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The Promise
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Alice: Hey
Shane: Hey yourself
Shane sat in bed drinking her milkshake
Alice: Why is that green?
Shane gave her a seductive look.
Shane: Pistachio! Want some?
Alice: Ugh That stuff is disgusting…
Shane: I didnt mean to eat.
Alice blushed and covered her face.
Alice: Calm down Romeo..you take your goofy pills yet?
Shane shook her head no.
Alice: Good take a shower first..last thing I want to do is come back to see you drowned in two inches of water…Then you can get some sleep til I come back.
Alice gave her a wink and Shane nodded.
Shane: Yes Maam.
She gave Alice a salute.
Alright Im outta her. She walked over and leaned in to give Shane a kiss on the lips but opted to give her a kiss on the forehead at the last second.
Shane: Hey!
Alice shivered
Alice: Ugh! Pistachio!
Shane pouted as Alice jogged out of the bedroom.
Shane finished her shake in the bathroom as she started the shower. She couldnt help but notice how quiet the apartment was when Alice was gone. She started humming to herself to stifle the silence. She hated silence as much as she did the dark.
~Ave Maria~ Began to drift out of Shane. She knew the song all too well. She could sing it in six different languages. It was Father Joes favorite song and he often made her sing it to him. But for her…it was the song she sang when she was happy….so she seldom sang it out loud.
Alice reached the parking lot and realized she forgot her laptop and ran back up stairs. As she entered the apartment, she could here a sullen voice drifting through the room. She heard the water running in the bathroom and walked towards it. Her mouth was gaping as she heard the foreign tongue roll from Shanes mouth. She leaned against the wall as she saw Shane walk out of the bathroom and towards the bedroom door. She crept forward and listened as Shane sang while going through her closet. Alice leaned against the wall in awe of Shanes amazing musical talent. She could here the emotions in her voice, but wasnt sure what she was singing about. Alice walked into the bedroom and stood behind Shane as she looked through the closet for Alices smallest t-shirt. Shane turned around and jumped out of her skin.
Shane: ***** Al!
Alice: The who now?
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*stops laughing* okay let’s do it! ;) and again Greeeat chapter and I agree with Ace Shane doped up is absolutly hilarious.. hmmz that makes me think.. maybe i should write when i’m flying high, to see what comes out of the story lol.Keep them coming girl :)
Love Bette and shane,together they are gre great, Love to see Bette so caring. Alice and shane yes. Really hate to tell this we were in the high 70 yesterday and will be today. Rain tho tomorrow. We lived in bangor Ma for about 3 years more snow than I wanted. LOML is from Virginia. so snow ther also But we both loved N E states.THANKS 5 BIG STARS
In a word: amazing. Don’t give up, EVER. I think you got real talent. Loved this one!
I love the friendship between Bette and Shane are so amazing, the relationship between Alice and Shane are great. Love it, please post soon. Thank you!
God, I was laughing so hard my throat started to hurt… haha, this is GREAT!
Wow.. great chapter.. LMAO.. “smell like SEX” just like two siters that relationship is really blossoming…loving it.. and as for the snow…we just got clipped..only 7 inches.. you all got the best of the snow!!!
I like the relationship between Bette and Shane as well.Great chapter.
Shane get off of me…Iâ€M IN THE WET SPOT!
Shane laughed hysterically.
And so did I !! After all the B&T stories I’ve read, I find it hilarious that Bette is lying in a wet spot which is not hers or which she did not cause herself ~ wicked ass grin and thumbs up at ya girl ~ I love your writing!
LMAO… Shane doped up is hilarious!!! Loved the update… And enough with the snow… I’m ready for a little heat ~drags her ass off to paddle through the brown icky sludge~
That was great update. Intense and funny. We see a total different side of Shane and I love it. Keep them coming.