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the rea(L) world: Chapter 4
(Shane) “I woke up after a wild night with Naomi in the confessional.” She smiled. “I walked her out, and she gave me her number. I don’t plan on calling her because I already got what I wanted. I walk back into the house and found Carmen sitting at the island.”
“Did you have fun last night?” Carmen took a bite of her apple.
“Yeah, it was some night.” Shane nodded as she scratched her head.
“Can I ask you a question?” Carmen turned herself in the stool.
“Sure.”
“You said you’re in a relationship, but you slept with some random woman. Wouldn’t you call that cheating?”
Shane sighed. “No, I wouldn’t call that cheating because it’s not really a relationship-relationship.”
“Please do explain to me because I’m confused.”
“Cherie and I have been together for half a year now, but it’s not a romantic relationship. It’s a sexual relationship. Whenever she needs it, she calls me.”
“Does her husband know about it?”
Shane shook her head no. “He doesn’t have a clue.”
(Carmen) “Okay, Shane is a player, and I don’t like players, but—,” she sighed. “There’s something about her that draws me more and more to her. Maybe it’s the mystery of her, she seems quiet, but she likes to have a good time and have fun. I know there’s a serious side to her, and I hope that she doesn’t plan on being this lothario forever.”
(Tina) “I walk into the bathroom to take a shower, and I caught Bette getting out of the shower. Her skin was wet and the water dripping down her—,” she fanned herself and laughed. “Her body is amazing.”
Bette saw Tina was standing there staring at her as she grabbed a towel. “Do you enjoy the show?”
Tina blinked and stuttered. “I—uhh—I-I’m sorry. I-I didn’t mean to stare.” She looked away.
“It’s okay. See something that you like?” Bette smiled.
“I-I,” Bette giggled lightly.
“You shouldn’t be so shy. We’re all women here right?” Tina nodded coyly.
“The shower’s all yours.” Bette walked out of the bathroom.
(Bette) “Tina is so charming to me. The way she acted when I caught her staring at me was priceless. She was speechless and a little shy. Maybe I can break her out of that.” She chuckled devilishly.
(Alice) “I find myself attracted to Dana. I mean—there are beautiful women in this house. Who couldn’t be attracted to anyone in this house?” She scratched her arm. “I know we’ve only been in this house for three days, but I think Dana’s adorable, and I want to know her. Maybe we can be more than friends.”
“You seem so chirper this morning.” Dana lay on her bed.
“I have a date with Lara.”
Alice raised her eye brow. “Who’s Lara?”
“She was someone I met at the club last night.”
“Good for you,” Alice nodded.
“Yeah, but I hope I don’t make myself look like a fool around her.”
“Well just be yourself. That usually works.”
Dana smiled. “So Alice, what do you do?”
“Umm—I’m a writer. I write for the local newspaper, and then on top of that I’m a local VJ for the radio station out here KCRW. What about you Miss Dana? What do you do?”
“I’m a tennis player.”
“Oh wait—you’re the one who did the Subaru AD right?”
“Yeah.”
Alice smiled. “We have a star in the house.”
“I’m not really a star just yet. I want to be one very soon.”
(Dana) “Alice and I sat around in bed talking what felt like for hours. We began to get to know each other a little better, and I noticed that we have a few things in common. I hope that during this stay that we can get closer to each other and build a friendship.”
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this story is so cool, love the voice over…
Akcb, for some reason, I started laughing already during the 1st B & T exchange. It was really funny. The bathroom scene was great too. Then D wanted both L & A. Dorky D with” I don’t make an ass out of myself tonight,” I hope she did not stretch herself too thin. And finally C falling for S, the “known” player. This is a mad house. Can’t wait for more. Thank you.
was never interested in the real world, but lovin yours :)
AKira!! This is a hoot! Loving what you are doing with this, and adding a level of light humor through and through. Good Job!
lol.. lovingg it 4 real but i di wat more sharmen action lol
Lovin’ it az usual, Babez!! Im supa hooked . . . I bet’cha once Shane haz had some of Carmen she aint gon wanna go back ~wiggles eyebrowz~ looool!!! Whelp, I’m anxious 4 u to go ahead and update like now, lol . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka ;p Holla!!
NO! NO FRIENDSHIP! ROMANCE!! Haha, sorry, Lara annoys me so much but I love the little chace between A & D. B & T are just destined to be, it’s blatant, why can’t everyone see that? Hehe C doesn’t like players hey, pah, S is Casanova, C has bit off more than she can chew there. PPS! GREAT!