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The Roommates: Chapter 34
Bette couldnt believe her ears. How had discussing lunch with Sidney come to this? Where did she go wrong? She was only trying to do the right thing by everyone and somehow shed fucked up everything.
Baby, you are never second to anyone. You are the most important thing in my life. Dont do this, T. Dont doubt my love for you. Please, babe.
Bette, you kept her card. You set up a secret lunch meeting with her that you didnt even tell me about. How is that supposed to make me feel? How can I possibly feel like Im the most important thing to you?
Bette felt like shed been slapped. Tina did have a point. She had put Sidneys feelings above Tinas. How the ***** am I going to get out of this one?
The tears wouldnt stop coming and Bette struggled to speak against the waves of emotion crashing into her. Youre right, T. Im sorry, baby. I should have known better. Please, lets just sit down and talk. We can talk about it and everything will be okay.
Thats not how it works, Bette. You just cant erase things with a few words.
Bettes shoulders shook with sobs. She didnt know what else to do. This was killing her. It pained her to see Tina so upset, but it hurt even more that she was the cause of the trouble. This scene was all too familiar for her. The blonde woman in her life running out on her because shed made a mistake. Images of her mothers rapid departure flashed through her mind and as she cried, the tears she shed were for the both past and the present.
Tina located her i-pod, her vision blurry with tears as she made her way to the door.
T.please dont go., Bette uttered between sobs. Im sorry. Please dont go.
The pain in her girlfriends voice felt like a dagger in Tinas heart, but she was too busy dealing with own hurt to soothe Bettes wounds. A fresh set of tears streamed down her face as her tear-filled voice replied. I..just cant do this Bette. I cant., she said, before closing the door behind her.
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(83 votes, average: 4.27 out of 5)
SEE YA HOOCHIE SIDNEY LOVE THE STORY
Wow MTS, there’s so much drama to deal with in this chapter. My heart sank more than once. You write so beautifully. Thank you so much for finally bringing closure for Sidney and that whole mess in such a touching way. I’m glad that Tina got over it and knew that Bette needed her. Thank you so much for writing, your story is the first one I always look for. Can’t wait for your next one!
I’m so glad Tina went there – the start of a relationship can be so difficult. Awesome chapter!
Phenominal! I love it!
I’m speechless…. that was perfect and I’m sitting here witht the silliest smile on my face!! lol Can’t wait for more and thank you so much for this chap…. and from now on I just might have to read this in a cold bath ;) Thanx for the suggestion lol
absolutely poetic, you’ve outdone yourself. If this was an opera, this chapter would be a brilliantly painful crescendo. amazing.
amazing, i have been loving this story from the beginning and i can’t wait to see what directions you will take with it to telling thier parents and furthering their emotional connection to one another. bravo!! bravo!!
Wonderful chapter. I’m glad Sidney understand and walk away, now Bette and Tina time to have talk and let the love began. Please post soon, thank you!
This is how all these stories should go. Tell me if I am wrong but is this not a Bette & Tina Fanficion. If so or even if not Bette & Tina Forever,no bette & Shane or Bette & Jenny I Mean really can you really see it? So keep up the fantastic story and keep me & the rest of B&T Fans happy. Keep up the good work.
“…a few tears fell from her eyes as she realized what she would miss.” – Great coda.
I hope B&T can carry on from here with trust and love.
Thanks for another chapter.
Love this story and the college drama!!!
YAYYYYYY!!!! I was rally worried there for awhile. Thank you for a great chapter. Please continue.
fabulous . simply fabulous … can’t wait for the next chapter … thanx
I love this story!!! A chapter can NEVER be too long!!! Great update!!!
Thank you for this Awesome story Pls post soon I just have to read some of the story.
Sorry it took me so long to comment, but that was one of the best chapters you’ve written. It was moving and simply perfect!
Who says size doesn’t matter?! The longer the better. Never apologize for that. Actually, see if you can out do that one, with one that’s even longer! (Smile) Great update. Love the connection our ladies have. More loving for our ladies, please.
oh to be a freshman again. all the drama, all the angst.
Now onto the make up loving!
I am simply spellbound by your writing! Your chapters can never be long enough for me!
Wow — fantastic.
Horray. She’s out of the picture! :D
great update chick..!!!
Great chapter! I really felt for Bette. I’m glad Sidney’s finally out of the picture.
Buh-bye, Sid.
sweet as!!!! lovin your work ;)
wohooooooo i love to wake up and realize that u posted a new chapter , i love this fic… Thanks again for all ur efforts to entertain us it is a wonderful well written story.
i love this story!!!its was long and i still cant get enough lol…. ur doing a great job with this story…hope to see another long chapter soon!:)
IT keeps getting better and better !
“This one is also pretty long. Just a warning.” I wish to find this warning everyday:) Your writting is great!
what a wonderful ending to the chapter. you know how to pull our heart strings when it comes to Bette and Tina. Thank you for sharing.
I second the starting of a petition!! Hehe…here I am, exhausted due to the fact that I haven’t slept in nearly two days…I blame it all on midterms!! Its ok though, I have your story and other’s to put a smile on my face at the end of each day:-D Loved this chapter by the way…its just so cool how both Tina and Bette instinctively know when one needs the other. They’re so adorable. Thanks so much again. Keep up the excellent work! Mahalos!
AAAAA ~ you said this chapter wouldn’t make me lose my breath, MTS!! …(note to self: buy inhaler for future chapters!). Hey, I apologize for altering your view of a banana…if it makes you feel better, I was able to actually eat one again after a couple of months :) Thanks so much for making this TiBette heart happy ~ one can never have enough sweet moments between B&T! Write on…
Just a sec while I unglue my eyes from the screen…that’s better. Wow, you just keep bringin’ it. Oh, and long is good!!
HORRAYYYYYYY….the love of our miss tina shines through….this is such a wonderuflly written story…great post..
Excellent! I am “MOre Than Satisfied”, but not enough for you to stop-more please!
Great job I am so glad you brought them together your writting is excellent..Thank you for the update please continue I love that you are a romantic…
wohoooooo indeed! i love this bette and tina.
Wow! That was truly amazing. Thanks for getting rid of Sidney.
Dear More Than, You capture the angst of freshman year so well! I think you must have lived down the hall from me! Thanks for the story….
Oh lordy that was awesome. Onward please!
too damm beautiful, and f*cking cute – Thank you I love this story x
i love this fic … great update! :-)
A wonderfull chapter…
What a wonderful story I am so caught up in your story thanks you have a wonderful way of bring these two to life and I feel that I too have seen it with my own eyes. Thanks
you rock!!!
Great chapter! I enjoy reading your works each time I’m stressed. I hope you’ll continue writing! ;)
Okay, some writers do great descriptions. Some are masters of dialogue. Some have a knack for conveying insights of human behavior. Some write gripping drama. Some are so incredibly creative they take you away. And some write amazing sex scenes.
And then there’s you. MTS, I feel like you’re All That! I so love this story and how well you convey it. Always a pleasure to read your chapters. Thank you!
I can’t believe I fell behind! Argh, the pressure.