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    The line begins to blur PT 1

    Story written on June 16, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61334
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    What if Shane and Carmen met under diffrent circumstances?

    The line begins to blur. PT 1

     

    Carmen and I are in bed. She straddling me and her tongue is in my ear. She’s telling me in detail about how my hand makes her feel. Her words are getting more and more apart. But one thing is constant “Shane…….Shane……ummmmmmmm” and on and on. She does this puts on this show so I won’t leave her. It’s not really a show it’s more of a show of affection. She loves me, my hand. I love her and the body that comes with her. She’s got both arms around my neck and now she’s trying to get control again. She has these long finger nails and I can’t stand it. She comes loud and it seemed to last forever. She  is shaking and pulling my hair to hold on. We do this a lot. Especially when her boyfriend is at work.

     

    Her boyfriend who she says she loves in her own weird way, a boyfriend she swears she has never had sex with before.

     

     He’s the leader of the other crew. The pretty boys from the good side of the bridge.

     

     When she starts kissing my neck I tell her to stop. I say “Carmen stop, you don’t have to do this!” I tell her that Havoc will be home soon. She moans in my ear “Shane please, I want to touch you so bad……” We are in his hideout. “Shane, your not afraid of Havoc are you?” “No” I say, but you have to admit it will be bad if he walks in right now.”

     

    What did I know of bad? This crew had been my whole life. When my dad died all I had left was being a member of Slayer X. I would never break the code but I sure did bend it a bit. Carmen was an Outsider. I was in Slayer X and neither the gangs shall meet. Unless it was to race. It sounds primitive and it is. But that’s the life you know. Havoc her “man” was the leader of the Outsiders. I never got there names.

     

    I met Carmen at Elliot Mears’s apt a year ago.

     

     Mark and I where chilling on the couch that smelled of cat piss, when she came in. All tan skin, dark hair  a body that you would smash through a brick wall for. Mark was about to point her out when he noticed me looking at her.

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    5. Baby-girl, this is priceless!! Seriously, you have gotta’ continue . . . I mean finally something different, I really like this, If you don’t continue soon, I will die . . . So unless you want to be put down for 1st degree, I suggest you continue and SOON!!!! LMFAO!!! LYLAS ;-p

    8. Hey, hello . . . is this thing workin’ . . . . YOU NEED TO UPDATE NOW, LIKE NOW, AS IN NOW, WHICH MEANS RIGHT NOW!!! LMFAO!!! PLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEE!!!!!!!!! DO IT BEFORE I GO INSANE!!! LYLAS ;-p

    9. ‘West Side Story’ meets the ‘L Word’. Perfect. Love how you’ve written the characters & Shane & Carmens instant attraction to one another. Amazing start, plz post soon.

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