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The Ripple Effect
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The Ripple Effect
It was late spring and the signs of the winter that had passed were still showing in the form of a few leftover snow drifts hidden back in the trees. It was a clear, sunny day and the warmth of the sun filled Bette Porter as she sat on a bench, wrapped in a blanket near a small lake at her home in upstate New York. Today was a special day. It would have been Tina’s 60th Birthday, if a tragic accident had not taken her away from the world too soon. A “quick trip to the market” to pick up some ingredients needed for a new recipe she wanted to try was what Tina had told Bette, she would be back shortly, and with a quick kiss she was gone. That was the last time Bette saw Tina alive.
Early on after the accident it had been tough to live without Tina. Everywhere Bette turned seemed to hold a memory of their life together. Somehow, with time and through the love and support of her sister and her friends, her “family”, she was able to get through the difficult times. Angelica had been a young teenager, wise beyond her years, when Tina had been taken from them. She desperately missed her Momma T, but her life with Bette had been amazing. They had laughed, cried and relied on each other, offering support to each other in everything they did. Bette always tried to do what she thought Tina would have wanted when making the decisions that affected their daughter. That was what led her to move from LA, and the hustle of the big city to a cottage in the country, over-looking a lake. When she first saw this place, she knew it was the right location to bring up their daughter. The peacefulness and tranquility that it provided came at a time that she needed it most. Tina would have loved this place, and that played a big part in her decision.
Angelica had grown into a beautiful young woman, and had only left home to attend Yale to study Art History following in the shoes of her Mamma B. After graduating, she went off to discover the world. She traveled around the globe, eventually settling in New York City to be close to Bette, and determined to make the most of a promising career in the Arts. Bette had helped her establish a small gallery, which was taking the city by storm. A talented painter in her own right, Angelica had an eye for new talent rarely found in someone so young. That had helped establish her as one of the top young entrepreneurs in the art world. After Tina’s death, Bette had taken some time off to ensure that Angelica was adjusting and doing OK. She had been her priority, everything else took a back seat to her daughter. Eventually, she went back to the college, to resume her role as Dean, and after leaving the College and moving to upstate New York, she had started to do some consulting work for a few gallery’s in the City. Angelica had often times accompanied her on her travels to meet with artists and learn from her mother. Tina had always said that Bette and Angie were so much alike it was scary. Throughout time, this would remain, and if anything their bond had become even stronger.
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Taz, gosh woman what can I say? Between your very kind author notes, and this story, it moved me so much. Ya know, when you sent this to me, and had some butterflies, I shook my head at the very end, AFTER taking a deep breath. I shook my head because I thought “why in god’s name does she have any reservations about this story?” I loved it when I read it the first time, and I loved it when I read it again just now. You are a wonderful woman, on so many levels, and as for “nudges” along the path of life, we all need them every now and again. Now….*pulling up a chair* Ya know what this means right? You can’t just come to the site and post ONE story. Nope….once comments begin to be left, you THEN have a following. That means..CHOP CHOP..get to work on another installment, story, whatever! As for your golf challenge…bring it on!!!! *HUGS*
That was a very lovely story and I hope you continue with it. I don’t expecially like readling about either of them dying but that is part of life. However, the story of true love was all over it and I liked that.
Very good story. I was tearing up as I read it.
Beautiful story telling Taz, very poignant as well. You having one of the best cheerleaders with our Chicki here.I see more stories from you in the future.
Very nice.
Tissue please. Wow! That was so heartfelt and emotional. I usually don’t read stories where one of them has died…but since Chicki mentioned your story I read it anyway. Thanks for sharing this with us. I hope you continue to write.
such a beautiful story! Incredibly well-done.
This is awesome and beautiful my friend. Great story and thanks for sharing this with us!
Taz, this is a very moving piece of writing. I hope you continue to shower us with your incredible talent. Thank you for this.
Where are the tissuses???omg i’m crying the first paragraph what a mush pot i am, huge fan of tina… just WOW !! :)
Sad, because Tina no longer walks with her girls, but enlightening because the ripple effect will always be with Bette and Angelica.
Taz, at the recommendation of my wonderful wife, I came over and poked my head in on your chapter. I must say that it is VERY well done. I am a big sap, so of course I started to cry. LOL I know you said it was a short story, but perhaps you might consider making it a series. There are definately a lot of avenues that you could take this down. If not, we understand. I look forward to reading something else from you in the future. Ness
Taz…Thank you for “taking the plunge” into the world of fanfic. Such a touching story. I’m looking forward to future stories from you…like Chicki said, chop chop get to writing!
We’re so pleased that our dearest friend give you a little push to start up writing. You certainly made a big step here. The way you have unfolded this thought, idea… is just beautiful. Thanks for giving it a try and show us you’ve got a hidden talent. You surely have a wonderful and kind mentor. PPS. Sincerely, Lucero & Marsha – From Mexico City
Taz, I hate that you made me cry, but what a beautiful story. Damn though, what is it with everyone wanting to kill off Tina this month? No kidding…nicely done!
I a firm believer that true never dies. It been along six months today that my husband passed away.Yet when the door opens I expect it to be him. He had such a deep inpact on so many lifes. So loved by many young and old. This story remind me of a lost love,but also that My heart is still so full of his love. thanks for this beautiful love story.
Taz, how wonerful a gift it is to be introuduced by such a gifted writer. Like Bette and Angie seeing new talent for the first time, Chicki has also givin us a gift, a very talented writer you are as well, please continue writing for us, as we will be like villagers on Chicki’s pm so she can make you write again. Thank you, Md
Oh, ya, sorry Chicki, thank you too. Md
I knew when Chiki said in her Author’s note’s read this, that it would be something special. After I read the last paragraph I could only stare at my screen while my eyes filled with tears. I thought if it has this effect on me what an effect must it have on Chicki herself. The lake, the stone and the wonderful way how you described the deeper meaning of the ripple. Thanks so much for sharing this with us and please do come back, you’re a gem.