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The L Wing – chapter 52
We all pile into the kitchen and mom goes into Mother Hen mode – -dad makes the coffee and mom asks Bette what sort of pie she would like.
What ever you have Mrs Kennard – whatever you have
Oh fatal Bette
I whisper placing my hand on Bettes thigh as mom opens the giant freezer.
Well I have about six sorts of savoury pie and three sorts of sweet pie
Oh boy — I have died and gone to heaven — Mrs Kennard — I couldnt interest you in becoming my personal chef could I ?
Bette jokes. Or we could put huge catering orders in for just freezers full of your moms pies
Bette will have any pie that you put in front of her I say with a laugh delighted that the atmosphere has eased a lot and this is a treat Bette – you eat too much bad food – and not enough fruit and veg
Yes Tina babe –
My mum gets out a giant steak pie and Bettes eyes light up.
How large an order could you put up for the Residence ?
No Bette
Be quiet Tina — this is a business deal – Lucy — get me your moms business card to me without Tina finding out will you ?
I better not – I dont want her to say I cant live in her apartment
Lucy honey — your mom is your immediate danger — not your sister. And when you come to Washington if you dont bring a pie or two with you there will be an office without any windows waiting for you
Thats blackmail
No Lucy – that is striking a deal that makes us both happy — I get pie — preferable without the food police
she makes a dramatic nod in my direction
finding out and I make sure you get a really good summer job – what do you fancy ?
I laugh.
As she is my sister Id say any job that involves the contact with the maximum number of pretty girls
Hey – Im spoken for as are you Tina
True
I take hold of Bettes hand and softly place it against my lips
And that is how things are going to stay from now on
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(36 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
one cherry pie to go please….food flattery – works everytime – great couple of chapters – any leftovers for later?
goodness, brilliant :)!
I want to tell you that I really like the reality that you have created for Bette and Tina. I truely love this story. I have been reading it while I’m ill at home recovering from a serious heart and back problem and your story has kept me from going completly nuts of pain and boredom. That you for that. I love POTUS and her press secretary. Please continu!
I went to church (to keep the peace in the houshold) and I could not hear a word that the guy was saying. I kept thinking about what Tina’s parents were going to say. I get home and not one chapter but two chapters await my reading pleasure. I love this story and hope that you will continue to brighten my days to come. Glad that you are feeling better. I wish that I could eat some ice cream right now.
Just goes to show…Bette Porter….And Pie….What more could Tina ask for!!!!…So momma Kennard may take a little more convincing…..But the whole story has a kinda “feel good” edge to it….which is great!
Oh, Ally, you made my weekend with your four brilliant chapters!
Thank you for making this a wonderful story, please continue!
Don’t let your bosses get to you, just wright your story during business hours. I won’t tell them ;)
what a great weekend you made it for us. Thanks for the chapters. have fun at work.
omg u make me cry, laugh and run around screamong all in the same paragraph!ur an awesome writer….makes me proud to be a brit!!!!!
How about some apple pie w/that coffee ice cream? Yum, yum. Great story. Who’s going to deny having the POTUS as an in-law? Oh, yeah maybe if the Prez is GWB.
Ally, this chapter is brilliant just brilliant. Your writing makes so many people happy and I am so overjoyed and proud to be able to say that you are my best friend.
WOW!!! just great I love it. More please soon. Thank you
Really like how Bette handles herself no doubt she’s the commander in chief. How nice you are to write for us while you are recovering – these last two chapters were lots of fun- thanks.
The Porter charm gets them every time! Please keep posting!
Can you eat some more Ice Crean and write another one. this was brilliant thanks
Damn Bette is so charming and awesome, she so funny and sweet. Now let see what’s next, thanks!
Ally, thanks for another wonderful chapter! Glad to see tha Ma Kennard seems to be coming around. She may still need some convincing but I’m sure Pa Kennard will help work on her. I think she does see Bette’s sincerity when telling her how much she loves Tina. It’s also understandable for a parent to be protective of her child.
…..presidential decreegreat line; post again soon! Love this story.
another amazing chapter i am greateful that you posted another one! this is good i never doubt about the porter charm, Tina’s mother is a difficult person but she only wants the hapinnes for her daugther i hope B&T can convince her of that they have true love. i hope you continue keep better. take care
Leave it to Porter to ease the tension. I can’t wait for B&T to go public. Alice will shit a brick for not figuring it out!
Ahhhh, I LOVE it!!!!!
Pie: bringing people together! Excellent. I love Lucy. On to the next chapter…
I don’t suppose we can persuade you to write another chapter tonight, can we?
Thank you!
Another brilliant chapter. Great! Keep writing.
how sweet! i think i have a crush on lucy…
cute..pls post again..
woohoo~ i read three chapters in one go!thx for the posts!!!
Wow. i am truly blessed. So glad to hear you are feeling better, you are truly gifted as a writer
leave it to bette to make everyone fall in love with her….loved the chatty banter at the end, just like one big family
I cant find the words to explain how happy I am that you posted again today another brilliant chapter, going back to read it. Now if you were to post again today I will love you forever
Hmmm, pie-lover Bette, or pie-breaker Bette? maybe both. lol
Gee, Ally, after all that drama in the last chapter and they end up in a happy family portrait gathered around the kitchen table. And eating pie, none the less. You must be feeling better. Good.
I absolutely love this story and have no idea why I have not found it before. It is a real page turner so much so that this is the first Comment I’ve made since Chapter 1!
Bette as the President is great and Tina as Press Secretary brilliant. As an absolute TiBetter I am so happy having them together sorting out all the issues. caused by their relationship
Great !