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The Roommates: Chapter Seventeen
Bette started to speak again, her voice laced with tears. Tina turned to face her, realizing that her lover was now upset. II dont even know what to say. I justyou have been through so much lately. We have been through so much. I.I.just cant believe.. The emotions were apparent on her caramel-colored cheeks as Bettes heartfelt tears slowly made their way down her face.
Tinas emotions were paralyzed in the immobilizing depression that had become all too familiar to her in the past few weeks. She knew that relaying this information to Bette would hurt, but she hadnt realized how much. Tina sat up and placed her back against the wall. She pulled Bettes head into her lap and stoked her temples. I never meant to hurt you, Bette. I just.I have no one to talk to. Have you ever felt like.like you were walking around on eggshells inside your own skin? Im always so afraid that Im going to slip up with someone. Like Ill reveal too much of myself. I cant talk to my parents, or Eric, or even my other friends without feeling so edgy and uneasy. Its different with you, Bette. I can really talk to you. You really see who I am and you are still my friend. I had to tell you. I had to talk to you about it.
Bette nodded, her mind still a dizzying array of thoughts and unprocessed feelings. I understand. Im sorry Im so upset, I just.I dont know. It hit me kind of hard. I just cant believe..are you sure about this?
No. Im not sure at all. Tina replied.
Then how do you know? Why do you think, said Bette. Not really wanting to use the word pregnant.
Because my period is two weeks late. We always get ours at around the same time. I remember when you got yours last because you were complaining about the cramps., said Tina.
Bette smiled weakly. Yeah, you made me tea and held me all night long. I am a big baby, huh?
Yeah, you are. And because you are such a baby, it really stands out in my mind. I havent taken a test yet, but I have a bad feeling about this.
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(89 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Have just caught up with your story, brilliant and superb, also a big thank you for how quickly you post your chapters…
Oh boy…the drama just intensified…you rock girl…powerful writing…love and passion!
“It’s too bad this couldn’t be your baby.” Wow, now if that doesn’t say they’re already together, I don’t know what does. But, to make it official would be good. Now with Eric out of the picture, somewhat, maybe Bette can finally make up her mind, who she wants to be with. Please post soon. But, just know that is can’t be soon enough. Thanks, though.
oh man.. poor Tina.. maybe she’ll have a miscarriage? what will this do to her and Bette?
wow and the surprises keep coming please post another chapter soon.
Oh no….didn’t see that coming. Can’t wait to see how the story unfolds!
You have me so hooked. I think you’re gonna have to produce two chapters a day. Supply & Demand. Holla
OMG…okay i could really use another update tonight…this is too good to only get 1 a day…come on…please…..
Wow! Really really good chapter! You’ve got me hooked for sure!Post more soon!
I’m so hooked on this story!!! Please don’t keep us in suspense!!!
Damn pregnant man this is really interesting and excited story I want to read. What are they going to do, man this is bad and scary, hope they will figure out what they have to do with it. Excellent chapter, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
“This knowledge of a potential life, created out of the miserable combination of angst and desperation that was Tina’s current reality, shook the core of Bette’s subconscious and sent all of her preconceived notions crashing into the abyss around her.
Jealousy chased anger. Anger chased sympathy. Sympathy chased compassion. Compassion found love and love melted Bette’s heart and compelled her to snap out of her daze and comfort the woman that still owned her troubled heart.”
THAT is incredible writing!
I’m in awe…really!
I amhe so addicted to this story. Please post soon.
Do you realize that because of this story and “Foolish Moves” I’m checking this site every hour looking for new stories. I’m addicted to so many of the stories here. I’ve read a lot of amazing B/T stories but this one is by far the most addictive I’ve personally read. Hurry up and get these two together already…lol.
Keep up the amazing story you’re doing an incredible job!
Noooo! Wow you keep surprising me. Great chapter I love the line, about jealousy chasing anger, etc ending in compassion. Really beautiful yo’re doing a great job. Congrats.
I have class in the morning but I stayed up to read this story. As the story progress it’s getting better and more intense.
4:45 a.m. and couldn’t sleep…must have used my spidey senses to know you posted! All caught up [love the frequency of your posts, btw!] with the story and as always, excellent work!! [handing you a No-Doz and Red Bull to crank out more, more, MoreThan Satisfied!
can’t wait for more am loving your story, great drama, i hope they find a way to be tog..:)
I love the way your write and your imagination sure is working overtime. These twists and turns are most excellent.
Well shite, this is not what I was hoping for. Another zinger.
*fainted*………………………………………*sat up suddenly* Holy SHIT ! I forgot to comment…great job, great chapter. Thank you…..*fainted again*
I am so impressd that you have come up with yet another b & t beginning. I love this one!
omg!!! it cant be!!
thans for posting so soon. I am addicted to this story
alright you guys , get some beauty sleep!!have to say that was a surprise.. didnt expect that. what a story its unreal, thanks mts, cheers!
*falls off chair*
holy shit it’s positive…this should be interesting.
Oh my god, my jaw is still on the floor…. can’t believe you left us with such a cliffhanger! ;) Please post again soon!! =0)
Pregnant…..damn!
Oh my god. Been there seen the 2 lines. What are they going to do now?
No Way. I can’t be. They are gonna have a hell of a time. Well maybe it could be wrong you still got that .1% left, right.
Run, Bette, run!
Really, though, thanks for posting another chapter in the continuing saga of the roommates. I guess they could keep the baby in the dorm room with them?
Oh my God this is going me Crazy WOW I don’t no what to say I can feel the they gonna be okay for Tina if she pregnant Bette is her for her thank you for this good story Nice.
ERIC!! That bastard!! LoL…Love this piece…update soon please:-D
Tina…take another one…those things can be wrong sometimes…please let it be wrong
Ok I now have people at work addicted to this story!!! She can’t be pregnant!! Ya killin me here!!! I love the story, great job!!! But please no baby YET!!! :)
Posative! Crapness in suits! What are they gonna do? oh I want Bette and Tina to be together… :( pretty please!
WHAT!?! NOOOOOO! Will Bette & Tina EVER be together and HAPPY? I am totally addicted to this story, please post again soon.
NOOOOOOOOO…………
Help….I can’t breath……
I’m too upset to get a sleep now…it’s 1.30am… when r u gonna post another one?? Pls post soon.. :(