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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 15
Alice spoke softly, staring down at her shoes. No, I cant do that.
Bette blinked and a fresh set of tears coated her caramel cheeks. Then you really dont have anything else to say to me.
Dont be angry with her, Bette. Im the one you should be upset with., said Tina.
Bette looked into her girlfriends shining brown eyes and blinked as if to make sure the woman before her was real and not an apparition. T?, she asked.
Tina stepped closer to Bette, staring into her eyes and leaned forward so that their foreheads were touching. I need you, Bette. I cant walk away from you. I love you too much to just walk away. I love you so much. I want everyone to know that you belong to me.
A surge of warmth rushed through Bette and settled in her chest. Tina, I dont want to push you. If you dont want, Bette began.
Tina swallowed her lovers words with her own. Bette, I want you. And Im tired of other people thinking they can share you. I am so happy to have you in my life and I want everyone to know that we belong together. As she spoke, Tina felt lighter and freer. Her anxieties and doubts seemed to roll off her shoulders down her back and vanish into thin air.
Bette held her girlfriends face in her trembling hands and looked into her eyes, Are you sure, T?
Tina smiled and pushed the loose strands of Bettes dark curls behind her ears. Baby, Ive never been so sure of anything in my entire life. I love you, Bette Porter. Im so sorry it took all this for me to be open about it.
Bette was still in shock and quite certain that this was some wonderfully deceptive dream. Her dark chocolate eyes smiled brightly as she spoke, Am I dreaming, T? Is this really happening?
Tina smiled and traced Bettes lips with her fingertips. Its real, babe. Trust me. Its real. Let me show you how real it is., she said, bringing her lips to Bettes.
Their kiss was soft and sweet, infusing them both with the love theyd been missing. The love Tina had been running from. The beautiful blonde teased her lovers lip with her tongue and was granted entry into Bettes mouth. They stood there, amongst the crowd, their tongues teasing each other, tasting every inch of each others mouths, publicly stating their union. When breathing became a problem, they broke the kiss, resting contentedly in each others arms.
Bette stroked Tinas silky blonde locks and whispered softly in her girlfriends ear. Tina, you feel so good in my arms. Ive missed you so much, baby. I cant believe youre here with me.
Ive missed you, too. I love you, Bette. Believe me. Theres no place else Id rather be., said Tina.
Dana had been watching this drama unfold and couldnt resist the urge to jump in. She wrapped her arms around Bette and Tina and hugged them both.
You guys, Im so happy you worked this out!, she shrieked.
The three friends separated, smiling at each other as Alice looked on in utter shock.
What the ***** just happened here?, Alice asked.
Tina moved behind Bette and slid her arms around her lovers waist, resting her head on Bettes shoulder. She looked into Alices wide eyes. Hey Alice, nice to see you again. I just had to take a moment and say hello to my girlfriend. Tina kissed Bettes cheek and held her tighter. Bette wrapped her arms around Tinas and the couple smiled as they watched Alices jaw hit the floor.
TBC (To Be Continued)
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(87 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
THANK GOD!! I was really worried for a minute. You tease. lol Thank you SO much for not breaking them up. I LOVE this story so much!!! You rock!
Great story. It’s very inspiring, I like the fact that your very true to your characters. Keep going.
WooHoo!!! Thank God…you scared the shit out of me, MTS!!! Way to go Tina!!!!!
glad Tina’s finally woke up. Another great chapter. Thanx.
WOW!! that’s a great chapter!! can’t wait to read the next one!!
OMG!!! You really had me going there for a minute. Thakn you for not breaking them up!!! A love like theirs can overcome anything, right???
WOW! You almost broke my heart there! This was just wonderful:))))
Perfect…absolutely brilliant. I’ve finally been moved to have a tear in my eye. Whew, one of the most moving chapters so far!
Dear lord I’m going to have a stroke! OMG this was totally freaking amazing! You just made my entire day! WOO FREAKING HOO! I need to calm down now, I need to go listen to a song by Enya. More soon. Whew!
I thought they were gonna break up..man that was good, but what is tina gonna do now…maybe her parents love her enough to not disown her
I have been reading your story for long while now and I just have to say that it is the absolute best on here. Congrats and post again soon,
Yes yes and yes. Thank you.
Now this is a heck of an update…nice job, I’m all smiles.
THAT WAS A AWESOME CHAPTER..I AM SO GLAD SHE DIDN’T BREAK UP WITH BETTE….LOVE THIS PLEASE POST SOON
WOW!!! That was Beautiful Awesome I’m really Happy and WOW! Thank you for not breaking them up Thank you Thank you WOW anyway It’s really good I’m really intense after I read OMG there belong to each other you really scared me I thought they gonna breaking up Please don’t MTS Thank you again for the Amazing Story.
OMG!!! Loved it!So happy Tina didnt breal up with Bette you had me scared there.please post soon very soon!!hopoefully we’ll read about Tina and Bette getting their groove on LOL
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
B&T!!!!!!!! I always knew Tina was smart!!! I am still worried about her parents. Hopefully they can have some fun and not think about parents for a long time!*wink* I think they deserve some sexual healing!
I’m patiently awaiting the next chapter, when Bette introduces Tina to Damon’s mama!
Oh boy!!!!
I’m glad Alice got to see this with her own eyes!!!
Thank you.
P.S: Did Alice meet Tina before this? I don’t remember.
OHH THANK YOU GOD!!!!!! That’s what I’m talking about, now all that’s left to unfold is the parent drama and any other wired and wonderful thing you can come up with. Great writing, this has to be my fav chapter!
OMG, this is the cutest love ever..
MTS, you remained true to form! Thanks!! Oh by the way, another descriptive for Bette could possibly be “golden brown” but I personally like the words you use for her.
your storyis great i love it i cant wait till the next chapter comes out i have been waiting for tina to smartin up and now that she did i cant wait thanks
I’m pretty sure this is exactly why you won an award. I thought we were heading for a major angst blowout and I was scared. You swept in at the last second and saved us! I love this story. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
YAY!!!!!!!!! Ahhh you really had me going their, MTS!! You sure know how to make a girl cry! :D Thank you soooo much!!!! God I love your story!
P.S. – Congrats on your award! I got so excited when I found out you won!!
No words can describe how amazing this story is! I was glad you brought up the room problem. I have wondered from the begining what would happen if they broke up or even had a bad fight. Dorm rooms are so small!!:)
MTS, i have only just had to oportunity to catch up on this awesome story of yours but i gotta tell ya…. it’s sooo good, it should be illegal….lol….Thankyou for not breaking them up:)~letting out the breath i was holding for the entire chapter almost ….phew~
Congrats on the award too……..Very deserving..More soon please:)
I am SO happy I don’t know what to do with myself!! I read your stroy hours ago but I was just TOO excited to sit down and comment. I had to go share the good news!!! I am a major fan and I was definitely begining to get nervous. After reading each chapter, I would have this nervous feeling in the pit of my stomache. And truth be told, as I read this chapter I was convinced that Tina was going to run. But then she stopped seeing and thinking with her head and began using her heart. Their trials have only just begun but it’s better to endure pain with someone you love and trust than to live a pain-free life alone. I love this story!!!
OMG! You really had me going there for awhile. So glad Tina came around. Your chapters are amazing and yet they just keep getting better and better. Don’t know how you do it, but please continue!
Every reader finds herself.The writer’s work is merely a kind of optical instrument that makes it possible for the reader to discern what, without this story, she would perhaps never have seen in herself. This is so true with your story!!!!
Excellent! I love this story. Please continue.
Yes, Tina finally found the key to the closet. I’m looking forward to how you write the parents into Tina’s self-discovery, presuming they will be thrown in for some well positioned drama! Brilliant , as asways MTS. And just an aside, I’m at the front of the queue as one of your biggest fans. Thanks so much for writing.
Whew.. that was a rollercoaster – I love these two. Awesome, Awesome coming out story.
Oh, that was a good one! Congratulations on your well deserved award too!
Yes!!!!!
AB-SO-LUTE-LY
PERFECT!!!!!!!!
I just had to scroll lower to see the outcome.I am very satisfied.Great update.
OMG…love this…this chapter so so good, see tina finally saw the light.
Congrats on the award
Thank the gods for mercy! Beautiful story
I finally caught up with the story, and can now leave a comment. You are a fantastic writer, and this story is great. Keep it coming, please. :)
Whew I can breathe again! You had me believing Tina was going to wimp out on Bette. Thank goodness she came to her senses! Another fabulous chapter MTS!
WOW…WOW..WOW..WOW…WOW…Mind Blowing…unbelievable…beautiful…etc…love this story…amazing…
my brain is completely fried after getting through my finals… but this story was definately work the risk of losing more brain cells due to lack of sleep. You’ve done an amazing job with this story; the emotions are painfully real and the characters are so easy to relate to that they feel like they’re actually personal friends. Great job and please post more as soon as you can!
OH THANK GOD! you had me so freaking worried i almost had a heart attack! you write so freaking well! my heart was constricting then i was happy, it was phenomenal!!! i can’t wait for you to continue!!!!!!!!
CHEEEEE-HOOOOOO!!!!!!! Omg, I so love you right now!! You brought our girls back together…this chapter just so made my night!! You go TINA!! You tell the world that Bette Porter is your woman and yours alone! Thank you MTS…YOU ROCK!!
mts i think you need to put a warning at the start of these intense chapters like: breathing apparatus recommended..read atyour own risk.loved it ,tina will feel so much better now and bette too.yeh!!
Hey congrats on your award, I just love your story because it contains so much drama and of course it’s about Bette and Tinas beginning and who doesn’t love that anyway sorry I haven’t posted on your previous chapters, I just finished catching up. K is right you Rock!
Wow! I REALLY LIKED this story. For some time, I thought it was kind of losing some track, but it came back stronger. I’m glad! ;)
WOOO HOOO! ~[i]Shaking my ass doing the happy dance! Gotta tone it down now because I’m at work![/i]~ You ROCK MTS!! :)
Oh man you scare the hell of me, I was in heartbreaking and crying so hard that see Tina will going to break up with Bette and feel sad and bad for both of them. But now Tina realize that she can’t live without Bette and she coming out to be with Bette and work thing out. You are a great teasing here and doing a good job to. Post soon, thank you! 5 stars for you!
thumbs up. you’re a good writer. keep going and thanks for your time.