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    The Mist (Chapter Two)

    Story written on September 2, 2011 by FL2011.
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    The smallest of things can change your life forever. Bette realizes this when she gets a new student in her class. (Bette/Tina)

    “…Well I think you need to work a little more on your opening paragraph.” Bette said. “It’s just a bit too straightforward for me. The opening paragraph is a way to hook your reader into what you’re writing about. It grabs their attention…”

    Need to cook dinner soon. Bette paused, looking around herself all of a sudden. Now she thought she was going a little crazy. These voices that she thought were nonexistent now seemed much more real. She was hearing something, and it wasn’t in her head. It was as if someone was speaking to themselves, expecting not to be heard. But even though they thought they were alone, Bette could hear them perfectly, and it was beginning to frighten her. This was the first thing she heard after trying to decipher the voices for some time…well, the first thing she thought she heard. Who knew if that was what the voice really said. After that phrase, Bette could not decipher the whispering anymore. Slowly, it droned out and all she could hear was Tina’s voice asking Bette if she was alright.

    “Professor?”

    Bette blinked. “I’m so sorry, Tina.”

    Tina grinned and shook her head. “Don’t sweat it professor. Is your mind in a frazzle like mine?”

    Bette laughed. “You can say that.”

    The young woman gave Bette a warm smile. They looked at each other for what seemed to be a long time. Bette’s dark eyes traced Tina’s facial features, looking at them in the same way she saw the art she admired. There was a warmth she felt all over, staring at Tina, a feeling she could not explain. She’d never experienced something like this before.

    With other women, she only felt the need to bed them. They were a way for her to forget about everything in her life in exchange for a quick release. There was nothing special about them like she saw in her student, nothing that set them apart from the rest. Even though she did not know much about her and she was a student of hers, Bette felt like she could tell her anything in the world. It scared her, made her want to run almost, but the brunette could not budge. Tina parted her lips a little, and Bette felt this sudden urge to claim the student’s lips.

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    1. Amazing chapter, it is getting exciting. so what Bette will do with this piece of info dropped by Nadia about Tina? will she have the courage to approach Tina? is it true Tina is getting married? well I’m looking forward to ur next chapter;D

    2. I forgot to write this, Bette relation with her sister Kit is very wonderful, and I’m really worried about Bette hearing voices, is it something in her mind or she can hear people thoughts?

    5. Bette and Kit remind me of me and my sister a bit lol and I’m glad you used Nadia instead of Jodi, Candace, or Kelly actually, though i really don’t like Nadia in fanfics I actually liked her in the show because in a way she brought Bette out of that annoying depression thing she had going on in season 3

    9. Well well, getting more interesting with each chap! But wonder what’s up with the voices? Is T a vampire and Bette her soul mate, or Bette’s going insane, what? :)))PPS!

    10. Hmmm, Tina engaged, well we know whats going to happen with that, don’t we. As for Nadia, she is a good jealous character to have around. Tina will need her to realize her feelings for Bette.

    19. You have an ability to tell a story in an interesting, want to read kind of way. Your characters have depth and are intelligently written. It certainly stands out and is appreciated. I love how Bette oozes confidence even though she might be quaking inside.

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