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The “M” Word… Chapter 20 Massages to the Music
The M Word Chapter 20 Massaging to the Music.
The previous episodeKit and Demarco are on stage singing.
Bette and Tina are dancing together as is Bryan/Maria & Carmen/Shane.
The mini concert ends. The Planet starts to empty.
Kit and Demarco are talking about the show and smiling together.
Wow those two have great chemistry together. Tina said to Bette
Bette looks but she doesnt want her sister getting involved with a younger man.
She thinks her sister is too vulnerable.
Hey Bette and Tina Maria calls out after she had kissed Bryan good bye.
Your not riding with Bryan? Bette asked as she turned and saw Bryan with his friends walking out the door.
They are going out for more drinks. He needs some time with the guys anyway. Maria adds.
Wow Kit you were fabulous Shane said as she and Carmen walked up to Kit.
Thanks it felt good being up there. The crowd had a great vibe which helped me even more. Kit added.
I thought she was amazing she carried me the entire set. Demarco said as he walked up behind Kit and gave her a hug.
You are too kind Demarco. Kit added You make me feel like an eighteen year old again.
Hey you know I am up for it if you need tutoring in that area. Demarco said in a *****
tone. Baby age is nothing but a number.
Kit looked at him and smiled. She was a little embarrassed. Then Bette, Tina, and Maria came up to them.
Kit I loved your performance. Tina said as she gave her a hug.
Bette agreed as she looked a Demarco a little judgmental.
You must be Kits sisters she was bragging about? Demarco said as she reached out and shook Bette and Marias hands.
You must be the gorgeous sister-in-law. Demarco said to Tina.
Yes we are..and you must be the younger singer my sister as been spending all her extra time with. Bette adds.
So what did you think of the other acts? Kit says as she tries to change the subject.
I enjoyed the entire show. I think it is going to be a huge draw. Maria added.
I agree. Tina said as Bette shook her head in agreement.
Well we better get goingIm sure Joseph is tied up and locked up in the closet by now. Bette said.
Who is Joseph? Demarco asked.
Oh he is our baby sister. I have a 2 year old and they have a 3 year old. Maria added. They all hugged Kit and they left.
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(47 votes, average: 3.74 out of 5)
What’s up with a 1?
Maria has to sort her shit out. She’s scared that Bryan is like her but she’s the only Ho in their relationship.
Ouch—poor Maria
Btw. I didn’t give the 1. I do like this story I just think Maria is projecting what she does onto Bryan.
I never said you gave the 1………
I was just reacting to what you said about Maria. Its all cool. Maria does have some issues with her choices.
All good. I think the people that usually give 1 are to scared to give comments (I don’t know why). I suppose I was a bit harsh on Maria, but I look forward to see how you work on her issues.
What the hell, Maria need to calm down a littl bit and work thing out. Post soon, thanks!
I really don’t like Maria in this story, and I don’t think Bette would tolerate her like she does
Just read you two latest chapters – great work….but maybe Maria should start looking back into her own past before she judges Bryan. Keep up the good work. Post soon
GREAT CHAPTER.MARIA NEEDS TO CHILL OUT.PLEASE POST SOON