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Frozen – Chapter 3 – The Mirror
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I lowered my gaze, as that was the only thing I could do, poured me a glass of water and sat at the table. As much as it scared me, being there with her, I was too attracted to just go away. A moth drawing closer and closer to the light, her weakness, the knowledge of a fatal entounter left behind. The nightmare was becoming reality and the mirror, invisible to my eyes, was showing me the shadow that had been haunting me for six years. Unable to move, I sat there, waiting for the familiar noise to hit me, to make me scream. I wanted to feel something, anything; even if that meant to feel the sharp pain I knew I would feel. The sense of emptiness was worse.
Have you ever been alone in the company of someone else? That’s how I felt, that night. I’ve never been so far away from her as I was right then. An invisible object, there was no light reflecting off my surface to make me visible to her eyes. A sheet of shadows and darkness clouded her sight, I’ve been the one to stretch it. A transparent surface is what was left of me. The water in the glass before me reflecting my face was the only thing that proved I still existed.
After about half an hour I, finally, got the courage to start talking again “Tell me something” I said. It was not a demand; my voice had a pleading tone. I was going mad. The silence was too noisy. I needed to do something. I needed, I had to make her see me again. I wanted to be visible again. She was my light. Without the light, an object cannot be visible.
Her eyes rose and met mine; she said nothing, her expression unreadable. Years ago, I would have known what she was thinking; she would probably raise a brow inquisitively, inviting me to explain myself. She did nothing of the sort, so I went on “How are you?”
She set her jaw, “Fine”. Okay, it was still the same flat tone, but it was a start, at least, she was talking.
I did not expect her to ask me the same question, since I knew she didn’t give a damn and I couldn’t blame her “I heard you opened a couple of galleries”
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Wow thankyou…… love your story….. pps
I needed to know that apart from the way she was acting, there was still the same Bette I knew, the one capable of freeing me from any fear and pain. This woman – the one I created – scared me. The Modern Prometheus, someone left alone by the same person that molded him. He only asked for someone who could understand him, but his own creator rejected him, turning him into a monster thirsting for revenge.
THIS IS VERY GOOD. I’m very delighted to see this story carry on. Good JOB! Keep rolling.
Wow, I’m lost for words.
I love the way you write Tina’s feelings.
I know it wil take a long journey before there will be any B&T happiness, but i kinda find it harsh from Helena to fuck with Bette when Tina and Angelica are in the same house. She must know how painful that must be for Tina. And afterwards acting as a dutiful friend, yuk!
For Bette, she is so cold, but i can understand her, but i dont like it.
Great update!
I understand Bette but its hard to read,great update,thank you.
Wow, speechless, I don’t know how to feel, I mean I truly understand where Bette coldness is coming from and Tina deserves every bit of it but I mean come Helena and Bette fucking omg that just plain cruel. Helena is an ass right now as usual and I know Bette doesn’t care for Tina anymore but even she has to know this is low. Smh I guess I can drop the hope for a reconcil right now but I’m happy Bette not giving in to Tina easilyand I hope for many late nights run ins in the kitchen betwwen them
your talent with words, just amazes me, my friend!
It was simply wonderful. I almost felt Tina’s pain.
She committed the biggest mistake of her life and has to live with it, and her dream: the image in the mirror show this. loved it!
Helena was a whore here too, as most of the story (“what must the enemy of the people, if have such friends?”)
It was hard to read that Bette has become cold. I hope we can read quickly, so that the ice melts, and the darkness goes away. :) (I hope you understand the hint?) ;)
I look forward to the next chapter.
Ouch I felt Tina’s pain. Great story.
Poor Tina, salt rubbed in an open wound.
Thanks
This is so sad
I loved all of your previous stories but this one is the best yet!
If I were Tina I’d pack up my things and leave but of course she can’t thanks to the storm you threw in. Good thinking now she has to stay and face her demons (Bette).
So looking forward to see how this story continues with Bette and Tina under the same roof. It’s bound to give some sparkles either the furious or the loving kind just hope they’re not gonna kill each other in the process.
Thanks for the update, love it!
Wow! Helena is a cow. Too cruel to do that with your “friend’s” ex while your “friend” is in the room next door. Of course, this why Bette didn’t mind Tina being there – she knew how it would play out, at least initially. I can’t wait to see where this goes! PPS.
Love it! Such angst, sadness..perfect! You did well my friend. What I really like is how Bette is and how Tina feels. I find nothing wrong in Belena, although noone probably agrees with me, but Helena was there for 6 yrs, helped Bette, we actually don’t know what their ‘relationship’ really is like, and although I’m a tibetter noone can deny that they’re the hottest couple, at least by physical criteria. I do wish it stays Belena till end but doubt it. And everyone keeps forgeting tibette had their problems, but getting man and taking a child especially in those conditions (samesex couple, together for 8yrs etc.) well that’s fucked up. Can’t wait to see how it’ll play out, with Angelica and all. And I disagree with Bette forgiving Tina for it all, it should be a loooong loooong hard road to take. And I still cheer for Belena. I know I know nothing from it but…at least we can get some steamy scenes? Or at least please don’t make Helena end up with broken heart. I know, won’t get even that. Eh, well than at least write fast and thanks for posting!
I can’t explain how much your comments mean to me, guys! I’m happy to know you’re loving it, apart from the sorrows and pain, but as I said, it will be worth the long and difficult journey.
Modengo, thank you! I’m glad you got my point. Helena has been there with Bette, when Tina wasn’t. (and yes, they look kinda hot together; but I’m a Tibetter, so…) She’s not a bad figure in my story, even though it looks that way. You all will learn more, in the upcoming chapters. It will take a while, but I hope to post sooner than later.
Thanks everyone!!
My God! This is very painful, Bette is with the heart
cold as a cube gelo.E much suffering my poor
TiBette heart.
And c’mon Bette helena, two Alphas, utter nonsense ..