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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 15
Previously~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bette followed Sidneys advice and went home to get some rest. She took a long, hot shower and lathered her weary body in scented lotion before dressing in a new pair of sweats. She called Dana and Emily, making some last minute arrangements for tomorrows event, and then took a deep breath and called Tina.
Tina answered on the 3rd ring. Hi., said Tina.
Hey, T. Look, Im sorry for what I said. I knowI know you have work to do. Im just.Im so lost without you. I just wanted to tell you that I love you and I look forward to talking with you.whenever you want. Okay?, said Bette.
Oh, Bette. Thank you. Thank you for calling me. Im sorry I leftI just felt like I couldnt breathe anymore. , said Tina.
Its okay, T. So, when do you think youll be home?, asked Bette.
Tina sighed. Not any time soon. We might be up all night. Our project was kind of destroyed. We lost a couple weeks worth of work. And this professor does not believe in excuses, so were screwed. We have to present at 9am tomorrow morning. So, its going to be rough night., said Tina.
*****, T. Im sorry. Do you need anything? Can I bring you anything?, asked Bette.
No. Thanks though. Listen, I think I need to get back. Theyll come looking for me if I dont., said Tina.
Okay, T. I love you. Ill talk to you later., said Bette.
Okay, Bette. Ill talk to you later. Bye.
Bye., said Bette.
Bette stared at the phone in her hands for a few seconds before lying down on her bed, cradling the phone to her as the tears slipped quietly from her eyes and onto her pillow. Exhaustion tugged at her eyelids as she settled in for an evening nap. Her last thoughts before slipping off to sleep were, She didnt tell me that she loved me. Why didnt she tell me that she loved me?
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Tina didnt get in until a little after 3 in the morning. She, David, and Kara had worked long and hard and had finally put together a presentation they were happy with. She let herself into her room and just stared at her girlfriend for a moment. Bettes sweat suit clad body was sprawled out across her bed. Tina watched her wistfully before resetting her alarm clock for 8am and changing quickly into her pajamas. She sat down on the bed and gently shook Bette until the dark-haired beauty opened her eyes and looked up at Tina.
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k says
THANK GOD!! I was really worried for a minute. You tease. lol Thank you SO much for not breaking them up. I LOVE this story so much!!! You rock!
Phoenix says
Great story. It’s very inspiring, I like the fact that your very true to your characters. Keep going.
Seahurst says
WooHoo!!! Thank God…you scared the shit out of me, MTS!!! Way to go Tina!!!!!
hunty38 says
glad Tina’s finally woke up. Another great chapter. Thanx.
darchino says
WOW!! that’s a great chapter!! can’t wait to read the next one!!
girl drummer says
OMG!!! You really had me going there for a minute. Thakn you for not breaking them up!!! A love like theirs can overcome anything, right???
tanya69 says
WOW! You almost broke my heart there! This was just wonderful:))))
downlow95 says
Perfect…absolutely brilliant. I’ve finally been moved to have a tear in my eye. Whew, one of the most moving chapters so far!
rebakathy1 says
Dear lord I’m going to have a stroke! OMG this was totally freaking amazing! You just made my entire day! WOO FREAKING HOO! I need to calm down now, I need to go listen to a song by Enya. More soon. Whew!
vatasha27 says
I thought they were gonna break up..man that was good, but what is tina gonna do now…maybe her parents love her enough to not disown her
ariannamcclare says
I have been reading your story for long while now and I just have to say that it is the absolute best on here. Congrats and post again soon,
maybeyes says
Yes yes and yes. Thank you.
Down Low says
Now this is a heck of an update…nice job, I’m all smiles.
marsupial says
THAT WAS A AWESOME CHAPTER..I AM SO GLAD SHE DIDN’T BREAK UP WITH BETTE….LOVE THIS PLEASE POST SOON
momo says
WOW!!! That was Beautiful Awesome I’m really Happy and WOW! Thank you for not breaking them up Thank you Thank you WOW anyway It’s really good I’m really intense after I read OMG there belong to each other you really scared me I thought they gonna breaking up Please don’t MTS Thank you again for the Amazing Story.
lost1 says
OMG!!! Loved it!So happy Tina didnt breal up with Bette you had me scared there.please post soon very soon!!hopoefully we’ll read about Tina and Bette getting their groove on LOL
irisheyes says
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
Marquis says
B&T!!!!!!!! I always knew Tina was smart!!! I am still worried about her parents. Hopefully they can have some fun and not think about parents for a long time!*wink* I think they deserve some sexual healing!
techgal says
I’m patiently awaiting the next chapter, when Bette introduces Tina to Damon’s mama!
Oh boy!!!!
I’m glad Alice got to see this with her own eyes!!!
Thank you.
P.S: Did Alice meet Tina before this? I don’t remember.
Newcomer says
OHH THANK YOU GOD!!!!!! That’s what I’m talking about, now all that’s left to unfold is the parent drama and any other wired and wonderful thing you can come up with. Great writing, this has to be my fav chapter!
Fa6Fa6 says
OMG, this is the cutest love ever..
d_square says
MTS, you remained true to form! Thanks!! Oh by the way, another descriptive for Bette could possibly be “golden brown” but I personally like the words you use for her.
dlb326 says
your storyis great i love it i cant wait till the next chapter comes out i have been waiting for tina to smartin up and now that she did i cant wait thanks
morrison7371 says
I’m pretty sure this is exactly why you won an award. I thought we were heading for a major angst blowout and I was scared. You swept in at the last second and saved us! I love this story. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
TiBetteShipper says
YAY!!!!!!!!! Ahhh you really had me going their, MTS!! You sure know how to make a girl cry! :D Thank you soooo much!!!! God I love your story!
P.S. – Congrats on your award! I got so excited when I found out you won!!
Portercharm says
No words can describe how amazing this story is! I was glad you brought up the room problem. I have wondered from the begining what would happen if they broke up or even had a bad fight. Dorm rooms are so small!!:)
Mates says
MTS, i have only just had to oportunity to catch up on this awesome story of yours but i gotta tell ya…. it’s sooo good, it should be illegal….lol….Thankyou for not breaking them up:)~letting out the breath i was holding for the entire chapter almost ….phew~
Congrats on the award too……..Very deserving..More soon please:)
Barrie says
I am SO happy I don’t know what to do with myself!! I read your stroy hours ago but I was just TOO excited to sit down and comment. I had to go share the good news!!! I am a major fan and I was definitely begining to get nervous. After reading each chapter, I would have this nervous feeling in the pit of my stomache. And truth be told, as I read this chapter I was convinced that Tina was going to run. But then she stopped seeing and thinking with her head and began using her heart. Their trials have only just begun but it’s better to endure pain with someone you love and trust than to live a pain-free life alone. I love this story!!!
shades says
OMG! You really had me going there for awhile. So glad Tina came around. Your chapters are amazing and yet they just keep getting better and better. Don’t know how you do it, but please continue!
amy says
Every reader finds herself.The writer’s work is merely a kind of optical instrument that makes it possible for the reader to discern what, without this story, she would perhaps never have seen in herself. This is so true with your story!!!!
goldfish says
Excellent! I love this story. Please continue.
gia says
Yes, Tina finally found the key to the closet. I’m looking forward to how you write the parents into Tina’s self-discovery, presuming they will be thrown in for some well positioned drama! Brilliant , as asways MTS. And just an aside, I’m at the front of the queue as one of your biggest fans. Thanks so much for writing.
ChakaSB says
Whew.. that was a rollercoaster – I love these two. Awesome, Awesome coming out story.
phantomframe says
Oh, that was a good one! Congratulations on your well deserved award too!
trecelovinit says
Yes!!!!!
bluesf says
AB-SO-LUTE-LY
PERFECT!!!!!!!!
Deb says
I just had to scroll lower to see the outcome.I am very satisfied.Great update.
Keno says
OMG…love this…this chapter so so good, see tina finally saw the light.
Congrats on the award
CamTurn says
Thank the gods for mercy! Beautiful story
novice says
I finally caught up with the story, and can now leave a comment. You are a fantastic writer, and this story is great. Keep it coming, please. :)
rondayvue says
Whew I can breathe again! You had me believing Tina was going to wimp out on Bette. Thank goodness she came to her senses! Another fabulous chapter MTS!
ankus says
WOW…WOW..WOW..WOW…WOW…Mind Blowing…unbelievable…beautiful…etc…love this story…amazing…
Steph says
my brain is completely fried after getting through my finals… but this story was definately work the risk of losing more brain cells due to lack of sleep. You’ve done an amazing job with this story; the emotions are painfully real and the characters are so easy to relate to that they feel like they’re actually personal friends. Great job and please post more as soon as you can!
margot says
OH THANK GOD! you had me so freaking worried i almost had a heart attack! you write so freaking well! my heart was constricting then i was happy, it was phenomenal!!! i can’t wait for you to continue!!!!!!!!
Change says
CHEEEEE-HOOOOOO!!!!!!! Omg, I so love you right now!! You brought our girls back together…this chapter just so made my night!! You go TINA!! You tell the world that Bette Porter is your woman and yours alone! Thank you MTS…YOU ROCK!!
karen says
mts i think you need to put a warning at the start of these intense chapters like: breathing apparatus recommended..read atyour own risk.loved it ,tina will feel so much better now and bette too.yeh!!
Jaime says
Hey congrats on your award, I just love your story because it contains so much drama and of course it’s about Bette and Tinas beginning and who doesn’t love that anyway sorry I haven’t posted on your previous chapters, I just finished catching up. K is right you Rock!
Kel says
Wow! I REALLY LIKED this story. For some time, I thought it was kind of losing some track, but it came back stronger. I’m glad! ;)
Anxiety25 says
WOOO HOOO! ~[i]Shaking my ass doing the happy dance! Gotta tone it down now because I’m at work![/i]~ You ROCK MTS!! :)
Lyn says
Oh man you scare the hell of me, I was in heartbreaking and crying so hard that see Tina will going to break up with Bette and feel sad and bad for both of them. But now Tina realize that she can’t live without Bette and she coming out to be with Bette and work thing out. You are a great teasing here and doing a good job to. Post soon, thank you! 5 stars for you!
s says
thumbs up. you’re a good writer. keep going and thanks for your time.