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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
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The Planet had been a second home for Dana since the first time she
went there with Alice a little over six years ago and it had always
been the place she felt completely comfortable about being herself in.
Besides when she was on the tennis court, of course.
Unfortunately that comfortable feeling which Dana had accepted as
simply being the norm when it came to spending time at The Planet had
recently been replaced by one of distinct unease. All because Kit hired
Lara to be her head chef and was on the premises almost constantly. Now
it wasn’t the redhead herself that was the problem, far from it. The
problem instead came from precisely who Lara was dating.
Gabby ***** Deveaux.
Every day and every night Gabby ***** Deveaux was in The Planet,
smiling and joking and being her smug charming self like she always
was. With not only Lara, though that did bother the athlete, but with
Alice as well. And when it came to Gabby ***** Deveaux and Alice? Dana tended to get a lot more than bothered.
She tended to get angry, she tended to get jealous, and she tended to
get on the almost insane side of her emotional spectrum. The worst part
of the situation was that Gabby knew what she did to Dana. Each time
she had come into The Planet and saw her there with Alice, smiling and
joking and doing the things that Dana hated her for she would get this
look.
Alice was the writer, she was good with words whether it be spoken or
written, they were her thing. Dana was good at tennis and that was it
in her opinion. Which was why she didn’t know exactly how to describe
the look Gabby formed when she would see her with Alice. One thing was
for sure though, to her it was a look that said quite clearly that
Gabby understood that the athlete was jealous. She understood and she
didn’t care. No, if anything Gabby seemed to mock Dana for it with that
look she gave and it made Dana want to punch her even though she didn’t
have the slightest idea of how to punch anyone. Maybe she should ask
Howie about that something told her he would probably know.
But Gabby would give that look and Dana would get angry then
uncomfortable because throughout all the time they’d known each other,
Alice had always been able to tell when the brunette was angry. So
being Alice, she would ask Dana why she was angry and Dana couldn’t
tell Alice it had to do with Gabby when Gabby was sitting right there
and she also couldn’t tell Alice because it was just a look, you know? It was just a look.
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ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.