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The Promise
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Ace – is this aceofhearts and if so, I might be boycotting my writing soon if you INSHANE, and the others I LOVE dont start writing again! CRAMIT! That means you too!
M – yeah Im trying to settle into my writing style, but it never feels comfortable.
Shy – please dont kill Shain I think technically I would be an accomplice…..besides, I Dont know if you could make it in prison..I mean Id be the toughest ***** in cell-block D….but uhm, if they separate us, youll be made someones ***** in no time….youre too nice :)
Duzz – thanks for the comment and heres your fix luv.
Chapter 49
Bette: Do you want her back?
Alice leaned back in her chair and crossed her arms.
Alice: Bette I dont know what the ***** I want….I just know I ***** miss her….like as a friend…and I cant go through with her, what I did with Dana…what Im still going through with Dana…cause it will be so much worse with us.
Bette put her elbow on the table and propped up her chin. She tucked a lock of hair behind Alices ear and watched her facial expressions as she thought about her options.
Bette: Tell me what youre thinking… right now.
Alice: It felt so ***** right Bette… Like more than it did with Dana…Dana and I were so much alike it felt good…Shane and I are complete opposites so we fit together like…
Bette: like yin and yang?
Alice nodded as a single tear fell from her eye.
Bette: Then theres only one thing to do Alice…
Alice: Whats that?
Bette: Get your woman back…fight the dark side of the force and go save Yoda….
Alice looked at Bette like she was crazy and rolled her eyes…
Alice: Bette…she doesnt want me back…and I cant figure out for the life of me why….she fucked up and you saw how she treated me…like everything was my fault…Ive never seen that look in her eyes except with one person…
Bette: Who?
Alice: Gabby…she used to give Gabby this look…like she would tear her apart with her bare hands…and now she looks at me like that…but Im not the one who lied….
Bette: Do you want her back Alice?
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okay okay Jlo i’ll back off easy okay sweets, but i must say im about to read the other two chapters and im still loving ur writting, and also i didn’t know shy was ur gf, danm i have the badest luck, oh yeah Sly is not a transy she’s a hermy, u seem to be the only person that’s confused on that matter, like shane, shane kinds of looks like a dude, so she kinds of looks like that, but black baby : )
Hey RealJ-lo good to see you again, this chapter is funny and let see the fun of Shane, Dash and Van. Post soon, thank you!
YEAAAAAAa..welcome back woman..i have missed this story..soo loving the interaction here….great post and dont be a stranger..lol
No, girl! No boycot! I love your writing!
I’m stuck with my writing don’t know where to go with my story so, but please keep continue :) still love dash!
I agree get those good writer back onthe site, Each one are great in there on way, Like how Shane is with Dash, and VanGing in May 2 for the second Knee replacement. So I’ll be bitting the bit to get to read all the new stories in about three weeks. Hey I’m a tough old girl.Plus I”l be in the hospital on my bithdayand Mother day.. Ill be thinking about you.
Why do everybody think that Dash will cut Van. come on guys, she’s good. And yes Al go save Yoda from the dark side. lol. need a fix soon.
Always worth the wait for your stories though a bit short still worth it. Love the interaction between shane and dash kind of like sisters.