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The Proposal
Now, walking more freely, with the envelops and the flute on her hands, Tina started to walk to the pool, she could see petals everywhere, so she took off her shoes, and once she reach the French doors, yet, another envelop.
“And these are the moments I thank God that I’m alive
And these are the moments I’ll remember all my life
I found all I’ve waited for
And I could not ask for more”
Tina began to think about the date, is not “anniversary date”, making a check list on all their “first”, first date? First kiss? The first time we made love? When we moved in together? Nop, none of them.
The first thing she saw, was the pool, the pool was filled with candles, vanilla, lavender, roses, every color but mostly vanilla, Tina’s favorite. She was looking at he pool when she saw it, a big tall candle, with her name engraved with another envelop.
“I could not as for more than this time together
I could not ask for more than this time with you
And every prayer has been answered
And every dream I’ve had has come
Yeah right here in this moment, is right where I’m meant to be
Here with you here with me”
“Tina……”
Tina closed her eyes the moment she heard her name, Bette was there, next to a beautiful table, settle like a Hawaiian table, surround by torches strategically placed around the patio and table.
Bette had, in her hand, another envelop, the last one. “You got mail”
Tina started to walk to Bette, feeling like her heart was going to explode any minute. They were face to face, and Tina made the move to this Bette but Bette made another move.
“First, open this”
“Ok”,
“I could not ask for more than the love you give me
Cause it’s all I’ve waited for
And I could not ask for more
And I could not ask for more”
Bette was at the end of her nerves, she prepared this “events” for weeks, she wanted this to be special and unforgettable, that’s why she asked for help from the expert, her cousin Barbara, and together the pulled up the scenario.
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(47 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
Wow. This was so sweet! :) Its good to see your back babysis! Hope you post again soon!
so romanticwow am speechless
Awesome. So romantic.
Amazing
Oh.My.Gawd. babysis. Wow. That was perhaps the most romantic chapter i’ve read in a long,long Time. I’m amazed. Bette deserves the most romantic award for this staunt. Greatjob babysis.
*sniff, sniff BLOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW* I hope you realize I’m taking notes. ;)
That was perfect!
Bette is so romantic and this is beautiful and perfect. Ok post soon please, thanks!
very beautiful and romantic, thanks
AWWWWW that was so beautiful. Please post soon.
Wow how romantic is that. The flowers, candles and the lyrics of the song show how much Bette loves Tina. I do hope that you will continue with this story and of course the other one too.
VERY romantic! You Rock!