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The L Wing – chapter 53
She swallows and keeps looking at me.
Maybe in a sex game like this I might not lose that badly after all. And it is a sex game – we are not going to talk about much else but sex.
Go on
I grin
I like how both sets of your lips taste . You have beautiful lips Tina – but if you make me pick. I couldnt because I love every part of your body Tina – I love your toes, I love your ankles – I love tasting the back of your knees – I like biting your ass, I like running my finger up and down your spine. I love every part of your body.
Oh Bette. I love you too — so much.
So – why dont you tell me more about what you have learnt about lesbian sex – or you could keep flattering me – Im happy to hear any of your pearls of wisdom.
I challenge seeing that Tina has gone slightly red – its not the sun which is too low in the sky – must be my words — well done Porter.
Okay – question time Bette – have you always been as loud as you are now ?
ME LOUD ? That is damn rich coming you.
I retort – Tina laughs again – she knows she has hit a nerve.
Porter – you are one loud woman. How the hell did you keep your lovers secret when you scream so fucking loud when you come ?
Me ? – You are a hell of a lot louder than I am. Grief – you are even loud when youre undressing.
Am not
You are.
We both laugh.
Who was the first person to catch you having sex with a woman ?
I consider the question before finding the answer.
Kit – it was here actually. I was with the married lover – the one who dumped me when her husband got hint of it. Anyway — Kit was staying with me – helping me decide what work needed doing on the place – I had only bought it a few weeks previous. Anyway — her husband had been called to a script meeting in New York so she had come over. I was ridiculously thrilled and we ended up half naked making out in the main living room – that was before I had those doors installed. Anyway – Kit walked in and caught us.
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Great chapter a total surprise there!……well wasnt expecting it so soon and possibly from Tina…so loved it..thanks
oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!that was such a great chapter and an even better ending i luv, luv, luv this story!!u rock!!!!!
Well, now that I’ve recovered from choking on the sandwich that I was eating due to Tina’s proposal, I can thank you for this excellent chapter. Ally, please let me know if I need to take time off work to read all of the chapters that may appear in the next few weeks. As always, please post soon.
Quote: TBC ?? close quote Is that a tease Ally – just get the ice cream will you! of course we want more – how could you think not?frankly i’d have to stare at the ceiling i’m that bored right now – see I NEED you to write more
I wonder if Bette will like the fact that Tina was the one to pop the question… I am so looking forward to more chapters from you so get to it.
and there it is ooooooh wonder how bettes gonna take taht one me thinks one may be a bit upset she didnt get to do the on your knees please part lol post soon nerves are kicking in now
you need to post soon or i will die from curiosity ;)
Well…..seems like Tina has some alpha tendencies herself. Ah yeah, she gave Bette a bit of an argument over who would carry whom over the threshold once they were married as soon as they arrived at the Virginia house. You were planning this all along, weren’t you, Ally? 2 weeks off? Lucky girl. Minimal gardening, maximal writing, please.
Well, how perfect (and unexpected) was that proposal! I was just thinking last night of a different way to propose to someone than the usual wine and dine, etc. (not that I have anyone special at this time…just thinking). Anyway, I loved it!! …and you weren’t the only one thinking Tina was going for the crotch Lamentamini ;)
FUNNYONE — as you well know i have barely started yet — and yes i had this chapter planned all along . an almost world first — a chapter i have planned — don’t worry -0 it will not happen again babe
Oh come on..you don´t have to put Question marks after TBC ..you know we want it;) I love this story very much. I´m just sitting here and do nothing and wait for the next chapter ;)
OFF COURSE TO BE CONTINUE, please Ally more of your incredible chapters…..WOW your are good.
Nice, very nice. and will the last scene be a picture that is on the front of a tabloid with a lewd description that makes Tina’s moms blood boil??
Glad that Tina ask Bette tomarry her, instead od the other way around. Poor Alice, what are they going to do to her, They will scare her to death.Play some prank on her. She should know better. Thanks
Lamentamini same here, I thought Tina was going pull dwn B’s tracks, and dive right in, I was soo prepared for that an all lmao’ .. soo gutterish ahahaha, anyway another gd chap!, and definatly a suprise, to see Tina propose
WOOHOO!!!!!!! I’m so in love with this story. Great installment for sure. And I’m SOOO glad that you are on holiday and will be writing. Have a great holiday ally!
waooooo! you let me spechless i didn’t think Tina proposed Bette! this was great! then you will rest for some days i hope you recover 100% and enjoy your free time and post a lot of chapters:) continue pleaseeeeeee
waooooo! you let me spechless i didn’t think Tina proposed Bette! this was great! then you will rest for some days i hope you recover 100% and enjoy your free time and post a lot of chapters:) continue pleaseeeeeee
Hey, I’m gonna sit in front om my computer for the fist 12-13 days waiting….ready to masturbate, oeps, this one came out harsh. Anyway I can’t wait for the many chapters to come. Tour one hell of a woman dear.
Oh that was a wee twist, oh you sooooo better being given us the reply soon lady or else!
Ally, you have turned your comic genius up a notch in this chapter. I loved this chapter so much and I had to stop reading at times because I was laughing so much—Oh but wait you already know that don’t you babe. I liked that you had Tina proposing to Bette. TBC??? What are you crazy? Do you want a bunch of angry lesbians to fly over to the U.K. to string you up by your toes–wouldn’t be your fingers cause then you couldn’t write.
Oh boy, didn’t see that coming! lol… Even though I’m happy that Tina proposed, is she ready to become first lady yet? but I still think they are not ready yet. Too soon, especially Tina hasn’t shared the hidden past of her with Bette yet. Don’t rush things, Tina! Can’t wait… Ally, you don’t even have to ask, continue please.
Go Tina! Ally – this story is sooo good! Love love love it and I can’t wait to read the next chapter! More please!
Sure didn’t see that coming but I’m glad Tina proposed. I’m looking forward to see what joke Bette will play on Alice!! Stock up on those ice cream, Ally and enjoy the 2 weeks off. And what were the ??? doing there after the TBC? You’re kidding, right?!
I’ve decided that the government should prescribe free ice-cream for all so that we get writing of this quality from everyone. Thanks for writing and I look forward to my busy Easter being punctuated by moments of sheer bliss when I read your updates.
Totally beautiful and very cool that Tina asked Bette rather than the other way around.
OMG!!! You have left me jaw dropped!I think your story is one of the best of the site(IF not the best) Post soon!!!
wow, pre-emptive strike from tina? of course you should continue…it was unexpected totally…i have the same question: is tina ready? there’s still her past to deal with…but i’m glad she conciders herself ready, can’t wait for next chapter
You are off!!YaY!! Get lots and lots of ice cream!! Lov this story..My fav
I love that Tina is the one asking Bette to marry her…What am I going to do in San Francisco at night without my computer. Jwet…are you bringing the laptop?
yes.. yes..yes.. i’ll marry you.
When you finish with your gardening will you please skip on by mine and help out. I have a brown and black thumb. Not much of a yard person. Now this was a great chapter. I would love to have my eye poked out by someones breast. Tina just stole some of Bette’s thunder. But what I liked about that is that this shows Bette how much Tina does love her. I sure hope that Bette says hell yes and that they celebrate for a long while to come. Thanks for the post and enjoy your time off.
Very unexpected to have Tina pop the question on this day… can’t wait to see how you carry on. p.s. Will more ice cream get us another chapter soon? For you: http://www.benjerry.co.uk/ouricecream/ ;-)
What do you mean by “TBC ???”, of course we want you to continue posting. Where should I send the ice cream? What flavor do you want? Whatever it takes to keep you writing. Did I mention I love your story?
Now, that was unexpected! I thought after all the discussions in this story that Bette would be the one asking when she thought Tina was ready. Guess Tina’s ready, huh? Thanks for the story and I’m glad to hear that you have some time off and will be gracing us with more chapters more often.
That was suprising that Tina purposed to Bette, I was thinking it was going to be Bette. Right on! Please continue!
Another great installment. Get lots of ice cream!
Tina popping the question and beating Bette to the punch and yet Bette still doesn’t know what gives Tina nightmares….
Damn this is awesome and way to go Tina. Ok let see how Bettes react. Post soon please, thanks!
This saga just gets better as each chapter is posted. Thanks.
excellent chapter, excellent story
Nice and surprising move to have Tina propose first. I guess that means that Tuna is okay with them coming out as a couple. I mean it will be kind of hard for Bette to hide a ring that she is suddenly wearing. In addition I am supecious of your mention of a photographer maybe taking pictures of them. Was that an intentionl slip. Great job on this chapter with all of the talking, game playing and bonding between B&T, it was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sweet. Please continue :o)
oh wowza!!! awesome as always…i can neva get bored of your writing ally
WOW!! Way to go Tina!!!!!!!! MOre Please Soon
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I don’t think anyone saw that coming. I actually thought when I clicked to page 3 that Tina would bury her face into Bette’s crotch. Guess we all know where my mind is. LOL I’m making no assumptions here. I have to know what Bette’s answer is soon!
what a twist!!!!! but when oh when will u be telling us of Tina’s past, the part in which has her so tormented etc…. bring on the NC17’s notice the ‘s at the end of NC17. lol
It’s not a question! Finish your gardening and give us a new chapter!! lol Thanks all the way.
HeY Alley, That was asouding!!! Who’d ha thunk it that Littl’ Ol’ Tina would be the one to pop the question especially after the way her parents treated Bette. I am sure that Bette’s refuse to deny the seriousness of their relationship only solidified Tina’s knowledge that Bette is the woman to make her heart complete; the woman that Tina would change for; the woman who unites her soul. WOnderfully written and crafted. And Woo Who as to the hope of a flow of Fan fics from your great self. Yeah, I am here waiting for the enjoyment and pleasure to begin. What will Bette’s reply be? How will the parents and rest of the gang take the news. Please make it soon as I can’t wait. Thank you, Your Loyal Fan.
Well done Tina! Always the first story I read – and never been disappointed. Extra scoop of ice-cream for you girl!
Great Chapter!! Loved that Tina proposed!!! This is going to get even better, isn’t it!!! I can’t wait! Sure, there is going to some times when they go public, but the lovin will make it okay!! plz post B’s reply soon!!
Alice, on a government computer, going into chatrooms – sounds like a potential security risk! Thanks!
So glad you had Tina do the asking. Especially with Bette’s job, its important that there is a balance of power. Great chapter. Thanks :)
Well, it’s obvious that Bette “Edible Nipples” Porter can’t say no… right?
Wonderful chapter – Thank you so very much for writing!!!