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The Promise
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Hey ladies thanks for all the great comments…Im kinda tired so Im gonna crash…this is short cause well truth be told I dont like it and I decided to just stop and it was basically hmm Ill stop the convo here ~insert cliffhanger here~ so now the story is changing…night ladies leave me something to wake up too aye?
Ps- lil sis whos home on spring break is pestering me so updates might be slow all week since Im sharing the comp with her now…shes not too happy since I told her there would be a surprise in her room when she got home…I told her it was like Christmas in March….she didnt find the Reindeer set up in her room from the front yard display too funny. Oh well! I laughed my ***** off…till I had to drag them up the ladder and into the attic.~
Chapter 40
You might think
I don’t look,
But deep inside in the corner of my mind
I’m attached to you
I’m weak
It’s true
Cause I’m afraid to know the answer
Do you want me too?
Cause my heart keeps falling faster True by Ryan Cabrera
Shane heard the front door open but continued to read her book. She sat on the window bench with Achilles attentive at her side as Dash slept away in her bed. The door slowly cracked open and Lara poked her head in. Shane held a finger up to her mouth and pointed to Dash. Lara nodded, understanding that she needed to keep quiet. She walked over to Shane and sat with her so they could talk quietly.
Lara: It went great, I crept out before Tina noticed I was gone. I saw Bette when I went out the back…she looked so nervous.
Shane nodded and smiled. She pulled off her reading glasses and bit on the stem.
Shane: Shell be fine….shell take one look at Tina and know that things will work out.
Lara: Hows our girl doing?
Lara smiled a cheeky grin and looked over at Dash who was dead to the world. Shane gave a weary smile and watched her as she took slow shallow breaths.
Shane: She tried to eat some soup but fell asleep….I dont know man…maybe Im just paranoid, but she shouldnt be this tired and sick from the flu right?
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hey there JLO – you have a mighty good rest – you need that to continue with the story :) – i like the cliffhanger. Strange how the characters in this story interwined with each other ;) wouldnt it be awesome if showtime decides to use some of your storyline!
lol short but i still want more! :winks:
I’m lovin it!!
Thank you so much for the update…. I know about little sisters so hope it’s not too bad! ha ha Can’t wait to see what happens next…. thanx again! =0)
could have kept going..it didn’t suck at all. adios
Great chapter. Shane and Lara have a good talk and Shane open up to Lara that’s good, Hope Dana didn’t think something have happen between Shane and Lara. Well hope Bette and Tina have a wonderful time together, and you have a wonderful rest too, just take your time to relax and please post soon the next one. Thank you! Have a good night!
Great chapter! I hope that Dana doesn’t go to jumping to conclusions. Enjoy the time with your sister..~smiles and sashays out~
Wow This is great. Sorry didn’t had the chace to comment during the last week but I did read all the chapter and they were all great. Now let see how Shane will procede with Alice. Waiting for my next fix
Well. my dear Think of me monday morning, They are going to do theknee at 7 Texas time. I love this story. you weave a web and everyone get caught up in it. in a good way. Hey take care of dash. give her to Tina and Bette. thanks so much for this pst.