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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 31
Bette smiled softly and said, You make it sound so beautiful, T.
Thats because it is beautiful, Bette., Tina replied.
Dark-brown pools and soft amber eyes looked out over the rolling tide and watched the sun begin its final stages of descent.
Bette, I hate to even bring this up and you dont have to discuss it if you dont want to., said Tina.
The dark-haired young woman felt a knot tighten in her stomach and there was an undercurrent of worry in her voice as she spoke. What is it?, she asked.
I heard you this morning. How did things go with your mom?, asked Tina.
Ugh, Bette sighed. Well, there was a lot of talking, T. She did a lot of talking.
Thanks for all the detail, babe., said Tina.
You are more than welcome., said Bette.
So how are you feeling about everything?, asked Tina.
Bette was quiet for a moment, reflecting on her past and present, nuzzling her cheek against her girlfriends flaxen locks.
To tell you the truth, Im pretty numb right now. My mothershe told me that she left because she felt like she was suffocating. That shed been really depressed and suicidal before she hooked up with David., said Bette.
David? Was that the guy she was..seeing?, asked Tina.
Yeah, said Bette. When she spoke next, her voice was nearly a whisper.
She married him, T.
She married him? Wow. How long ago did that happen?, asked Tina.
I dont know. I didnt even ask. I was just so shocked that she got married and didnt tell me. But then again, she hasnt spoken to me in three years. But you know what? She was at my high school graduation. She said shes seen me a few times over the past few years. Shed show up and watch me, but she never said anything to me., said Bette.
Tinas brow furrowed and chewed on her lower lip before asking her next question. Do you believe her?
The question hung in the air, its weight bearing down on the caramel womans spirit. The memory book of her mind replayed the sincerity of her mothers soft, blue eyes and the pleading timbre of her mothers voice and contrasted with the emptiness shed felt on long, lonely nights.
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hehehehe! Think I’ll use that “spoon tap” at my gf’s family dinner tonight, thanks! BTW, the chapter was great as per usual, thank you…
Dear, I have given up reading fav fics that are over 3 pages as it just takes too long to download with the new page system and my slow internet connection. For you I break my rule. I look forward to reading it – Really enjoy your work. thanks much
Nice to have you back MTS!!!
Where u been buddy?!?!?!?! It’s been a while, I’ve missed this story! Great update though and nice and long, just how I like it. Post soon mate!
yes! thanx for posting, have been looking forward to your posts all week. please post again soon.
hey! welcome back my friend…you were missed! and you’re forgiven for making it up!!!!
Amazing post as usual! Thanks for posting, now I don’t have to bother you anymore on IM. :) This was a great read, especially after my final today. Now I gotta start working (Poo!) so hopefully I won’t be so addicted to your story anymore. yeah…right…
YES! finally…i have been waiting for days for this, and it didn’t disappoint! you’ve just got me craving more, hehe! ;) it’s a vicious cycle, lol! damn you for addicting me to your stories!
xXx
This just gets better with each chapter- if thats even possible. This was the best thing for me to read before I go to bed- maybe I’ll dream of trading places with one of them for the bathroom scene hehe Please post soon!! :)
Nice update! And, just like Stella, I break my rule ‘no alternate universe B&T’ for your story. :-)
I’ve been anxiously waiting for your new post. It’s been way too long and I’ve been going through withdrawals. Please don’t make us wait that long any longer. This is a great, great story!
MTS!!! Oh how I’ve missed thee! What an amazing chapter. Twelve pages, I feel like it’s my birthday! I love how you had a little bit of everything in here. But then again I’d love anything you wrote. ;) Thank you!! Please don’t stay away for too long. I need a constant dose of your version of my favorite couple. :)
glad that you’re back! this chapter was awesome, I love the idea of B&T desperately trying to get some time to themselves, even while at dinner with Bette’s family. Please post more asap!
I’ve missed your story!!! Where have you been??? I love reading an extra long chapter–12 pages is beautiful!!! Can’t wait for the next post!!!
Thank you for posting again, I have missed this story. Love it so much. Keep it up!
Megga- Thank you for the long chapter! Nowww. . .uhhh. . .you can move on to the “fork tapping!” Haha, please post again soon!
thanks for the insanely long post! i love reading you write them growing up together, so great, just so great!
WOW! Twelve wonderful pages to help me get past my work week from hell! Amazing as always! Thanks for making my weekend brighter!
always my fav :)
Get those spoons tapping…..can’t wait for your next post
great update as always! there’s nothing better than waking up and finding a new chapter of this wonderful story! i’m going back to bed, perhaps i’ll find a new post when i wake up again? :-)
Thanks for the great AND long update! Now I get to go analyse financials woooopeeeee!!! Yeah Right! :(
It amazes me how you can make the wait SO worth it. This is such a gentle, moving story. Thanks, MTS!
Thanks so much for this journey. The way you have the two of them adjusting to the others cirmustances is amazing. The love and tenderness works so well for them. Thanks for the long chapter I don’t know how you do it but thanks so much
LOL…spoon-tapping…that’s so good…
Hey Keno! Missed ya! Great chapter…can’t wait for the spoon tapping!
Sorry its early here…I meant to say More Than Satisfied! LOL
this story is so great. I know you have a life, I just wish there were more than 24 hours in a day so you could write more. Thank you for what you do write, and more if you can.
Lab Coat!!! So incredibly happy to see your post :) I have to run but will read later when I can savor each word and comment then, ok? Be good!
They are both how’d you put it…hornballs. I wouldn’t like it any other way. Glad to see you back. Woo, can’t wait for more!
i’m in heaven. 12 pages of pure happiness. thanks so much. i really love how you have these two learning about each other and growing up together. you have a bit of everything for us. so glad you are back. please post soon.
Love the spoon tapping idea. Please continue soon.
Oh i’ll tap the spoon for u any time B.. hehehe
Great chapter, glad to see you post again, and wow 12 pages, now that i like..
K
So glad to see your post. Wonderful as always. They are just so sweet and perfect together. Love your story, don’t stay away too long.
MTS… knock 3 times and baby we all will be there… loved this and i loved the length… thats i needed a break from my busy week… please continue when you can
12 great pages OMG!!!!!!!!!! you more than made up for being MIA I just hate it when life gets in the way of a great fan fic story try to keep that to a minuamal lol sorry butcherd the spelling
Hey! Missed you…a lot! I love this Bette and Tina! Please post soon, I want to hear some spoon tappin’! THnx!
Marvelous as always! …Just when I thought the girls were all tapped out :)
can’t wait til supper time!
MTS,
Happy reading!! Is definitely the best description of how I feel reading your story.
You have masterly created a truly beautiful and wonderful drama.
The love shines out of this story like a beacon welcoming sailors home; safe and sound.
You take the most mundane of circumstances and add your sparkle and magic to make them wondrous and breathtaking.
Can’t wait to see where you take me next.
A Happy Reader and Loyal Fan!
I think there will be some fireworks at dinner if both of Bette’s parents are there.
Wow! Great chapter, you never disappoint me :-)
PLEASE TAP THREE TIMES…GREAT CHAPTER POST SOON…THANKS
Good chapter. This is amazing and can’t wait to see the tap 3 times. Please post soon, thanks!