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The Primary…First Meeting (8)
Shane: Yeah, Okay but that party was amazing, Bette you got so much tail that night.
Bette smiled mischievously at the thought: I know. Those days are over now I guess.
Shane: I can’t believe you can give it up like that Bette. I really admire you’re sudden dislike for variety.
Dana: I can understand it Bette. You’re right, when you find The One, you should do whatever to keep that to never let the opportunity slip away.
Shane: Uh, yeah, since when do you want The One?
Dana: I dunno. Doesn’t everyone want that?
Shane: No.
Dana: Oh.
Bette: Don’t listen to her Dana. The hardest thing to do is melt the heart of the person you love, to give yourself completely and to leave your feelings unguarded.
Alice: She’s right, if you don’t let your guard down, you’ll never understand what it feels like to love completely, or in your closeted case, to love at all, personally I think it’s a sad existence.
Dana: I think I’m starting to agree.
After Dana’s comment, the waiter came over and asked for their orders. Dana remained quiet for most of the night while the other girls chatted away. Following the arrival of the dessert, she excused herself and went to the restroom. Alice was going to join her, but Shane got up quickly and said she’d come too. As soon as they entered the secluded area Shane fixed her self in the mirror and waited while Dana used the bathroom.
Shane: So, you doing okay?
Dana: Huh?
Shane: I said are you all right, you seem a little out of it tonight.
Dana emerged from the bathroom and stared into the mirror.
Dana: No I’m fine.
Shane: When are you planning on telling me about you and Alice?
Dana spun around: Wa..what? There’s ugh, nothing to tell.
Shane: Dana, I’m not blind. I know you guys are still seeing each other. Alice has a whole routine with her ex’s, but it doesn’t include chilling with her friends way after they’re supposedly over.
Dana: How long have you known?
Shane: About a week after you broke up.
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(31 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
Your story just keeps getting better and better. More please and soon I hope!!!
keep writing and i’ll keep readin…
Trick..I love your story and it is getting better and better. I love how you are handling Alice and Dana! 5 pages..I was very excited. please post soon and I will find you. ; )
i like this story. lookin’ forward to your next post.
Just been doing some catching up on your fantastic story here. This is getting better and better all the time. Can´t wait for the party to begin. Post soon
AWESOME STORY