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The Ring – Between Labyrinth and Lagrimas De Oro
“Bette, be quiet. You will disturb the neighbors.”
“Oops,” Bette giggled, and then lowered her voice. “There is only one person that I want to disturb right now. Baby, why don’t you come out to play with me?”
“Bette, what are you doing?” Tina asked with incredulity in her voice.
“What does it look like I am doing? Come on, I have something for you — if you take those clothes off and join me.” Bette’s voice dripping with both sarcasm and seduction.
“Bette, have you lost your mind? Don’t you know it’s a work night? At dinner, I listened to you complain about your unforgiving work schedule tomorrow.” Tina playfully scolded. “Besides, I am tired.” Tina whined.
“Baby, you may be tired where you are standing, but after you join me, you will not remember that you were in such a state.” Bette seductively responded. “Besides, tomorrow will take care of itself.” Bette lifted her right hand out of the water. With her palm facing towards her, she held up two fingers and slowly wiggled them back and forth.
“These fingers are waiting to service you under the gaze of
Bette watched as Tina came out to the edge of the pool, sat down at the shallow end of the pool and allows her legs dangle in the water. “It does feel nice out here,” Tina said a noncommittal voice. Watching Tina’s movements, Bette saw that Tina’s body was betraying her words.
Bette went underwater, swam over to where Tina’s legs were and surfaced between them. Bette kept her lower body in the water and raised her upper body just enough so her mouth was level with Tina’s *****. She leaned in and kissed the center of Tina’s panties. She caught a whiff of Tina’s aroma and inhaled deeply taking in the delicious scent. ‘Oh, she is so intoxicating,’ Bette thought.
“Yeah, it is nice out here, but nothing is nicer than me taking off those panties of yours,” as she slowly pulled away from Tina. Bette slid her hands up the sides of Tina’s thigh and latched onto the elastic band of her thong. As she pulled them down, she noticed that Tina had positioned her hips so that Bette was in tongue reach of Tina’s *****. As Bette removed the fabric away from Tina’s sweet spot, Bette leaned in and lightly licked Tina’s *****. “Uh!” Bette heard Tina coo. Bette pushed the thong down and away from Tina’s legs. Within a second after stripping away the thong, Bette pulled Tina’s legs up and put them on her shoulders. She felt Tina’s heels clamp down on her back and saw Tina lean back on her elbows staring hard at Bette.
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(28 votes, average: 3.93 out of 5)
absolutely awesome. I haven’t seen the second season yet – I have figured out most of the plot lines from reading fan fiction. I love it that you want to fill in the gaps left by the series. I always find a book to be much better than a movie anyway(and I’m a screenwriter – HA!) , so this story will prove to be most satisfying I’m sure. Keep venting your frustrations and flesh out season two for us all. Great work!
Bette took a beating from everyone during S2. Her friends, her wife, Her boss Helene and Kit. No one wanted her around. Not she stay away. Of all people Jenny seem to know her better than anyone. Great work. Thanks
That was incredible!! I was going to list my favorite lines, but there are too many!! Thank you for this. It fits perfectly, and really helps put us in the right frame of mind for the next episode. Really well written!!
You did a great job of explaining how Bette came to take off her ring. Indeed, I think most people were wondering where all the explanation was from season two. You did a great job with this one. Thanks!
Your writing is wonderful and I’m hooked already. Bring on the next one.
Excellant!! I was so cought up in the flashback I almost forgot the current story!
can’t wait for more!
Wow! Finally someone is trying to answer a question I have had for quite awhile. You did a great job of it! I hated how IC dealt with most of the issue in Season 2, they were just choppy and incomplete. I’d love to see you take a go at rewriting episode 12 and deal with B & T’s reunion, and also
To finish my commnet, I would love to see your version of the conversation between B & T while they were reuniting. And while you are at it, why not rewrite the final episode. It was such a disappointment! What do you say? Looking forward to it.
Damn this is awesomea and amazing, great work, love it. Thanks!
Sad story. ..gosh I hate when they fight like this