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    The Proposal

    Story written on March 17, 2005 by Rayne.
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    Number of Comments: 21
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52654
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    Not your average fanfiction.

    If I had one last breath, I’d use it to engrave your scent on my soul. If I knew I had only one hour to live, I’d be heartbroken because I’d have to leave you, but I’d feel fortunate to have shared a love so true and divine with you.

    You are the only sight for my eyes; the only beat for my heart. I’ve loved you from that moment when our eyes couldn’t part. We’ve had our share of stumbles and falls, but we’ve never fallen harder than when we fell in love.

    You are the sunshine that brightens my cloudy days; the warmth that comforts me in the cold and rain. You are the breath that gives me life; the vision that gives me sight. Will you make my life complete and please be my wife?

    Blu, will you marry me?

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    2. waow!!!!
      Blu is a really lucky woman… i hope she’s gonna say “Yes”… i wish you two all ùy best wishes for the future… waow!
      PS: have you got a sister? LMAO

    7. Wow! If she doesn’t say yes I can think of plenty of other people here that would gladly say yes to a proposal like that. Blu you really are a lucky woman. Now say yes and go celebrate your engagement.

      I wish you two all the happiness in the world.

    13. Well first I was gonna say I didn’t know “Rayne” was a real person…but damn girl you just….hold on while i pick my face up off the floor….then I’ll try to get back to you .

    15. okay I’m back..face is on and jaw is intact….this was brilliant…i can’t think of anything else to say…just brilliant…beats the whole plane in the sky and billboard stuff to pieces!

    16. I just want to say thank you Rayne for eliminating my fear of commitment!!! I am touched–I can’t wait to find that person for me like you found in Blu.
      That was beautiful and I wish you two the best!!!!

    18. she is not gonna say yes (or anything) just because this proposal is so touching that Blu will be speechless, though I’m sure that she will be giving you the biggest kiss in the worl until she will be able of speaking…

      Good luck guys… I wish I could say that kinda things to my girl,… but I dont know how to say to her how much I love her and how much I care for her, and that she is the best thing in my life…

      good luck guys

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