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The Lucky Ones
My tongue twitches with the memory of the salty taste of her breasts, then it stings. I drink more rum and feel it change to a throb and a want. Goddammit! No entreating, opening words of wisdom come to me just the tastes of sex and salt, and the smacking sounds of water against a boat rock me deeper into the predicament of what I need to say. My mind hijacked with thoughts of fucking instead of knowing the gestalt of everything – the second, third and fourth poignancies that shade my future, but swim elusive like dark fish that hold the meanings to everything.
It’s undeniable. What’s fogging my insights are opening salvos, and the riddles and masquerades of Alphas. I’m ready to beg her for it, and then marry her for it, and never again let her go to keep it. This paradox between us can’t stay unglued or Love never makes its vessel. I look up to the smoggy LA sky for answers.
Tina sighs and dips her arms in the water to cool them as she paddles slowly in the water. If I didn’t think I’d fall face first into the pool I’d lean down, and capture her raft, and make a long firm lick along her back, and down into her suit.
Joyce got me drunk last week and after a lot of Scotch we had solved it: There’s nothing to us but pretty gestures and seductive lines, if the women of our affections aren’t playing. It’s true. There’s no magic in my life without her. I sense, too, that what awaits me is a piece of music I can’t quite hear, but must entrain, or all this goes away.
I lean back and pretend to study my magazine as I watch Tina sprinkle water along her back. Does sex make any sense? Or is all of it is just a head trip since we fuck each other in our minds as much as in our bodies? And if I could think of the right words, the ”lightning words,” instead of nipples, and what she says into my ear sometimes when she gets close, I would know what to say or do next, but I can’t. I shiver and flip the page. This business of my tongue kidnapping my brain is seriously sidelining me.
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”Oh, by the way this morning Bette gave up being The Top and wanted me to fuck her.” Hahahaha!! Loved it!! Awesome chapter, great to see Bette and Tina together again…as it should be!! ;)
Funny, sweet, sad, sexy, beautiful! Thank you!
Enjoyed it, thanks
FINALLY!! They finally get back to where they belong, with each other. I think Tina will have to drug Bette to keep her off her for awhile.
Wow! I loved this so much! sexy and it was hot.
I liked it when in the forest Bette realized that what she really wants: to be at home with Tina and Angie. the pool scene was great, drinking rum and horny Bette is a good combination.
I am very pleased that Tina was honest and told everything to Bette. and Bette that has not responded too, I hope Jodie quickly out of the picture, of course, in Blackbird style ;)
I loved it and look forward to the next chapter.
BB…thx for the great post…together again…my tears have stop falling!!…your writing draws you in like you’re right there w/ all the characters in the story..and such emotion….truly amazing…. I’ve missed you, tho…keep up your awesome work… Looking forward to more great posts…laters
BB….Oh…btw….The pics are totally awesome!!!…hot!!! …great work…
LOVING the pics in the fics!
blackbird.. that was the most intense sexual story that is torturing my thoughts.. wonderfully done. i had no idea Bette was with a man in college.. i always thought she was lesbian all the way…. what a suprise. this is the best chapter cuz it funny, love, sad, and makes the heart grows fonder… wonderfully done .. you’re my favorite writer.. look forward to it always…
I am so happy you brought them together after the Shebar kiss. The sharing of personal secrets required sensitivity and trust and I hope their intimate exchanges will continue. In the past they closed off many lines of communication which could lead to intimacy, and to deeper insight into themselves. Blackbird, this was so beautifully written that I am moved beyond words.
Well done.
Absolutely wonderful.Thank you.
Where are you?
Ms. BB,
Where art thou? You and your stories are sorely missed. I hope no one clipped your wings or bird napped you. I am quite sad. Everyday I look for your posting but alas, nothing, nada. You have such an unique spin on Tibette stories. So enjoyable, so delectable. Were you caught up in the World Cup, Wimbledon…….?
Hopefully you’ll return very soon. Your loyal fan, burning up in AZ, azmama. ;-)
Yes I couldn’t stand another moment of them not being together, but OMG Bette having a miscarriage what a shocker and nice twist love it who would of thought….tibette moments coming up
Recalling this story, to update me
more forward.
Loved this chapter
Mscully,
Good to see you! I hope you’ve discovered my new book, Touch Tones, where I begin Season 7. To prepare to write S07 I did go back into WeHo and read back several stories and now Touch Tones has 4 great Chapters. The last stories in WeHo that prepare readers for Season 7 are:
The Lucky Ones: https://lesfan.com/?p=85893
Coming Home here: https://lesfan.com/?p=86129,
Malibu: https://lesfan.com/?p=86144.
That is my recommendation. Now, Season 7’s inspired NEW book, Touch Tone’s Chapter One is titled, #1. After Midnight, and begins an hour after Malibu ends. The first chapter is
Touch Tones: After Midnight is here: https://lesfan.com/?p=86526.
Chapter Two is called, #2. Touch Tones: The Handler and is here: https://lesfan.com/?p=86539.
The next story (#3) is Touch Tones: The Ringer L Word is here: https://lesfan.com/?p=86574.
Chapter 4, #4 Touch Tone: Kryptonite and is here: https://lesfan.com/?p=86655. Kryptonite is a story I had great fun in writing, too.
Now! Welcome to The L Word inspired Season 7.
Dreaming up more great adventures for us all.
Thank you for reading.
Blackbird
SexiestNanz Caballes @SexiestNanz 7h7 hours ago
@Blackbird_write “The Lucky Ones” it is! You kept me glued on my bed that I when I started reading it,I don’t want to stop til I’m done…
As I get to the end of my reread of this sgtory I remember again how much I enjoyed this Chapter.
Really Great BB !
It’s great for u to view and alternated these scenes into your own version, thank u for sharing stories with us readers