where there are some seats- no one questions the First Lady needing to take the weight off her feet. Helena is watching Alana – as is Alice and JJ – mm so which of the three of those would I back to snare this delicious newcomer?
“Hia “I glance up to see Kit “You okay girl?”
“Tired “
“You seem to be tired a lot “
“I just feel the pace more than I did before “
Kit sits down and for about three minutes we don’t speak
“Bette only has eyes for you “
“Have you SEEN that woman? “ I reply “God Kit “
“She could be standing in front of Bette naked with a rose between her butt cheeks and Bette would ignore her if you came into the room”
Despite myself I laugh.
“I am so crabby with her and I hate myself for it but I don’t know how to just relax and enjoy this time in our marriage “
“I do understand –when I was carrying David I should have been so damn happy because I was in love with his father and everything was coming together for the first time in my life. But I cried all the time it was awful.
“I don’t cry – well I try not to cry in front of Bette but I do feel so grumpy. She doesn’t deserve it Kit – she is being wonderfully kind and loving “
“I have to say that I didn’t think my sister could be as maternal as she is being “
“Its funny isn’t it “
“Funny -girl you have NO idea how much dad and I are just taken aback by how she is being about motherhood”
“Melvin is looking forward to it “
Before Kit has time to reply we see Helena almost shoulder charge Alice out of the way to hand Alana a glass of wine as a waiter passes them with a tray. They have both been vying for attention for the past few minutes. I look at Kit who clearly cannot believe what she is seeing
“Tina? “
“Yes Kit I saw it too “
“Is she that attractive?”
“Kit – you must be the only person in the room that cannot feel the sexual heat that woman is giving out “
“I see that she is attractive but you lot are all acting like Pavlov’s dogs “
“Well put a load of lesbians in a room and you will get clashes and you will get ego but above all you will get sexual tension. Think wolves baying at the moon “
“Does she do anything for you?”
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The last part between them was lovely. And all the rest of it was just great too, Helena, “my life expectancy would be measured in split seconds,” ah they know Bette very well. Helena’s statement was just priceless. Poor Tina, she will be alright soon. Hormones raging makes her think all sorts of irrational things. Dinner and loving will make Tina feel better about Bette. Great chapter. PPS
I hope that Bette doesn’t give Tina any actual real reason to feel insecure over this new bombshell. Glad that they are bonding over the baby. PPS.
a baby moving is one of the most unique experiences in life. its beautiful. that and breast feeding. two of the best things in the world. thanks.
I can see why Bette was hurt over what Tina implied and I don’t blame her, but I am happy that they are sharing their bliss over the baby moving. I think they need to celebrate with a bit of hanky panky, don’t you think? Oh by the way, I agree with what Tina had said earlier about Lucy, Bette needs to get over it!
Aww that was so sweet. Tina needs to get a hold of herself. Count to ten and think before she lets her insecurities make he say hurtful things to Bette.
ally…Bette never answered the question: Did she fuck the Professor? Inquiring minds want to know….so does Tina.
God, for a minute here, I really thought Helena was going to be feeling the baby before Bette… She would have blown a fuse! But Helena was wise enough (or maybe scared for her life) to push Tina towards the “other” mommy first… God Tina, get a grip! YOU should have been the one to think about that. On the other hand, I really understand Tina’s unsecurities… It doesn’t matter what people around you say when you have a bad day and you feel aweful, it’s very hard to feel otherwise. Gosh, your Helena is being extremely wise today, Ally, indeed she’s been the Yoda in both your updates! Hel’, the girls and their fans thanks you! But most thanks go to you, lovebird!
beautifully written – insecurity so hard to control but such a waste of emotion really,
damn it ally, you’re going make me cry. they going to be so happy when the baby comes. oh yeah are we going to find out if bette and alana ever did the deed?
this chapter was very very good is normal for Tina feel insecure but she need to try to get some control about it in order to enjoy her pregnancy.
Fabulous as always. I think there should be a pill for the non-pregnant partner/spouse/husband to take during a pregnancy that makes their hormones as whacked as the one that is preggers. Sure we even the playing field, well, that or make the impending child completely insane! LOL…can’t wait for more Ally, thanks for writing!
Hi Ally, I am so loving the L Wing. As a brilliant piece of writing it never ceases to amaze me. I love the ease with which it goes from serious drama to humorous comedy. Tina does need to believe that Bette is completely enraptured by Tina and their child. The simple scene of letting the other mother feel their child move was wondrous. Just as new life is. Honest protrayal of pregnancy as Tina blows hot and cold. Hormones do play havoc with your emotions and the most stupid of things grab hol of you and need love, understanding and reassurance by the bucket load to overcome. I do feel that there will be more to the Alana story so can’t wait to see what happens next. Many thanks for this entertaining and delirious drama. Your Loyal Fan.
I know u have to do it for dramatic tension BUT I hated Bette’s reaction to T’s insecurity…in real life, when I had a baby. it is something that turns some women like me uncontrllably ultracrazy & insecure so I empathize with T here and I think B was real mean to storm off and then leave T suffering for the time she did and then to expect an apology from Tina. Frankly I saw a totally precious spoilt Bette in that scenario..If I was T I’d be pissed off with her…jmho… and she should volunteer the info about if she slept with this woman…pps
Beautiful chapter Ally!
yes, bette is sexy when is pissed off. haha, i think tina that you have created is just as sexy. and i like the way you have written in varying degrees of jealousy and insecurity into the characters.
Beautiful. I like when Bette gets pissed off. She’s sexy. Her alphaness is sexy.
Can we have some hair-pulling cat fights over Alana? I think that could be fun. Not between Bette and Tina, I mean the rest of the crew.
Good chapter. Bette is sexy when she pissed off!