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The Marrying Man 4
Did she say why she didn’t feel well?
She complained of a migraine.
Did she get migraines often?
Pretty regularly, at least a few times a month.
What happened after the kids woke you?
I called Shannon, Sherry’s sister, and asked if I could bring the kids over for the evening because Sherry wasn’t feeling well. She said okay, so I dropped them off and returned home. I went in the bedroom to check on Sherry and I tried to wake her to see if she needed anything. I was unable to wake her and it didn’t seem like she was breathing so I panicked. That’s when I tried CPR. That didn’t work so I dialed 911 to get some help.
What time did you call for help?
I don’t know it must have been around sunset; 6:30pm or so.
Does your wife normally nap in the middle of the day?
No, but she sleeps a lot whenever she had a migraine.
Oh ok. Is there anything else Mr. McBride?
Eric, call me Eric. And there is nothing else that I can think of if I think of anything else I’ll call.
Ok, thanks Eric. I appreciate you taking the time out to give us this information.
No, problem. Am I free to go now?
Sure.
Bette glanced over her notes and a frown formed on her face. Bette looked up at her partner Shane McCutcheon and shook her head.
‘You know Shane, something about him doesn’t sit well with me. It took him 6 hours to get concerned enough about his wife to check on her and call 911. It just doesn’t make any sense.’
Yeah Bette, I noticed something unusual about him too. It was almost like he was acting. One minute he was fine and the next he was crying hysterically and rocking back and forth. Puzzling. But from what I heard the death may be due to natural causes. I guess we’ll have to wait for the autopsy report to come in.
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poor naive tina…i hope bette will figure it out in time
Yeah, she will be lucky to be breathing air within a year of her marriage to dirt bag Eric. Oh Bette, please hurry and save Tina from certain death.
tina stop bette will help u
I can’t wait for the next post. How is Bette going to solve this mystery? I hope he doesn’t embalm or cremate the body? Where is her family?Either way, i hope Bette is able to help Tina be4 she ends up another victim of Eric McBride/ Love.
and the saddest part is how many otherwise intelligent women fall for this every day, thinking their Prince Charming has arrived…and signing their lives away, sometimes literally..
susannah, I couldn’t agree with you more. This for me is part of why I find this story so interesting; because in reality, it DOES happen. My mind cant begin to imagine how he’s going to rid himself of the kids. PPS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was just thinking the same thing. I saw a movie several years ago where a man took out insurance policies on I think every member of his family. Another thing that makes this interesting is a lot of this is from Eric’s POV.
It is very sad that this sort of shit happens in real life. Great story!
dang this is a good story i love it!!!!!
Fuck a duck O.o Eric has tina put under a spell, but nothing Bette can’t handle! We need princess charming in the house! Wonderfull!