Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
The Second Chance
"At the end of the road everyone finds themselves wondering what went wrong. What could they have done different with their lives. So my question to you is, what could you have done different with your life?"
The voice was booming and loud and it startled Bette who looked around the plain white room in fear and anxiety.
"Who’s there? Where am I?" Bette said desperately. She didn’t know what happened, one minute she’s on her way to Angie’s 10th birthday party at Tina’s house and next thing she knows she’s here.
"Let’s call it limbo," the deep voice said echoing off the walls, "you’ve gotten in a car accident pretty fatal."
"What? I’m dead? No, that can’t be right, I need to be at Angie’s birthday party okay, it’s hard enough losing Tina after she didn’t believe me with the Kelly fiasco, Angie is the only reason I live," Bette said desperately, "I handle seeing Tina with that bitch Kate just for her. She’ll be so disappointed if I don’t show up, please!"
"But you did show up Bette," the voice said, "you were getting down your car when the drunk driver hit you."
In the distance Bette faintly heard Tina’s voice yelling, "Bette! Bette! Someone call 911! Kate take Angie inside now!"
Then she heard Angie’s piercing cry, "MOMMY!"
"Hang on Bette, please hang on!" Tina said desperately.
Bette distinctly heard the love in her voice. She knew it. Even though they had broken up five years before and Tina had been with Kate for two years, Bette heard that love. Tina still loved her.
"Please, God, or whoever you are, please let me go back," Bette said.
"You don’t think Tina will take you back now do you?" The voice said.
"She still loves me I know it," Bette said.
"But love alone is not enough," the voice said.
"Then what do I do!" Bette said.
"I’m offering you something that I’ve never offered anyone before Bette," the voice said, "you are a good person and you lost everything that means anything to you because of a lie and a circumstantial video. You don’t deserve this."
"So what then? I just give up on life? I just accept death? Is that what you expect me to do?" Bette said ferociously.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.


TBC!:)
This is interesting and like it. Please post more, thanks!
You are kidding, right? PPS!!!
Shit this is so good. You must continue please!
yeah please do continue !!
Please continue. Wonderful idea
Continue…Yes, yes,yes!!!!
Humbled by death…hmmmm…Well – I’m all for a full tilt smiling Bette…which will make Tina smile…and so on and so forth! Go for it!
Definitely continue! Thank you like it already. Thank you.
wow this is awesome, im so excited to see how Bette handles everything.. great idea and pls continue.. im sad ur not finishing ur other stories i like them a lot but maybe u will go back to them at some point I hope… but on with this one… thx tb24 oh and pls tell me u guys are still doing I write sins… that is a fantastic story pls continue it.
Well done Bette.Great start,please continue.I love all of your stories.
I love how all this is starting out. I’m really excited to read more !
Me likey a lot. Thanks for the awesome start buttercup!!
TBC! absolutely TBC! :-) good start! Though I was a bit worried you backward the story till IC not created Tibette :-p lol kidding! If that’s the case I don’t think I’ll be here ;-)
Wow! This is brilliant. I’m feeling my forehead too…can’t believe there will not be any cheating…and the new Bette..
Go for it!
Yesssssssss. I like this one more than the last two you started. Can’t wait to see how this goes…
brilliant, but i’ve already told you that LOL.
Wow this would make a good side series for the L Word that way Ilene could hav brought Dana back! IM LOVING THIS! Your very talented :D
Yes bette definitely should have told Tina at that moment on the show..thankfully you’re not IC lol