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The Promise
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hey guys sorry this one took a few days…it was ALL SHY and M-Raves fault! I swear!…anyway Im really running on empty so this is all Im saying…::ahem:: thanks for all the comments, keep them coming, and nix…youre damn right Im stringing you guys along! ~ JLO
Chapter 31
If youre gonna be a bear…be a grizzly – JAD
Shane opened the large steel door that read S2″ and moved aside for Dash to walk in. The two women wafted through the smoke filled room to find three well dressed thugs sitting and waiting while smoking blunts.
Shane: Hey.
Big Daddy: Mmmm I do remember you alright….lurkin around during Kits video right?
Shane: Yeah…Im Shane and this is Dash.
She motioned to Dash who pulled the hood off of her head.
Big Daddy: Yall up in here like Dr. Evil and Mini Me…
The other two men laughed.
Shane: Look can we just do this so….
Big Daddy: Whats crawled up your ***** baby girl? DO things crawl up your *****?
Dash: Steve Jaffe…
Oh *****!
Big Daddy: Whats the deal 2Deep?
2Deep: Thats THE Shane…she stole away Jaffes woman…I heard about that ***** when I was at the Peoples Choice Awards a month ago….he came with two Playmates and everyone was talking…they say shes why His woman took all his money yo….
Big Daddy: Damn you work it like that Ma?
Shane shrugged and became agitated.
Shane: Look can we just get this done?
Big Daddy gracefully held his hand towards the long glass window. Shane looked through to see a piano along with other music equipment in the room on the other side. Shane opened the door and entered.
Shane: Stay here….I mean….please…
She spoke to Dash over her should and became almost embarrassed by her brevity. Shane came back out of the room and turned to the three men.
Shane: uhm…so what am I supposed to do?
Big Daddy: Lil Skeet heres gonna run you through.
The third man stood up and towered over Shane. She could have sworn he played Center for the San Quentin football team.
Lil Skeet: Come on Baby Girl
Dash covered her mouth and held her ribs as she shook with laughter and violent coughs. Shanes eyes bulged out of their sockets when she heard the helium charged voice that came from the giant in front of her.
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I love long update’s! Great job!
yay me too loveeeee long updates. your story is absolutly great and I’m always looking forward to read it.
HAHA love the line about “mini me” from Slim Daddy. Very good chapter can’t wait for the next.
That was a great chapter. I really wondering when Shane gonna finaly tell everybody what she’s doing at the church. waiting for the next fix.
As always a great chapter. I cannot wait for the next thrilling installment!!! Keep up the good work.
Thanx so much for the update and I can’t wait to find out what’s planned for Sat…. but I’ll wait if I have to! :)
Hurry up.. post again..waiting for saturday…!!!
GREAT UPDATE!!!
PLEASE POST SOOOOOOON!
A great chapter. I love it.
This in one of my favourite stories. As I am sure it has been said before, it is refreshing to have such wonderful characters like Alice and Shane involved. I know it is practically sacriligious to say it, perhaps grounds for banishment even, but there is other stories to tell besides Bette and Tina! Your storytelling makes me laugh out loud. Please continue.
great update. write more soon, I really want to see how Tina will react to what Bette has planned for her.
Wow, I didn’t know Tina could be such a betty! Can’t wait for the actual surprise to happen manana.
Great chapter and I love your story, please post soon. Thank you!