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The Promise
Alice: When did Shane start working out? Focus Alice! You with a kid…thats a scary thought…
Shane became fidgety and started rinsing her hair, turning her back to Alice.
Alice: Look, it doesnt have to be right now, or tomorrow….but you have to and not just once either…I mean if I make you uncomfortable…how about you leave the door open when you shower here?
Shane: Sing to you while Im in the shower? I plan on doing other things to you while Im in the shower.
A seductive grin spread on Shanes face as she turned her head and Alice blushed. Shane leaned against the tile and crossed her arms.
Shane: Youve been doing that a lot lately.
Shane gestured to her face. Alice kicked at the floor and stared at the carpet in front of the tub shyly.
Shane: God shes so ***** hot when shes embarrassed.
Alice: Well then stop making me blush! Anyway, youre changing the subject.
Shane rolled her eyes and pulled the shower curtain closed. Alice was crestfallen and she slowly turned to walk out of the bathroom.
Shane: You owe her everything
The voice in her head hissed, as Shane leaned her head against the shower wall.
Shane: Not this…this is mine, its all Ive ever had. (Shane whispered to the cold tiles.)
Alice stopped in the doorway as she heard Shane trailing off with Its all Ive ever had…
Alice: Its ok Shane, I understand…I was being selfish…and hypocritical. I never even take out my guitar anymore…in fact I leave it in the back of the closet cause Im afraid if someone stops by and sees it theyll ask me to play….anyway Im late I have to get going… Ill be back later.
Alice slithered out the bathroom door completely defeated.
Alice: Why do you always have to push things…Let her come to you…What if she doesnt? (She whispered to herself.)
Shane closed her eyes and put her elbows up over her head on the wall.
Shane: You coward! What if Im no good? She heard like one line of a song…and she CAN sing …and was in a band! Shes never asked you for a single thing! Shes always helped you..shes saving your life!. ***** (She said to the wall.) Dont let her go! Alice (She whispered.)
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(16 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
Oh girl you can do funny aboslutly! lmao the teasing in this story is amazing! and for the last part i really dunno how to help you, i’m waaaayyyyy ‘straight’ forward kinda like alice, always in trouble lol. oh and i’m from Holland, the best place to get high with all that Green here ;) good luck with your situation
No way!!! I’m from Holland too!!! Sorry… got carried away… not often we see a Dutchie on these sites hehe… Your story was hot as always but mainly sweet… I can’t wait till we get past the sex and get to the making ****… Good luck telling your best mate. I’m sure all will go well… I’m sure he’ll be supportive and excellent about it… Why else would you two be best friends… if you didn’t care enough about each other to accept each other no matter what, right? Hang in there, girl!
2 fix in the same day, I’m ok for the rest of the week. I wish you best luck with all you going throught. Every thing going to be find. Do it the simple way. best luck
To anwser your question i didn’t post any fanfic for now. I still don’t know if I will ever. Wait and see, who know’s.
Hey there, man I hope everything goes okay for you!
loving the FFs and all the effort u put in em! Cheers Luv (east-end accent, raisin’ me pint glass to ya!) x
Hang in there gal.. if he is a good friend.. he will love you no matter what team you are batting for!!! we all love you here! sending cyber hugs to you and good luck with the friend.. oh..this was a great post..LMAO>>> cock tease :)
This chapter is good, Alice and Shane are cute together and can’t wait for the next one. Thank you!