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The Loudest Whisper
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The Loudest Whisper
PART THREE
Monday morning came and it was time for the girls to get back to their studies. Aunt Teresa was instructing her Theatre class; Bette and Tina allowed her to run the class once a day for 30 minutes.
“No, no Sarah dear you’re reading it all wrong.” Teresa interrupted the young student while she was reading from Shakespeare’s Hamlet. “I need you to picture yourself as Ophelia, put a little more emotion into your words…”
While the rest of her fellow students were in their classes, Ellen decided to go to class on her own time. After taking a walk down by the lake, she walked back to the school. Little did she know, Bette had been talking a walk with Chris by the lake and saw Ellen.
Ellen quietly crept in trying to be unseen my Teresa, but that didn’t work.
“Ellen! Are you just getting here?” Teresa asked.
“I’m sorry ma’am. I…I wasn’t feeling well…I’m still not feeling well…so I stayed in my room to rest a little.”
“I’m sorry you’re not feeling well, but you need to tell one of your instructors if your feeling ill, why didn’t you tell one of us this morning?”
“That’s because she’s not really sick.” Bette said as she leaned against the doorway. “Isn’t that right Ellen?”
Ellen glared at Bette, “I am too sick! I have a pain!”
“Now Bette, if the girl says she has a pain then she has a pain.” Teresa said.
“Girls you can leave now and get ready for your arithmetic class with Miss Kennard.”
All the girls gathered their books, including Ellen.
“Ellen, I’d like you to stay for a minute.” Bette requested.
“But I don’t want to be late for—“
“I would like for you to stay for a moment” Bette said again sternly.
She sat Ellen next to her on the couch. “Ellen…why do you keep lying to us?”
Ellen ignored Bette’s question.
“Bette…maybe we should let her go rest—“ Bette cut Teresa off.
“There’s no need for that I know she’s not sick, I saw her down by the lake…she wasn’t resting in bed.”
Teresa looked at Ellen with disappointment, “Ellen! Nice young ladies don’t lie!” She said as she left the room.
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Hello C… Holy Wow… that was intense… the emotions were so vibrant and very Primal… Tina had better learn to reign in her attitude or she will risk losing everything… you are doing such an amazing job at capturing this story… and yet making your own mark on it.. wooooo hoooo… this was exceptional… but then again what can I expect from “The Artist” :)… you rock and roll… highly anticipating the next chappy… mucho love and hugs, JC Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels…
Bot all girls are like that I hope. It would take very little of that girl to become angry. Dear Auntie,Hope she isbt real. When will Bette find out that Tina is in love with her?? Lpve the school Ma’am type for both. thanks
That was very interesting and the sooner this aunt leaves the better, so they can have the whole place for themselves. I still hate this Chris, I guess I feel the same way as Tina does, sorry. Post soon dear, thanks.
Wow Coffees back, WELCOME, sorry I missed the first few chapters and so glad I caugh up. I never saw the movie and think I’ll go rent it after your story is complete. That said I hope not to see it for a long time. There is going to have to be a lot of resolve here. Very interesting time frame, when did that talking mirror come to life, I can hear Tina, Mirror,Mirron on the wall, don’t worry Coffee will fix it all. Thank you, Md
Coffee, you posted again! Yaaay! And lookie here, a VERY interesting chappy you brought to light! Wow! Tina’s feiry argument with her aunt Teresa surely raised a lot of tension between them. Teresa really expressed the exact wording used at that time for what Tina is feeling about Bette: “unnatural”. As for that snake called Ellen, Gosh! She’s a major troublemaker and quite a bad actress. Hahaha Bette seems clueless about T’s feelings and apparently, Chris knows something is wrong with Tina, due to her feisty reaction to the engagement news. Those girls getting together to gossip all they heard previously, doesn’t sound good news at all! You’re doing great here, Coffee. You are handling all the scenes very realistic and with an extraordinary pacing. PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties) P.S. Hope to TTYL.
Poor Tina, B&T need to talk. Tina’s aunt is a bitch and don’t like her, hope chris be gone soon. Ellen and those girls are trouble. Please more, thanks!
Uhh, Ohh, it sounds like Tina is going to get caught and then everybody will know that Miss Tina has feeling for Bette.
Oh wow! another chappie.. slowly its all coming out. But is Tina in denial of her Bette-crushing ness? Chris sees it partially. Aunt T sees it all.. n her own twisted way.. and what are all the kids up to??
So Chris and Bette think Tina is upset over the school and her Aunit seem some partial truth..interesting and why are those girls listening in??? PPS
My guess is Ellen told those girls what she heard between B&T that one night. Tina’s aunt sucks. LOL But she’s perceptive.
I’m really liking this one, it’s different from any other story I’v read on the sight. I get the feeling that it won’t be long before it starts to dawn on Tina exactly why she’s jealous. It makes a change to have her be the first one to have feelings!
Hey CS, Thank you foro another fine chapter. Love how all of these stroylines are devekloping. Why is Tina finding it so diffficult to be happy for Bette and Chris. What is Ellen up to? How does Aunt Theresa see the school progressing? Why were the girls listening at the keyhole? You are just keeping me on the edge of my seat. And I am loving every moment of it. It is hysterical to have Bette in a ‘straight’ relationship. Wonder if it is the real deal or is there someone else out there for her. Please continue this awesome adventure soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Think the kids are gonna rat out Tina! but I’m so glad she’s kickin’ her aunt to the curb! PPS
Kidz r such gossips and trouble-mongers especially at boarding school…I know I teach at one. Tina needs to guard her emotions and words. I smell trouble. PPS