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The Roommates: Chapter Sixteen
Tina made small talk with Eric until she sat down on a bench outside the dorm. As her body relaxed into the bench, she heard him say, Tina, I need to talk to you about something.
Tina swallowed hard. Theres something I need to talk to you about too.
Okay, you go first. he said.
No, go ahead. You first. Tina replied.
Eric took a deep breath. Okay, well..I think we should see other people.
What?!, asked Tina.
Tina, this distance thing is killing me. I love you but youre so far away. Its so hard being so far apart. He explained.
So, youre breaking up with me? Four years and you do this over the phone?, Tina didnt know why she was so upset, but she was. He had taken the control away from her. Hed stolen her thunder in the conversation.
Tina, please dont be mad. I just think this is for the best.
Tina was a little smarter than that. Who is she?, she asked.
Tina, this isnt about anybody else. This is about he began.
Who.is she?, Tina repeated.
Eric hesitated. He knew he was caught. He sighed deeply before continuing. Her name is Bethany. But were just friends. I just want to see where things might lead.
You *****! You have no idea what Ive been going through trying to be committed to you!, Tina spat.
Tina, Im sorry. Im not sleeping with her or anything. I just want to give us some space so , he started.
Space? You are on the other side of the country, Eric. I think thats more than enough space.
Tina, come on. Dont get angry. Calm down. Lets discuss this. Said Eric.
Suddenly, Tina didnt feel like talking. She felt as though her energy core had suddenly been removed. She had no energy left for this conversation. She was drained. Eric had turned things around on her and stolen her thunder. He had taken control. She had nothing left to say.
Her voice came out surprisingly calm and detached. Eric, I have nothing more to say to you right now. Just leave me alone. Ive gotta go. She heard Eric calling her name before she hit the End button, but she didnt care. Tina felt the all-too-familiar depression sink in around her as she turned off her phone and headed upstairs.
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(95 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
WoW what a great story! nice twist
Holy shit, now that was a cliffhanger! Great job!
I knew it…I just knew she might get pregnant when her and Eric had sex…I’m good…PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!!
Talk about a cliffhanger…. please, please, please post again soon!!
Really intense hurts me to read this that Tina is pregnant what Bette is gonna do about that Oh my God PLs. you need to write more PLS. Thank you and that’s is really sad for Tina Great story MorethanSatisfied.
wow have to say that I did not see that comming but I love it.
It’s the stress, it’s the stress, that’s why she’s late!! Please let aunty flow visit.
This story just gets better and better!
OMG…….this is gettin better and better……continue soon…..
oh shit!! i hope not ihope gia is right that its the stress of it all.love your story as always.
NOOOOOOOO!!Tina can’t be pregnant! I love this story please post soon!
You have got to be kiddin me. There is no way in hell I thought that was coming. Ha! You are too good.
Holy shamumu! That’s a twist I was NOT expecting. Can I say again I LOVE THIS STORY!!! you ARE the best!!!
holy pumpernickel! will she keep it or not??? and will she and Bette make love again before the break???
good job!! way to leave us hanging…….Please continue. love this story.
Wow. That was a shocker. The possibilty of Tina being pregnant is just a catalyst for drama. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Love your story. Just hope Tina’s not pregnant. But, it’s a good reason for Bette to stay and comfort her for the week. Wink! Wink!
oh take the prego test, let it be neg. and move on with some b and t love!! post sooon!!!
Thanks, but MORE MORE MORE !
….umm…think you could post again today? *blushes*
pls don’t stop,i love the way you just draw us in. next pls
OMG
I stumbled upon this website lastnight and I already can’t wait for chapter 17, Hurry!!! And please don’t let T be prego! I need more soon!! :)
I agree with Christy, how about nother post today! :)
Damn! You are so good. Loved it!!!
Nooooooooo!!!! Kidding great cliff hanger, dude I am so surprised. Great job.
wow
whoa..holy shit…f@#k…that is all that is going through my head at the moment…Absolutely awesome…more please…soon
Well, I didn’t see that coming.
I think Tina might be too much trouble for Bette.
Sidney is looking better and better.
Thanks!
Shit shit Tina’s pregnant man this is crazy and good, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
You have become my bed-time story….Even if the chapter is suspence filled and I want more…I love where this story is going, and I’m commenting even before I’ve read this chapter, Coz I wont to keep it for tonights reading ;)
keep up the excellent work!
I must confess that I am also addicted to these characters! You are “da bomb” ! Please post soon!
NOOOOOOOOO….Tina can’t be pregnant during the best years of life…College life..My jaw really dropped when I saw “PREGNANT”… Let my aunty who’s visiting me now to visit Tina..so that I can go swimming and Tina will live her college life pregnant less ;)
WHOA that was one helluva cliffhanger,please more.
Always remember to use protection kids….